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Connor Kent
Topic: Heroes: Destiny's Evolution
Hey everybody. I just want to say Heroes a new gen is going under major changes. Including possibly the title! Here's a sneak preview.

When destiny is played with, only one thing can save humanity from ultimate destruction: Evolution. A cheated track star who runs more than fast. An artist whose creations come to life. The student who travels around the world looking for answers. The man who claims to know everything... A medical student who doesn't need a lense to see more than the naked eye. A teenager who uses his powers to follow a trails of clues leading to his father's disappearance. A young girl whose life will never be the same after she finds herself in a world, she never thought existed. A woman who unknowingly is making others around her more powerful; including her very dangerous husband. And a man... a man with an uncontrolled power... that may lead to the total annihilation of the entire east coast of America. Can the Heroes band together and stop what seems to be inevitable?

Right now I'm going to try a commercial. I've done it once. (Check out Zatch Bell the Movie: Lightning Unleashed.)

Ok so anything in bold are the words on the screen. Anything in italics are pictures or actions. The rest i guess you can figure out.

In a world where destiny is meddled with

(flashes of Hurricane Katrina, factories polluting the air, rainforests being destroyed.)

Only one thing can stop humanity from a seemingly inevitable fate.

Evolution

(quick flashes: A wall sizzling and burning. A teenage boy flies through the hole with a teenage girl in his arms. A woman flipping from building to building across the night sky. A stream of fire emitting from a man's hands. A car floating in the air with a small girl in front of it curiously looking at it.)

People who have never made a difference must band together to stop a desolate future.

(Flash of three people screaming and running down a hallway dodging an ice ball and an electric surge.)

But can they harness their powers? Or bring more pain to the people around them.

(Flash of a construction worker on a building. A blast of plasma accidentally released from his hand destroys a guarder and watching his best friend plummet to his doom.)

Paul: Markel!

(Flash of man almost killing someone with heat vision)

Briar: I'm sorry! I didn't mean to!

Some will use their powers for good.

(Flash of teenage boy kneeling down with an older teenager quietly hiding from three people with guns)

Tyler: I hope this works.

(Same flash: a dark misty fog begins to surround them. The two run for it)

While others only seek ultimate power.

(flash of several metal shards zooming past a man towards a teenage girl screaming.)

But whatever they choose. Whatever paths they have taken before... They'll all come together... To try and stop it.

(flashes of New York City, Disney World, Washington D.C., Boston and Philadelphia and the rest of the are all empty and dead. They're a desolate wasteland. No life can be seen.)

It all starts now... fighting fate.

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Yay. What do you guys think?

#1 Feb 01st 2007, 4:14pm . Edited Nov 25th 2007, 4:23pm
Vickie1
Interesting. Can't wait :)
#2 Feb 07th 2007, 6:30am
Connor Kent
The pilot is up. Depending on how well it goes I already got twelve episode planned.
#3 Feb 10th 2007, 9:36pm
Vickie1
Okay, I'll have a look over it but not yet. Been busy writing a lot of things (my own Heroes fanfic, my original horror series and a current fanfic posted up @__@ *faints*) and it's night already. But I'll read it, the summary already sounds interesting :)
#4 Feb 11th 2007, 8:18am
Connor Kent
Thanks! Be sure to leave a review! :)
#5 Feb 11th 2007, 2:51pm
Vickie1
Will doing. I'm reading yours right now :D ...And posting mine too but I'll review first ^__^
#6 Feb 15th 2007, 8:36pm
Bob the Robot
hey, dude, where's your story? you haven't posted anything in a while.
#7 Jun 16th 2007, 12:41pm
Connor Kent
Hey guys. I'm making MEGA changes in HEroes new gen. Check out the preview!
#8 Nov 25th 2007, 4:24pm

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