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Hello and welcome to the last topic thread for 'Mystic Wings'. Thank you for joining us.

In case I haven't already voiced my sincere appreciation for all the support I have received I'd like to take a moment now to say how I have loved all the wonderful comments and encouragement I have had during 'Mystic Wings' and 'Dragon's Moon'. *deep breath*

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That pretty much says it all - Thank you and I love you guys!

Love is all around the world tonight!!!

#1 May 18th 2006, 9:22am

Inda

Ok I see she's with child. Celena is pergeant with dilly child oh **!!!! well it's going to be ruff oh poor baby folken. And Van why does he hate him so?? Is it Dornkirk influance??? god that guy needs a life. Looking forward to the third book come on!!!!

#2 May 18th 2006, 9:50am

Kiya

That was a really good ending to Mystic Wings because it was from Folken's view which was new. I am glad thought that Folken is not inclinded to take Hitomi by force for the mate thing, makes him seem less of a monster. I really liked that, but I do love more the views from Hitomi and Van, but a change was nice^_^

Man, a lot was brought up in there. Celena pregnant? That is someting intresting, and I have no idea who to feel sorrier for. Allen, who just now has his sister back and is carrying the child of an enemy, Celena who probably should not be having children (let alone with Dilandau) and Dilandau because he is off his rocker completly, which is pretty scary to me. Man, if you had him start wiling about "Van, you cut my face" I am going to laugh though lol

At first, I thought that I would being to be worry about Folken wanting Hitomi to get to van through and worst of that is he sent Dilandau to do the job, but I think she is going to be able to take care of herself, or at least I hope so.....

Something I just thought about....Folken was saying that he was uncomfortable of the fact that Van is so totally out to kill him, and the first thing I thought was "because you killed the tow of your's parents, DUH!" but because he is so unhappy, not ** about Van's lust for brotherly blood, is it possible that Folken did not kill their parents? I know it is unlikely you are going to answer that Sapphirefly, but just thought that I would throw that out there and see if anyone saw that.

Either way, fantastic end and I am eagerly awaiting Book III!!!

#3 May 18th 2006, 10:46am

Inda

It is going to make you wonder how Dilandau will get Hitomi? will he drag her parents or maybe go after Marlene. I think Folken is mor a coward to face his bother one on one. Yes he's knows that Van is stronger than him but at least face him. More and More you think about it did Folken really kill his parents or was it Dornkrik controling him.In any caseThe more I read it the more folken sounds that now he really doesn't care what happen just as long as Dornkrik gets what he wants. So I'll be reading it again when I get home

#4 May 18th 2006, 11:53am

Snowtigress

I absolutely love the way you make words flow like they do. Very nice epilogue. And Celena? Pregnant? Can't wait to see that one. Its funny how Dilandu's like all crazy without her but is so violent towards in like in Dragon's Moon. Celena really knows how to pick them huh?

I can't wait to read MoaG. Will it be 24 chapters long too?

Congrats btw, on completing the two books. And I'm glad you didn't do what a lot of authors do and not update for months on end. Thank You so much for that!

#5 May 18th 2006, 12:03pm

Sapphirefly

Thank you everyone!! I love writing for you guys. You make it so fun.

But I have to take a moment to defend Folken. After all, he is one of my cute characters and I feel compelled to defend him. What I'm about to say isn't clearly stated, but implied. I didn't feel like I needed to say it out loud, but maybe I did. We'll see. Okay, so remember how Dryden said that Folken's two elements were Darkness and Air? Van said that when he used air to blow the doors off when he was escaping with Celena that he just used it and his wings came out. That's all it took. If Folken fights Van and uses air ... Folken says that if he grows his wings again - he'll die. Not only is Van hellbent on killing him, and totally powerful enough to do it, but if he uses his own powers (air) - he'll die.

#6 May 18th 2006, 12:20pm

jossi-31

This chapter reminded me soooo much of episode 23 when Folken and Hitomi talk at the fountain when he's on the good site. I think Folken is going to end up thinking of Hitom as a sister and that Hitomi will convince Van not to kill Folken. Just like in the series :)

Sapphirefly, I can't thank you enought for this story. It was so much fun to read and it was so fun anticipating the next chapters. Thank you

#7 May 18th 2006, 12:42pm

Snowtigress

Hmm....too wishy washy for me if it ends up that way. Van's gotta atleast get the chance to kick the crap outa him...or try to atleast. He never really actually did that in the series, cept in the movie. What a kick ** movie. Took a few viewings to get to really like it but after awhile I fell in love with the artwork then the movie itself. ::sigh:: What a great series.

#8 May 18th 2006, 2:39pm

jossi-31

how old is celena?

#9 May 18th 2006, 2:51pm

Darkia

I agree, I like Folken, but yet at the same time, I dislike him. He has his own good qualities unless if you read the manga version then he's a complete jerk! (nicest word I am using.) For those of you who have read the manga you'd know what I'm talking about. I like Folken and feel sorry for him because well, he's the oldest and the heir to the throne or in this case, just the oldest and things are expected more out of the oldest child then the younger one. And Van just accused him of killing his parents when someone else from the organization could have, not nesessarily Folken. Yes, he was wrong to try to make Hitomi "mate" with him but you kind of need to understand his reasons for it. I'm not saying that he was right to do it, I'm just saying that I understand his reasons for it.

I know I said this twice already, but I'm going to say it again, I really do think that this should be made in to a book and not a fan fiction. It would be interesting to read and see how the characters would differ from the book from the fiction. I mean the names would have to be changed of course, but it could be done.

#10 May 18th 2006, 5:08pm

Missing White Wings 15

I have to agree that I can kina of see two sides to Folken. He is still the “bad guy,” but somehow I am beginning to think that Folken didn’t really kill their parents. I mean if he did then he shouldn’t have any problem with killing Van, but he does. He says that he doesn’t want to Hill Van even though he knows Van World want to kill him. If he was able to murder their parents then he World be able to easily kill Van without any problems.

So Celena is pregnant?! Holy crap I never thought I would see that one. Wow... Dilandau as a father... Hmmm... now how did that come about. Poor Allen. He finally gets his sister back after God only knows how long and now he's goign to find out(if he doesn't already know)that his sister is pregnant.

#11 May 18th 2006, 6:53pm

Sapphirefly

Someone just asked me something interesting in a review. Everyone always remember - there is no substitute for reviewing^_^!

Anyway, they asked me if I planned to write a book past book III. Well, this is something that has crossed my mind. I've been wondering what I'll do as well when I finish MoaG. Welp, here's my official answer to that.

Once I finish MoaG, then that will be the end of the overall plot arch, so if I were to write a Fourth book, I would either be starting a whole new plot (BIG PLOT - like a 2nd trilogy), or I would be doing an 'off to the side'/one shot type of thing. After I'm done MoaG, I'm probably going to be pretty tired of writing Van and Hitomi. The series will be somewhere in the neighbourhood of 300,000 words, which in case you didn't know - is long. Both DM, and MW are novel size, according to publishing company standards. So, the thing is, for me to continue after writing this much and being as tired as I know I'm going to be - there would have to be a LOT of encourangement for me to do so. I don't really want to describe how much encouragement, but there would have to be a LOT of it. A LOT! So, if you want me to keep going after Mark of a Goddess - then after I finish it - you'd better not be quiet about it - you'll all have to be good and noisy.

And remember that there is no substitute for reviews^_^!

How old is Celena? I think she's Hitomi and Dilly's age.

#12 May 18th 2006, 6:58pm

Snowtigress

Ah, but the way Sapph writes him makes him so loathesome that you love him! He's not like Dilandu who we all know is one card short of a full deck. (does that makes sense?) That's what I get atleast. Even in the anime/manga he's probably the most contradictory character! It's great!

I still believe Folken killed his family. He did it in the movie. He destroyed his kingdom in the anime. I wouldn't be surprised if he did it in this story. The only reason I think he doesn't want to kill his brother is because of that big brother/little brother connection also like in the anime and somewhat in the movie. Van never forgave him really in either until he was dead really or when he felt him die.

lalallala I LOVE THIS STORY SAPPHIREFLY!!!!

#13 May 18th 2006, 7:00pm

jossi-31

So, if Hitomi can control water...can she create storms?

#14 May 21st 2006, 1:03pm

Sapphirefly

Yup! That's what Dryden said in chapter 18. Yup.

#15 May 21st 2006, 1:58pm

Inda

So when do you plan on uploading MoaG??? hope it's soon.

#16 May 21st 2006, 2:02pm

Sapphirefly

Hiya! I plan to update this upcoming Thursday.

Look forward to it! ^_^!

#17 May 21st 2006, 4:10pm

jossi-31

question: Is air triggered the wings then can they ( Folken an Van) use their power (air)? How come the wings were never triggered before when they used air?

#18 May 23rd 2006, 12:15pm

Sapphirefly

Kay, I can definitely answer this. Folken has been 'experimented' on, because they were trying to find out if it was possible for a Tarot user to turn into the animal that was their symbol. It wasn't possible before Folken was experimented on. And so because Van has Folken's blood, he can do it too. I think I talk about this in chapter one of Mark of a Goddess, so you'll get more detail then. Cheers!

#19 May 23rd 2006, 12:44pm

jossi-31

Put isen't he slowly losing Folkens blood? or will he be able to do this forever

#20 May 23rd 2006, 12:47pm

Sapphirefly

Ah ah ah! I would love to answer this question, but unfortunately ... I can't. Things will get answered in their own due time.

#21 May 23rd 2006, 1:14pm

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