Character Profiles for the Next Generation of the Brotherhood . . . . .

YAY!!! i have four to make, unless you want me to do Sorina's too...

here's #1:

Name: Victor Frankenstein

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Race: Half-Vampire / Half-Reanimation

Appearance: Victor has pale skin that looks almost green in certain light. He has a full head of bright blond hair and brown eyes. He is VERY tall - stands at about 6'7". He usually wears a plain button-up shirt, black vest, and brown pants with boots.

Personality: Victor is like the big brother to everyone else. He is strong, levelheaded, and intelligent, and would never let harm come to any of his friends. He takes after his father in that he is fiercely loyal to his friends, and would give his own life to save any of them.

Backstory: Victor's mother, Ilyana Karena, fell in love with the Frankenstein Creation and bore him. He grew up close to Van Helsing and his band of followers and friends, as well as their children. His best friend is Noah Liakov, but loves all the others as well. He grew up quickly, being taught fighting skills by his father and practical home skills by his mother. He takes great pride in everything he does and has done, and doesn't think of himself as the leader of the next generation.

Strengths: great physical strength, loyal, strong-minded, recklessly courageous.

Weaknesses: Would give his life for that of a friend, snaps when people harass or make fun of his family.

Weapon of Choice: The battle-axe his father passed down to him on his 18th birthday.

#2:

Name: Noah Damian Liakov

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Race: Werewolf

Appearance: Noah has a natural beige skin tone and ginger-colored hair. He has his father's green eyes. He is lean-built but tough. In wolf form, he looks like an oversized wolf with ginger fur. He usually wears a plain pullover shirt and dark-colored pants with normal shoes or boots. When tracking or in battle, wears a bandana.

Personality: Noah is irrational, silly, and mischievous. He loves getting into trouble, flirting with beautiful girls, and attempting dangerous stunts. However, he can be very focused and clearheaded, and has surprising control over his werewolf state. He is overprotective of his younger sister, and guards her like a watchdog.

Backstory: The son of Lexa and Andreas Liakov, Noah inherited his father's werewolf curse. when he was a baby, he could not control his transformations, and aroused suspicion among the townspeople. He grew up and gained control, and has dedicated his life to fighting the foes his parents faced and avenging his mother's death.

Strengths: werewolf abilities and control

Weaknesses: beautiful girls, his own lack of self-confidence

#3:

Name: Keiran Jareth Van Helsing

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Race: Fallen Angel/Vampire Hybrid

Appearance: Keiran has thick, jet-black hair that's almost down to his shoulders, and sapphire-blue eyes. His skin has a pale cast to it, hinting at his vampiric side, and he's rather slender, almost frail looking. He has small but lethal fangs, and usually wears a black pullover, dark pants, and black boots. Occasionally, he wears a black duster as well.

Personality: Keiran is quiet, cunning, and stubborn as a mule. He's a kind soul by nature, but with an explosive temper when enraged. He likes to have his time alone on occasion, but he is quite charming in social settings. Sometimes too charming...

Backstory: The result of what's thought of as a one-night obligation between Catherine Van Helsing and none other than Count Vladislaus Dragulia himself, Keiran was raised by his mother, who refused to hand him over to his father at birth and fought like hell to keep him safe. He grew up loving his mother and loathing his natural father, though he became attached to Egil Swenhaugen, his step-father, and his three half-siblings as well (though he was closest to Egil and Catherine's youngest daughter, who, like him, was a hybrid). When he left home, he chose to follow in the footsteps of his stepfather, mother, and uncle, and become a hunter.

Strengths: Vampiric and fallen angel blood make Keiran harder than any vampire or fallen angel to kill, and thanks to his background, Keiran has been raised as a hunter all his life and can kick some serious butt. And, of course, there's all the powers that vampires have...

Weaknesses: His vampiric side seems to be more dominant, which means he has a harder time controlling his lust for blood. He also doesn't like the sunlight a whole lot and rarely ventures out during the day...he almost seems to be weaker during the daylight.

#3

Name: Sofiya "Fiya" Ninoshka Liakov

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Race: human / Fallen Angel

Appearance: Sofiya has pale skin and her mother's red hair. She has sparkling green eyes, like her father, and stands at about 5'4". She generally wears a blue, pink, or green pullover top and either a long skirt or dark-colored pants and boots.

Personality: Sofiya's main trait is her love of learning. She loves nothing more than learning about new people, old stories, her family's history, and many more topics. She is bright and almost always cheerful, and takes pride in everything she does. She loves her family above all things, and would put her life on the line for her father and brother. She misses her mother terribly, and because of that, she models her life after her mother's.

Backstory: Two years younger than her brother, Noah, Sofiya is the last child and only daughter of Lexa and Andreas Liakov. She was born with the same gift her mother had: to hear and examine the thoughts of others. She trained extensively with her mother to fine-tune this gift, and held her mother in the highest regard. When she was 17, her mother died, and Sofiya's world all but fell apart. She grew a hatred of the Nazis and vows to stop them at all costs. Her father and brother brought her out of that dark time, but Sofiya was never quite the same. She now hides it with her happy demeanor, but she never forgets that vow.

Strengths: Fallen Angel power - to hear thoughts, and strength of will

Weaknesses: vengeful, hidden anger, protective of her mother's name.

And #4:

Name: Gabriella Selene Van Helsing

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Race: Human...supposedly

Appearance: Gabriella has dark-brown hair that looks black in some lights, and is full and very wavy, hanging down to her shoulder blades. She also has hazel eyes and long, full lashes. Her skin has a subtle tanned shade, and she's small-only about 5'5" or so, but very slender. She usually wears a dark red dress that comes down to just around her knees and has full, flared sleeves and a square neckline, as well as fingerless black gloves and black boots that come halfway up her calves.

Personality: Gabriella is very shy, thoughtful, and timid, and rather sensitive. However, she can be a spitfire when provoked, and she's quite a loveable sweetheart too, with a silver tongue that can soothe even the most flared tempers.

Backstory: The daughter of Carmen Martines and Gabriel Van Helsing-though, never meant to be and concieved while both parents were under possesion-she was raised very close to her family, particularly her twin brother, her younger cousin, and her step-cousin. She was always her father's daughter, but suffered a tough period in her childhood, between the ages of seven and eight, when her mother died (though she was resurrected). She never trained formally as a huntress, but instead trained to be a white witch like her mother. She left home at eighteen and travelled Europe, developing her magical skills.

Strengths: Inherited immortality and magical powers from her mother and highly-honed senses from her father.

Weaknesses: Very sensitive and passionate, and her emotions can easily get out of hand, which can make her a bit scary...(because we all know Van Helsing has a pretty nasty temper)

Okay, the last one for now...

Name: Aliria Erika Fidotov

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Race: Vampire

Appearance: Long blonde hair (a genetic fluke inherited from her maternal grandmother) with a tendancy to curl at the end, which falls just to her shoulder blades. She has warm, light brown eyes, which turn blood-red when she's angry or feeding, and-like all vampires-very pale skin (though hers has more color than most vampires, due to the tiny bit of werewolf blood in her veins). She's small and slim, but still capable of kicking butt, and she has long, ivory fangs that can often be seen when she speaks. She usually wears either a white, red, or black blouse with black leggings and black boots.

Personality: Warm and bubbly, but surprisingly serious when called for. She's incredibly patient and very protective of her family and friends. She also has a nasty habit of speaking her mind, whether her opinions are good or not.

Backstory: The daughter of Radovan Fidotov and Nickelia Contarian (who were both hybrids), she and her brother became very close throughout childhood. She also became close with the children of Lexa and Andreas, as she always thought of them as an aunt and an uncle. When she left home, she hadn't exactly decided what she wanted to be, so she roamed, taking odd little jobs that suited her. After trying and failing to live as an almost-normal human, she switched to a vampiric, nocturnal lifestyle.

Strengths: Intelligence, all vampiric attributes, and the fact that she's a likeable person by nature.

Weaknesses: Sunlight, stakes, werewolves...

sapph--I think you should do Sorina, I've a good idea of her, but you'd be playing as her, so she should be yours . . . . .

Name: Nasya Klara Psowklan( Nasya means immortal, Psowklan means literally in polish Klan of dogs)

Age: 17

Race: Hybrid (lycan/vampire) // Polish, Lithuanian, British

Gender: female

Description: Average Height, short (mid-neck length), dark, coarse auburn hair, fine white skin but with a healthy color. Her deep inset eyes are almond shape and are purple-brown, round eyebrows but still defined; beautifully electric smile, teeth a little crooked (kinda fanggy). Round-ish face, defined jaw. Round shaped lips, not big but still thick. Wears: long white, grey or black tunic, brown or black leather padded vest, fitted pants that tuck into mid-thigh boots and a long faded black leather jacket that ends mid-calf.

Personality: Loud, sometimes abrasive (that's what you get when you've been raised by all men) and extremely curt. She thinks situations through and is quite intelligent--though she is known for putting her foot in her mouth on more than one occassion. She's tenacious and agressive in certain situations (not social situations). She's loyal and has a good sense of herself.

Backstory: Her mother was a half british-half polish debutante who fell in love with the leader of a clan of lycans in lithuania (he leads all of the lithuanian lycans). She has four older brothers: Andrin, Maurus, Marek and Gerik (her favorite). Only her older brothers (Andrin and Maurus) are lycans--like her. An oddity in her father's lycan clan she left the safety of the horde to prove herself to him and did so by killing vampires in other lycan clans disguised as a man (her experience with vampires hasn't entirely been a good one, mind you). This changed when she met and fell in love with the passionate, intelligent, and smooth talking Vampire--Andreas Tannis. Falling in love on opposite sides of the field was hard and they were torn apart. Being half human alowed for her mutation into a hybrid (apparently a broken heart wasn't the only thing that came out of that relationship). Still finding herself an outcast in the clan, she finds herself amiss in the world, but still strong. She hates the Nazis with a passion and fighting against them gives her purpose.

Weapon(s): Mechanized crossbow, switch blades, two colt peace makers with blessed bulletts, her sharp as.s nails and knives fitted to the tips of her boots (they extend out of the both ends of her shoes).

Strengths: She is a vampire, lycan hybrid. she's extremely quick and strong. She can withstand the day and endure the night; she can see well, hear well and regenerate pretty quickly. Her charisma and quick wit can endear her quickly to other people, she isn't afraid of getting dirty or rough with anything. Being raised in a battalion-like-family, recommends her fair fighting experience.

Weaknesses: She's young and carries with her, quite a few characteristics of young people. She's vivacious, tenacious and feels practically invincible (not always a good attitude in a battle), her good heart can often confuse her feelings for people, even slick-tongued enemies. She's been tainted by love and would do anything for anyone she loved, often blind to betrayal. She can't understand or sympathize with people who are disloyal or display poor character traits. Often her roughness in manner can be unappealing to people with elevated airs.

Name: Maurus Dwasynk Psowklan (M-dark skinned, D-second son)

Age: 28

Race: Lycan

Gender: Male

Description: about 6'2, broad shoulders, very muscular and thick. Shaggy brown hair, shoulder length--a rich black color. His face is square but his features are more delicate--like his mother's, a fine nose and defined, alert eyebrows make him seem attentive. He has dimples from always smiling, and navy blue eye color. when he transforms into a lycan he is known for keeping his human eyes, instead of inheriting the black eyes.

Personality: A lot less serious than has older brother, Andrin, he loves to laugh and to goof around. He hates vampires with a passion--and is neutral to humans--he doesn't want to get married, he hates committment--is known for his agressive, play boy lifestyle in the Psow Tribe. He is very passionate, strong wille and flirtatious, I might add.

Backstory: Maurus is the second born son in the Psowklan family. Always a jovial spirit, he learned the arts of war and received a fairly decent education from his mother but was never motivated to truly do anything with these skills. Maurus spent most of his childhood playing, despite the pressure to embrace and train his lycan prowess (being only one of two male lycans in the family). As a youth he became very trivial, enjoying many pleasures on assignment in Eastern Europe. Having many an unpleasant experience with vampires, at the age of 20, he decided to join a Lycan clan in budapest that was known for hunting vampires--he came 6 years later with some scars and a couple horrific stories to tell. Regaining some sort of maturity and seriousness, he entered into the ranks of Psow Tribe as one of the few lycans to represent lithuanian lycans.

Weaknesses: Beautiful women. . . . . any sort of challenge that he would find worthy to conquer. He will often let his passion take him away and his lack of seriousness doesn't always guarantee victory.

Strengths: He's a powerful lycan--very strong for his age. He is cunning and also charming--he's known for insnaring the captivation of many people simply by flashing his self confident, electric smile. He can be very intelligent and intuitive when he must. His good looks, don't set him back too much either.

okay, here's my next one!! almost done!

Name: Sorina Aurore D'Artois

Age: 28

Gender: female

Race: human

Description: about 5'3", small and light-built. Has long light brown hair that falls to just below her shoulders when she wears it down. She has a narrow face which betrays her romanian birth, and bright, alert hazel eyes. She almost always wears a dress - the proper style in Britain - and keeps her hair up and occasionally tucked under a bonnet.

Personality: Sorina is proper, prim, and very in tune to society. She loves social gatherings, but always remembers her manners. Sorina has a wild side, however, that can only be drawn out by the right person. It frightens her, but when she finally comes to accept it, can be very exciting and unpredictable. She is determined, intelligent, and can be very emotional.

Backstory: Sorina was born in Romania, but her parents died when she was very young, so she was sent to live with her abusive uncle. When she was eight, fledgling vampire Charlotte Cameron killed her uncle and convinced Sorina to come live with her and her mate, Lucien D'Artois. Sorina grew up with them, having many adventures as a young girl. When she was twelve, she was sent to a British boarding school to avoid the dangers of living with vampire parents. She attended her lessons, studying for a semester in Paris, and desperately wants to become an artist. She has faint memories of the adventures from her youth, and is unsure of her parents' race - they disguise themselves as older every time she visits so that she will forget that they are vampires.

Strengths: strong-minded, determined, loyal to friends and family, a fighter when she needs to be.

Weaknesses: very proper, lacks self-confidence and courage in tough situations.

Name: William Cedric Van Helsing

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Race: Human...supposedly

Appearance: William has dark-brown hair that looks black in some lights, and is full and very wavy, hanging down to his shoulder blades. He also has hazel eyes. His skin has a subtle tanned shade, and he's about 5'11" or so, but very muscle toned. He usually wears a dark outfit like Gabriel Van Helsing,

Personality: William is very sarcastic and very protective of his twin sister. He has a lot of energy and seems t be high all of the time - this is true becase he drinks a lot coffee. He is very caring and always ready for an adventure.0

Backstory: The son of Carmen Martines and Gabriel Van Helsing-though, never meant to be and concieved while both parents were under possesion-he was raised very close to his family, particularly his twin sister, his younger cousin, and his step-cousin. He was always his mother's boy and suffered a tough period in jis childhood, between the ages of seven and eight, when his mother died (though she was resurrected). He trained formally as a hunter and a swordsman instead of trained to be a white witch like his sister. He left home at eighteen and travelled the Americas, developing his combat skills.

Strengths: Inherited immortality and the power of flight from his mother during puberty and highly-honed senses from his father.

Weaknesses: Hot termper and always speaks before thinks

Name: Anya Delavega-Frankenstein

Alias: Animagus or Vega

Age: 23

Race:1/3 reformation 1/3vampire 1/3 lycan

Gender: Female

Description: Mournful voileteyes and rose blonde hair. Wintry skin.

Personality: Focused Forgiving Fragile Heartbroken Hesitant Righteous Romantic and so much more

Body Build: Petite w/ some muscles

Back story: Born to Victor and Cassandra Frankenstein in England. The middle child of Victor Frankenstein. When he was killed by Dracula he left in his will Castle Frankenstein to Anya. He also gave all notes regaurding his scientific work and his journal were given to her.

Weapon(s): Twin swords and bow and arrows

Strengths: Martial arts and others and she can outwit anyone with a silver tongue she inherited from her mother.

Weaknesses: She could easily lured to darkness

Others: Her religion is Agnostics...

okay, my last one!

Name: Lukas "Luke" Josef Fidotov

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Race: werewolf

Appearance: shaggy-ish dark brown hair like his father's, has light brown eyes like his twin sister. His skin is tanned due to his mostly werewolf blood (it's paler than most werewolves because of the trace of vampire blood in him). He's slim but has fine-toned muscles and has a handsome face. He usually wears a black, brown, or khaki-colored shirt, black pants, and dark brown boots.

Personality: Like his sister, Lukas is likeable and fun to be around. However, he is less serious than she can be, and is a total prankster. He has little to no patience at all, but is very protective of his family and friends. Though he is almost never serious, he has very good focus and control.

Backstory. The son of Radovan Fidotov and Nickelia Contarian (who were both hybrids), Lukas and his twin sister became very close throughout childhood. He also became close friends with the children of Lexa and Andreas, considering Lexa and Andreas as an aunt and an uncle. He took more time to leave home than his sister, staying to train and gain control of his werewolf side with his father. When he did leave, he never was far from his sister or parents, wanting to keep them close and under his watchful gaze. He has never tried to seem human, and embraces his werewolf side.

Strengths: incredible focus and control

Weaknesses: silliness, prankster nature, stakes, vampires, etc.

My Second one and last one

Name: Addison Van Helsing

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Race: (read back story)

Appearance: shaggy-ishdark chocolate brown hair like her father's, has and eyes like Kaja. Her hair however much the chagrin of her mother she has a few neon blue streaks in her hair. Then much to the madness of her father. She is bohemian she loves wearing her father's old hat and duster and as destiny would have it she will become a monster hunter. she is quite tall(6'1 and 3/4" to be exact) it shows mainly in her legs.

Back-story. Her Father and mother were/are Van Helsing and Kaja. She is the second born to Van Helsing and Kaja. She lost her best friends in a fire and has major fear of it and cannot stand racsit ppl and sterotypes.

Weapons: The Blood of thousand virgins, holy water, tears of angels, and a scimitar

Strengths: Martial arts and so much more

Weaknesses: she can a bit of bit.ch and mean if you do her wrong

Personality: Emotional unstable and majority of the time she's reliable.

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Name: Liam Andreas Dunklestein

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Race:Werewolf(he was bitten) telepathic(he gets this from his uncle Tristan) 1/2 Drow elf 1/2 sorcerer

Appearance: Looks like his mom w/ hair and eyes -Which makes his eyes a bright azure and hair complete ebony- but facial structure is dad's. He is 6' 9" surpassing both his parents. His skin is a dark tan but not orange it's more like a rusted olive color. He has a smile that makes girls melt but it looks like a frown is plastered on him and/or smirk that says that he's up to no good. His eyes are like a sea after a storm.

Personality: Stand-offish and a loner except when around his friends. He hates that he can't control death yet. He is kind of a prankster and can be quiet sly and he's darker than both his parents.

Back-story. His mother and father Satine and Rolf taught him everything he knows and more. He is haunted by his mother counterpart's spirit. At age 12 he was bitten by his best friend. His best friend was later killed infront of him when hunters came and "rescued" him. He has been in college for many years and has finally entered the Magika and Ranger's Guilds for both his parents wanted him to but much to their dismay he doesn't want to become a monster hunter. He was traumatized by the Hunters' killing his friend vowed never to hunt monsters unless they are completely and utterly evil.

Weapons: Himself and his enchanted twin swords inherated from his father Rolf. He can also make anything he wants to appear to appear.

Strengths: incredible focus and control. Loves his darker side(at least of his magic). He will do anything for the will of God.

Weaknesses: He is sometimes unmotivated. He is very self-destructive(like his mother). He knows he can fight monsters but refuses to.

um... two things, trin. just to make sure we keep everyone happy, please ask before submitting characters that are offspring of other people's characters, ok? I don't mean to sound rude, but it would really be better if you did.

I like Addison, though...could you include more information about her? use the other profiles as a guide.

Okay *smacks head on table and goes edit* And that wasn't rude you were just informing... thx :)

thanks, trin. i knew you'd understand, dearest. :) *hugs*

=D *hugs u back* I know u said look at the other profiles but what spefically did you want me to extend for Addison?

well, her backstory and appearance could use a little more description, and she needs a personality! give her some interesting personality traits.

*hugs u* Thx Sapphy :)

What about Anya???

i like anya - i approve of her. she and my Victor could be cousins! though they've never met...that could be interesting.

as for liam...i already have Lexa and Andreas with two kids, and I kind of want to keep it that way, if you're okay with it. ^^; again, i don't mean to sound rude or like the forum police, but are you okay with that?

Cool... I'm fine w/ that I just need to think of someway to fit him cuz I want him to be related to the group we have going right now but IDK how... I don't want him to be a OC in the group you know newbie w/ no know parents. Then agian I could make him Rolf/Satine's son or something... Again what would you suggest for Liam? And Again u are not rude it's just common curtesy and I am being stupid and think I should get away w/ everything so I was the one being rude not you Sapphy...

I do that b/c on another site and forum RPG I'm an admister and I get so confused... I am sry for any inconveince to you; or anyone else for future refernce....

i actually really like the idea of Liam being Rolfatine's son. it's a good way to incorporate him into the new topic.

and i would make the same changes as you made with Addie, but maybe give him more of a weakness...he seems a TIIIIIINY bit gary-sue ish.

Okay thx Sapphy *HUGS U TIGHTLY*

okay, we need an antagonist so, I'm doing a male charcter (if anyone wants to play him, they can, I don't really care. . .)

Name: Kommandant Werner Clov Edsel (W--army guard)

Age: 34

Race: human// german, british

Gender: male

Physical Description: Roughly 5'8, broad shoulders, thick, built frame but very stalkily set. His face is that of the arian ideal--a thick, filled out jaw, grey/blue eyes, a severe brow, straight defined nose with a thin bridge; high cheekbones, wide forehead. Has a thin scar branching down from beneath his left eye, ending halfway down his cheek (from a brush with some Russian operatives on a mission in Russia), has Ash-blonde, short hair (cut military style) and parted to one side; he almost always wears his lips in a grimace, or some sort of look of distaste. He usually wears a black or tan military uniform and black knee boots.

Personality: Very logical, stoic, discompassionate towards others, very extremist and obsessive--when he wants something he'll get it due to his tenacity and thirst for advancement. Is aggrivated by men who are better looking than he is and women who fancy themselves his equal--though he finds fiesty girls attractive (he always needs a challenge to win).

Backstory: Werner (pronounced like: Vurn-ur) was born in Dusseldorf, Germany. His mother was the daughter of a German first captain, in the prestigious military family Clovesetden and his father was the half british/half german Military Officer from the equally pristigious british/german military family Von Edsels. He was raised in a german military school before completing his adolescent education in a British bording school and went to the University of Vienna. He then joined the Military, doing reconaissance work, climbing the ranks to Commander of a secret branch of the military that uses unconventional military operatives for the Kaiser's fancy.

Weapons: saber, pistols, peace stick,

Weaknesses: Any sort of comments of criticism or challenge (he's very proud and arrogant--he will take every joke or any action against him with anger and try to stamp it out) can set him off and he risks losing things because of that. Drink, he was used to drinkin a lot when he got into the military. His second leutenant (a female), whom he lusts for but unfortunately can not have because she is the girlfriend of the German 'Commander of the Fleet' or high general (a.k.a, his boss).

Strengths: His tenacity and go-getter attitude makes well for climbing the corporate latter. His reasoning abilities make him a cunning adversary and his lack of compassion makes well for ruthless decisions and good military choices. He doesn't mind being alone, so he doesn't worry about other people.

oooh! i like him! he'll be an awesome antagonist. :) i approve, and i'm glad to see a HUMAN antagonist!!

i kinda think putting his love interest in would be a good idea too, does anyone want to do it????

i can. do you want her to be narsty too?

Well, I'm thinking of posting up an updated version of Sigrid (one where she's older) but I'm waiting to see what happens between her and Kalan before I write her profile in stone. When I do, I think Sigrid wouldn't mind butting heads with him, she can be quite the spitfire.

the narstier the better, I always say, heehee.

I can't wait to see what happens with Sigrid, she's such a cool character and I'm curious to see how she 'turned out'--is she still going to be a protagonist??

btw, how r we going to do the battle, do u want to start or . . . what??

hahah okay. i can do it then. :)

and the battle? what topic?

SWEET! . . .. for the Dawn (that was for Speed though, cuz we're trying to get Illenka and Egil together, but in a cool way. ;)

oh ok. would you like to post in TNG while you're at it? maybe Charlotte and Lucien are picking Sorina up from boarding school for the summer?

Well, I corrected one of my posts and played as Clarissa. She just ordered some of her "pretties" (they're lethal, pesky spiders) to go after Illie and before that, in an earlier post, Egil explained what a succubus was to Illie.

oh! I didn't see that. . . right on it , boss!

Name: Raylin Gomez

Age: 24

Gender: Female

Race: Nalf Vampire/Half Human

Appearance:Raylin has pail skin,bright,blue eyes,Brunetta hair with Blonde streaks in some parts.She has a slender,well toned figure

Weaknesses: The sun,a freaky concoction that'll turn me full human so Dracula. can kill me

Weapon of Choice: twin sided Swords

Hello and Welcome! Unfortunately, you've got some tiny problems:

can you be more specific in description, you need to write a backstory and a personality descrip, you also need a litst of strengths. . . . this topic is also just for children of the Seperate Scenes group, if you want to submit this character, try doing it in the 'Choosing Roles' topic . . . also, Dracula won't be in the topic that this character would be involved in, so . . . yeah, sorry to be annoying but, just thought I'd let you know!!

Yeah,sorry for that.So,I go to the 'Choosing Roles' thing to post my character?

yeah, and just follow the guidlines that is listed on the first page . . . no problems :)

ok thanks.

second-villain time!!

Name: Lieutenant Sabiene Cordula Diederich

Age: 35

Race: human

Gender: female

Appearance: About 5'3", slim and petite-built. She is the epitome of female Aryan perfection with a narrow face, sharp features, especially a defined jawline and dominant cheekbones. She has short bright blonde hair and ice-colored eyes. She wears her tan military uniform and high black boots - ALWAYS polished to perfection - and her military hat. She never smiles unless she is killing and keeps her jaw set firmly.

Personality: Cold and calculating, Sabiene is willing to do whatever it takes to get what she wants. She is rarely kind. She is opinionated and demanding, and always speaks her mind. She has the ability to silence someone with a single glare. When someone disobeys her, she would rather see them die than have justice be served. Sabiene has a very contorted view of justice and refuses to change her ways.

Backstory: Sabiene was born into a well-to-do Aryan German family. When Hitler came to power in 1933, Sabiene always said she would get a position under him. She wanted to purge her country of anyone who did not fit the Aryan model. She underwent training and managed to obtain a Lieutenant's position under Kommandant Edsel in a secret branch of the German military. She is aware of his lust for her, but she is involved with the high general. She enjoys seeing Edsel's pain as she hangs around the general.

Weapons: military issue pistol and saber. when torturing, she uses a wide array of instruments.

Strengths: commanding presence, strong-minded, determined, focused

Weaknesses: opinionated, has few alliances, hates being undermined because she is female

Cool!! i like her, perfect Nazi people, yay!!!

I'm trying to come up with Zenevieva/Velkan's kids . .. . *racks brain*

thanks! i'm glad you like her.

and if you need help with names or anything, let me know!

most definately, i can't decide wether they should have two or three kids---idk!!

well, why not start with two, and you can always add another profile later?

Um...what time period is the next generation in, 'cause I was under the impression it was around 1914 and the Nazis didn't show up in until litte before 1940...

yeah, we already changed that, right now the setting is: Italian Country side, 1938 . . . at least, that's where all the characters will be meeting

I see...well, that's clears everything up.

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