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I've actually had this idea for about a month but only have the first chapter written. Every time I try to go further, my writing chokes and I end up erasing it. The premise is this:

Long ago, the Magister Magi Nagi (a different one...) and his partner Shiranui defeated the infamous demon Orochi and sealed it away. Being egostical and somewhat enchanted with his own heroic deed, Nagi attached the Heart of the seal to his bloodline rather than to a conventional big rock. Orochi and the details of his sealing is known to the Magical world but in the Normal world it descends into legend and then myth.

Fast forward several centuries...

Sen, daughter of the Imperial Crown Prince of Japan and one of his mistresses, has been the target of assassination by these shadowy figures using magic since she was four years old. Her grandfather, the Emperor, attempted to have her apprenticed to a mage but for some reason her magic is nigh incontrollable and fluctuates in strength along with her emotions. At age fourteen she has a near miss, but the wound is cursed. In an attempt to buy time, the Imperial family contacts the only noble family that has magical ties for help: the Konoe branch of the Fujiwara clan.

Konoe Konoemon, much to their delight, has a suggestion...

I'm thinking of placing it after the Final Exam/Library Island arc since its the most logical time for transfers into the school to be accepted. Since the fic would be dealing with people set to kill straight off rather than kidnap, I'm thinking liberal doses of Kaede, Kuu Fei, Mana, Evangeline and Setsuna along with Negi would make the most sense.

I was at first leaning towards a more gun/weapons oriented Negi since while the assassins don't care about keeping magic secrecy, he does but now I'm not sure.

Any thoughts?

As a fan of the "warrior girls" that sounds like it could be a really cool story; with a good helping of style and pacing it could actually be quite the thriller. :D

An Unlimited Weapon Works Negi sounds good, but are you referring to magical weaponry or more conventional types? If it's the former then it would make sense, coinciding with his huge geeky collection of rare weapons, but the latter is less so, since it would seem strange for him to put aside all of his magical learnings (and he is a magical genius). It would be funny to see him apprenticed under Mana for marksmanship lessons, though.

And more female OCs=very yes!

Best of luck on your project. Sorry it's a little dead around here. There's a writer's strike. (Not really, we're just mostly at the other site these days. Doing stuff that isn't writing. Haha...)

Here a prologue of some sort: * I made this up from a RPG forum I am at.... turn out to be pretty good*

Broly was relaxing at a cafe (in town he stumble just upon) with a smoke and a cup of coffee. He just finished with another assignment....bored, he decide to relax for once.....Everything was peaceful...and boring..... until T.V. started to be too loud.....

" Breaking News:

A 10-year old boy * Showing a picture of Negi Springfield*, is internationally wanted for causing the incident of disrupting the gateports. Capture him and you will be rewarded 300,000 DP.

Also, everyone! He is not alone and he has traveling pack of female humans he seems to be attached too...Get the wanted list for more info and reward info.

Thank you and have a nice day!"

"Hmph..." was all Broly said...

" Why would a 10 year old and a bunch of his teenager girl cronies be charged with such a serious crime....its too odd..." Though the mercenary.

Broly waited to his copy of the list till the crowd of people died down to the wanted list station...

Broly glanced at list...

"......."

" hmmm, there is another boy mixed with the other 15 girls.....worth..27,000 DP

Other than boy that worth about 300,000 DP..... it's just a bunch of human girls...quite ordinary looking ones too....

Some of the girls have a bounty of 30,000 DP...must be the powerhouses of the group

Everyone else has a bounty of 10-15,000 DP....weak tag-along in the group"

" How annoying...." sighed Broly...

I guess taking a break is out of the question....

Here a Chapter 1...I guess:

Broly tried to scout out some background info on those "kids" on the wanted list.

"Hmph.....no info other than the crime they did and their wanted list.....

How come a 10 year old children such a high bounty?...and his girl cronies have a reasonable sum too.....together, you have enough money to live comfortable for couple years......

Is someone trying to frame them? or did they all did something very stupid and illegal (at the same time) to take the blame......or that wrong place/wrong time type of thing....

.....This is ...bothersome...."

Broly decided to take a break (again...) by hanging out a nearby bar...

.....Listening to 2nd.....no 3rd class bounty hunters braging on what are they going to do with the reward money.....

" Maybe, I can get some useful information from them...."

" I am just going to have a big party on my huge mansion!!!" said a stupid one....

"No, idiot! Women! Get Women!" said a horny one...

" No, I was wrong.... this is stupid....."

" How about saving it?..... Until you actually need/want something?" said a reasonable one

"..!!.."

"NO!!!" said the rest...

"You on crack!?"

"No,A Mansion!"

"....stupid"

"No,A Party!"

"No, A Feast!"

"....Really Stupid..."

"No,Women!"

"Hmph..I take that back.. a bunch of amateurs looking to finance their pleasures..."

Just about Broly had a enough and leave.....a stranger came near and tap him....

"Mind if I sit here?....."

Broly said nothing...

"Just said nothing,mind my own business.....and they can do whatever they what..."

Until the stranger repeated this message and kept tapping..... again....and again....

After 15 minutes of this, Broly got a little annoyed.

"Look, I don't.....care..."

Broly stopped after turning around to stare at the annoying stranger's face..

"m-Master!?" * cut it off here?...cliffhanger type of thing?*

He just chuckled and pat him on the shoulder

" We have a bit of chatting to do....I need a favor from you,though...Are you willing to take it?"

...eh?....

How is it? Horrible? Throw down the drain type of work? More Detail? Too Big? Too Short?

Heya Claro.

This...I'll be honest, it needs work. To be brutally honest, your grammar is horrible. That's something that can be fixed with effort/a good editor/etc though, so there is hope.

As for the story part, you might merge those two parts together and flesh them out a little and come out with a half-decent prologue. If anything, both sections are too short. A chapter should be a coherent whole made up of several scenes, rather than just part of one scene. Also, the part where the miscellaneous people are saying what they'll do with the reward is a bit awkward.

And there are too many dots. Its usually a good idea to limit something like that to once every few paragraphs at least. Other forms of punctuation can take their places, but that probably goes under grammar.

Anyway, it looks like it might be interesting, so keep working on it. Good luck!

So...more detail, flesh the whole thing out a lot more, work on the grammar, and this should be a good start for a fic.

Alright, ^^'

Yes, I have horrible writing...(grammar in general) skills but trying to publish at least a couple chapters here someday......Its going to take a lot of work before considering that right now

Thanks for all the advice it really help to such a noob to writing like me.

Hey again! Just submitting my plot bunnies and ideas to the Negima fanfiction's area

Arcs:

Coming to Earth:

Summary: Broly’s beginning experiences of Earth and his views on humanity.

The First and one of the last:

Summary: Broly’s first love and one of the last. One-shots of past romantic interests. What could have been?

Early Days:

Summary: Sequel of “The First and one of the last”. The curse from Rao is coming back ten times much stronger! Broly is on a verge of death. Wait…Who’s there?

Detail: Broly "tattoo" saps most of his chi/saiyan powers...and it leave Broly to a point that he is almost dead. Until Negi's cousin (Nekane) stumbles upon him...Worried, She take care of him...Anya and Negi take notice about the new guy and tries to talk/befriend him...Broly just tries to ignore them and says nothing...He try to recover as quickly as he can and leave...

Days go by...Anya and Negi come everyday... still annoying Broly to make him talk to them...to point he has to start befriending them. As he slowly recovers, he grow friendlier and open to Nekane, Anya, and Negi and tries to be help anyway he can. Until an accident happens, where Broly has to use has powers and reveals to them who and what he really is...

Takamichi see this and see his potential. He later introduces himself to Negi (for the first time) and Broly.

Broly will be reckless and want to train and battle all the time and to does nothing else. Like a berserk, His fighting style or how use his power will be out of control (when he recovers back his power)...Takamichi will change that...

Mercenary’s Tale: *Main one I am thinking of working on*

Summary: Roughly, five years has passed since Early Days. It seems Broly life’s purpose on Earth is to complete missions and assignments given to him. How bland a life he has. Or is it? Broly takes on an assignment that going to be more than he can handle. He finally going to cross paths with those he known and make new allies and enemies.

It’s MY life. My decisions to make. NOT Yours:

Summary: Sequel of Mercenary’s Tale. Broly’s journey and renewing to the dark side. Does he really want to kill Negi and the Ala Alba? Or is he being a double agent?

The New Replacement:

Summary: Broly is considered dead and gone. Ala Alba is still picking up the pieces. Although, the organization Broly was working for is sending another person to finish out the mission. Another guardian to “protect” them!? Why does the new replacement seem so darn happy? Why is he insulting Ala Alba? Why does he hate Broly?

My New Purpose:

Summary: Broly’s journey to earning back to friendships and trust of the Ala Alba. Will he? Or will he just fulfill the mission objective assigned to him in the beginning.

Returning back to the early days:

Summary: Broly deicide to come to Japan. But first, the gate port arrives at Wales. The reunions of others girls of 3-A in England. Also, the comeback of Nekane, Takamichi and Jack. Is there more than meets the eyes to Broly and Nekane ?

Mahora’s new errand boy:

Summary: Broly thought he was just going to visit but he ended up with a job. Broly’s new “mission” at Mahora.

Moving on and grow up is bitter but also sweet to do: *side?*

Summary: The girls of 3-A finally graduating middle school and transferring to the high school. Will Negi transfer with? Are any of the girls going to another high school? Are any of the girls going to be in a different class? The growing pains of this transition are included.

Connections/Closer than before:

Summary: True friends never stay out of touch. The 3-A girls are now comfortable with their high school lives. Sophomores/Junior year. Post-teenager Negi and Kotaru. Broly is and knows he is falling in love with one the 3-A girls. Will Broly admit these feelings? Does the girl Broly is falling for feel the same way?

Going Forward:

Junior/Senior high year for the former 3-A girls. The girls are getting ready for college! Broly, Negi and Kotaru are getting comfortable with their lives at Mahora. Everything peaceful and everyone lives are turning out okay,until a freak accident reminds the boys what fate they have in the future. Will they leave everyone without telling or tell them to join on their conquest.

The Mission (side/flashback): * prequel of Coming back to somewhere only we know*:

What the trio (Negi,Kotaru,Broly) were doing for 3 years in the Magic world. *in a dairy format?*

Coming back to somewhere only we know:

Summary: After roughly 3 years of missing in action in the magic world, Negi, Kotaru and Broly finally comes back! Now, they have to confront the people they left behind. How will they react? How did they change?

Vendetta:

Trying the earn back the trust of the people you love is tough. To top it off the enemy (you defeated in the Magic World, which took 3 years of your life) is coming back to Mahora for some payback...great

My Life Now (Future/Epilogue):

Summary: One-shots of Broly’s married or family life.

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