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Ashuri-san
Topic: Idea for Story...
Hey, I was just wondering what others thought about my idea for a story. DO NOT STEAL MY IDEA OR YOU WILL HAVE TO DEAL WITH A MURDEROUS ASHIEYU-SAN!!!!! Let me tell you, you don't want to deal with me when I'm murderous. Ok, so please just let me know if you would read it or if it sounds good.

This is just the summary:

What would happen if the life as Sakura knew it faded away? What if it all disappeared? What would happen if Syaoran, the one she loves, and the Sakura cards were gone? And the worst part, what would happen if Sakura was the only one who remembered the past?

Ok, so I may have it be a card that's wreaking havoc but I'm not sure at the moment. But Sakura has Syaoran as her cute boyfriend and they are all happy and all. She has the Sakura cards, Yue/Yukito, and Kero. Her life is just like in the manga/anime. But then while she's sleeping everything changes, so when she wakes up everything is totally different. I don't know everything that will be different, but you get the point. I'll add Syaoran into the story later on, and he won't ever remember Sakura. Sakura is the only one who remembers everything in the past.

Please tell me if you have heard this story before, and if you have please give me a link to it, since I don't wanna be stealing someone else's idea. Thankies!!!

#1 Dec 20th 2005, 9:30pm . Edited Dec 20th 2005, 9:31pm
CataclysmicReality
sounds like something that can be easily accomplished by Sakura somehow falling into the Create Card and somehow it creates this new world that it has fed off another person's writtings of what their ideal existance would be, and that person is someone who doesn't know about Sakura's lifestyle.

It would be an interesting thing that way.

But I wouldn't even think of stealing your idea because I haven't the time as is. I need to finish what I've already started.

Dang writter's block.

#2 Dec 20th 2005, 11:21pm
MoshiMoshiQueen
The plot reminds me of the movie Forgotten. I didn't like the movie, but I'm sure you could pull if off successfully as a fanfic.

And CataclusmicReality's explanation reminds me of when Naoki gets a hold of one of the clow cards and starts creating her own fantasy that comes to life.

#3 Dec 22nd 2005, 7:35pm
MoshiMoshiQueen
The plot reminds me of the movie Forgotten. I didn't like the movie, but I'm sure you could pull if off successfully as a fanfic.

And CataclusmicReality's explanation reminds me of when Naoki gets a hold of one of the clow cards and starts creating her own fantasy that comes to life.

#4 Dec 22nd 2005, 7:35pm
Lord Archive
The idea reminds me of the 'World Without Love' Sakura experienced when Yue nearly defeated her during the judgement. That somehow the seal on the cards was broken and left Sakura, causing those people around her to slowly forget the existance of the cards and then those they love. The closer to Sakura, the quicker the effect. One possibile way to do this is that Sakura failed to seal the Void card in movie 2, and that destroyed the seal on the cards. With Void's victory in regaining her friends, Tomoeda returned but does so similar to the World Without Love.

Perhaps an enemy seeking to capture the cards trapped Sakura in a nightmare of that world, but to prevent her from figuring it out- left the dream versions of her friend almost untouched.

#5 Jan 01st 2006, 7:39am
ArtYume
that is a nice idea, and i know you write really good so i think you should try it!
#6 Jan 02nd 2006, 9:41am
Inusapphrine
I personally think the story would be really cute and suspensful!! YOu should definately go for it!!!
#7 Jan 02nd 2006, 12:38pm
Inusapphrine
I personally think the story would be really cute and suspensful!! YOu should definately go for it!!!
#8 Jan 02nd 2006, 12:38pm
Ashuri-san
YAY! Thank you for those who responded. Also thanks for the ideas of how to make it into a story, I appreciate it! It'll help when I'm writing the story to have your ideas. Thank you SnowNekoGirl aka Yuki, you're so nice. Thanks for saying that my writing is really good, when people tell me they like my writing it makes me so HAPPY! Thank you everyone!! *gets hyper*

I'll write it, but first I need to finish writing Chapter 3 of 'I will not break' I don't like Chapter 3, it's evil. I've written Chapter 4, but Chapter 3 is a drag. Except Chapter 3 has a few important events so I can't just skip it. WAHHHHHHHH! I'm such a lazy writer....

#9 Jan 02nd 2006, 7:35pm
Balterix
lol i like writing storys and coming up with them but i write some and my mate dose to so its not that boring
#10 Apr 23rd 2006, 12:44pm

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