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Lastofakind
Topic: Grand Theft Hina
Keitaro is accidentally kidnapped and brought to 'Vice City' when he is being taken to his Grandmothers Apartments by Tommy Vercetti who had a drug deal go wrong for the second time. He is then raised by Tommy Vercetti and learns a different kind of life, and morals than he would have lived by in the book. After he grows up he then finds that he still has family in Japan and a goes back to Tokyo to start his own empire. Most of the other 'Grand Theft Auto' games well be used.

I'm not sure about a paring.

I'm thinking of a

Keitaro/Mitsune, Keitaro/Motoko, Keitaro/Kanako Or a Keitaro/Naru.

Shinobu might be one but that would be... I don't know.

I'm thinking of not having one and just let Keitaro be a Player/Lone wolf in this one.

It's going to be a test for me to write...

#1 Jan 25th 2007, 7:57pm
bounder7985
ehh sounds cool~~

i love a lh fic where keitaro isnt a wimp~~

and mix in GTA man sounds really great!!

oh i dont care much about pairing~

unless you alter shinobu's age a bit....

#2 Feb 01st 2007, 2:08am
Lastofakind
Ya I was thinking that too but than again I say this all the time with Keitaro and Shinobu.

Keitaro would be 25 when she is 18. I find nothing wrong with the age differents. Heck my mother and father are ten years different.

Love is blind, it may seem dumb, and know's no age.

also Keitaro having a 16-year old girlfriend... wouldn't be too odd for this one.

#3 Feb 05th 2007, 7:16pm
bounder7985
good point

do you have an idea when youll get this story out here?

#4 Feb 06th 2007, 6:15pm
Lastofakind
Sometime next mounth I think... could be sooner.

I really don't want to rush this one. I'll take my time so it dont turn out like crap.

#5 Feb 06th 2007, 6:29pm
bounder7985
its been a moth

and i wanted to know~~

hows the progress on the fic?

#6 Mar 04th 2007, 6:22pm
Lastofakind
I'm in the middle of moving again.

Good news- My old computer broke so we have a nice new one :)

Bad news- My old computer broke so I lost most of my Fanfic'a I've been working on :(

It's coming next month... I hope.

#7 Mar 20th 2007, 5:59pm
bounder7985
can i get a status report?
#8 Apr 02nd 2007, 6:26pm
Lastofakind
Still moving...

I should be done next week so I'll restart on it then.

#9 Apr 03rd 2007, 3:54pm
bounder7985
anything new?
#10 Apr 28th 2007, 8:21pm
bounder7985
also just putting it out their~

what gonna happen to your story where keitaro died?

sorry i forgot the name....

it's a cool story~~

#11 Apr 30th 2007, 6:13pm
Lastofakind
HEY!!!

No I'm not dead... unlike the last E-mails I got asked...

Ok so I still have no internet at my place. I'm using my friends computer.

So far I'm working out the story. If I'm going to do a Grand Theft Auto/Love Hina fanfic than I have to look at what make both.

Love Hina's a little hard to put into a GTA world but its getting there. I making the story fit in what you would call 'missions' in the game. That adds to the story...ALOT! And thats taking sometime...

So far I have my own charaters to put in. I can't list them now...so...

Also some from other games that might make it in. the list is...

From other games///

Pandora/ Gutar Hero

Trane/ Marc Ecko's getting up

James Earl Cash/ Manhunt

there might be more.

#12 May 11th 2007, 8:17pm
Lastofakind
I'm so brain dead right now from this fic that the type-o's in the last ones are staggering...

Oh and about the story 'Time's Up'

It's going to be updated sometime next...week... I hope

#13 May 11th 2007, 8:20pm
bounder7985
hmm

it all sounds cool

cant wait

#14 May 16th 2007, 6:39pm
bounder7985
just want to put this out there and i donnt wanna nag but

its been a wwek

#15 May 22nd 2007, 6:13pm
Lastofakind
Ya.... I feel sick, started moving for the second time, and trying to update other fanfic's. Its safe to say now that... It's not coming anytime soon...
#16 Aug 02nd 2007, 11:38pm

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