I would like to see crossover with punisher. I think kietaro becoming like this hero from american comics after some kind of tragic events. It can be combined with romance preferably one of those keiXkan keiXtsu can be other parings without narusegawa konno su and otohime they are boring and I personaly dont see mutsumi hurting someone.

Proposed outline of pairing keiXtsu

Konno/haruka/motoko/seta has some yakuza/mercenary/guerilla/terrorist problems and they come with assault rifles when inhabitants of hinata and their families are having party/weeding/meeting. Keitaro future female partner in vengance and later love intrest can't die but can be shot/raped/beaten but nothing irreperable so no major limb loss scars would be fine. For tsu-chan example Decide if she has husband and if you decide yes poor dude will die by way you decide (traffic accident/heart failure during sex with 3 hookers/shot during the garthering and dying in tsu-chan arms). Kietaro is almost mortaly wounded but he lives and sees that female partner also is still alive.

One ponit that is MUST DO:

NARUSEGAWA DIES at the start preferably in a bloody painful way. (your freak punches cant save you against 7.62 NATO rounds from FN-FAL boo hoo) bi***ch must be dead as brain activity of paris hilton.

Keitaro is left bitter after loss of his friends because the police cant do anything to the people who did it because they have no hooks on them and cant prove that they did that. He and his companion go into hiding. They use family funds as they are sole heirs of their families. Keitaro is angry that they are powerless in legal combat and after finding the inpiration of comic they start their plan for vengance.

They have funds and they disappered from the public. They use time to recuperate, train and use old grandma hina contacts to get weapons equipment and training, during training they get closer.

Second requisite:

They begin their true vengance with crashing wedding between two yakuza families where they are finaly are acknowgled as not dead,. Until then they hunt small fish of criminal underworld.

END

And i think when matrial arts mumbo jumbo should be toned down, so no fancy ttechniques because i think they work only on destined target which are demons and this is not punisher's way and this is rather boring to read when characters are too much overpowerd. They should plan actions and use their brains, training and firepower provided to them.

It would be awesome to see that and you allways can use other anime characters as fellow heroes/villans i think that police inspector with bleeding nose everytime she meets bastard from akumetsu would fit nicely as their contact in police departament. Me liked this type of cynic policeman would be awesome.

SO that is my CHALENGE/r main battle tank :P

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