I was never really much of a writer, what with my limited vocabulary and lack of writing skills in general.

Tell me what you guys think of it. Healthy criticism is welcome.

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Genre: Comedy, Romance

Pairing: Keitarox?

Based off: Manga/Anime (Both?)

Timeline: Around maybe after Keitaro's 3rd Exam Failure

Granny Hina has sensed a disturbance within the threads of fate circling around Hinata Sou and has sent Kanako(earlier than in the manga/anime) to investigate and to ensure the safety of it's tenants. As Kanako arrives and informs Keitaro, a woman appears before him and the tenants. The woman tells them that she is Keitaro and Naru's daughter. Before the situation could turn violent and more chaotic, another woman intervenes and confronts the first woman. The second woman now informs them that she is Keitaro and Motoko's daughter. As if the encounters were not confusing enough, a third woman approaches, stating that she is Keitaro and Kitsune's daughter... And another saying she is Keitaro and Mutsumi's daughter... And another saying she's Keitaro and Shinobu's daughter... And another saying she's Keitaro and Su's daughter. And around this moment Keitaro would have fainted(or bashed in the head for some unknown or illogical reason once again).

These women claim they have come from different futures, each arriving to this point in time to arrange the events that will come to their eventual futures. The statement of coming to this time from the future has been proven true by Su, stating that one of her machines has sensed an interference within the space-time matrix(which was a little hard to explain, considering that not all of them are pre-teen Molmolian princesses/scientific geniuses).

The women obviously do not take a very good liking to each other knowing that their birth, as well as the relationships of their own parents, are in jeopardy because of one another. Each sought to unite their soon-to-be mom and Keitaro in an all-out battle to build a relationship between their mothers and father.

Once again(much to his chagrin), our favorite Ronin, Urashima Keitaro, along with his harem, faces another troubling situation, one which can change the outcome of his fate in the future to come.

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What do you guys think? Questions? Comments? Post them here.

If anyone wants to take this idea up, contact me at datael7@yahoo.com and I hopefully I can help in making this idea more interesting for our readers.

Until then. :)

Final pairing: Everyone X Keitaro

Y?:

Then I won't have to kill the new girls. I don't like mass murders.

I wanted to include Kanako in this as well, actually, and I thought of including any of the other girls(Nyamo?/Sara? -_-;), although I'm not entirely sure of the latter.

But it's up to any of you guys on how you shape this story.

(I have no idea how to make a good ending out of this o_o)

Any other takers?

Keitarou X Everyone

But you must do something about the polygamy rule....

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