I recently started a Heroes fic entitled "Heroes Volume III: Villains. So far...there has been quite a number of hits but so far there are no reviews about it. I'm starting to think that it's not really that good or eye-catchy for it's first three chapters. If you guys wouldn't mind, I would like to know your thoughts about my story by criticizing it, reviewing it or suggest on what would you like to see in my story. That's all and I hope for your kind consideration.

Huh, I might check that out. Thanks

Wow, you're taking on a tough challenge! I'm doing the same thing, but over the entire Season three arc and beyond! It's a tall order! The only thing that really bothered me about your story was that it was written in the present tense. That's just always been a pet peeve of mine, lol. Feel free to PM me if you ever need ideas! Also, check out my story. I'm doing the same thing as you, so you might be able to get some ideas! I think I got some from your story. ^-^

1. Forums are not to be used to post stories.
2. All discussions including language and content must be suitable for teens.
3. The owner/moderator(s) of this forum is solely responsible for content posted within this area.
4. All forum abuse must be reported to the moderator(s).

1. Forum admin/moderator
2. Fanatic (on site for more than 2 years)
3. Fan (on site for more than a year)
4. Regular (on site for more than 6 months)
5. Camper (on site for more than a month)
6. Apprentice (on site for more than a week)
7. Newbie (on site for less than a week)