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Torgi Frin
Topic: Help, Please.
Need a little help from anyone who has read 'The meeting of three great heroes' or anyone who is intereted in Danny Phantom, Ben10, Teen Titan, and American Dragon:Jake Long crossovers.

You see, the thing is, I'm running into, well, writer's block, basically the block is hitting me over the head and I can't think of anything, and I need help from anyone who can stop this darn block from hitting me in the head, I'm starting to get a real big migraine.

#1 Jan 02nd 2007, 5:03am
GohanRULEZ
you should make them cousins,it would be so cool,cuzthere really alike.

1:they all have powers.

2:they all have a sister(or in ben's case a cousin) who annoy them

3:there all so damn pig headed.

so it would rock if they were cousins just thonwin' it out.

#2 Jan 25th 2007, 3:11pm
Torgi Frin
I already have the story up. But I decided to delete it and do it where they were cousins like you suggested because I didn't like how it was going. Thanks. I'll put a post on this forum when I do it.
#3 Jan 25th 2007, 6:01pm
GohanRULEZ
yes! you rule dude i will read that story!
#4 Feb 02nd 2007, 12:49pm
Torgi Frin
Haven't done it yet, But I will sonn.
#5 Feb 03rd 2007, 11:52am
GohanRULEZ
dude i need help with my story 'rose in the snow' i have writer's block,have a form for it but if have an idea let me know thanks.
#6 Feb 26th 2007, 4:02pm
Torgi Frin
Okay, just a few tips. First of all, it would be a little bit easier to read the story if you capitalized names and beginnings of sentences etc. And add a few more commas and periods so it's a little easier to keep up. But, besides the fact that you forget to capitalize and someimes forget to add commas and periods, it's a very well written story with an interesting storyline. Hmmm... maybe for the next chapter (this is just an idea) you skip forward a little bit, just to where the babies are a month or so old, and Jake and Rose have been living peacefully, and they think that the huntsclan have given up. But the huntsclan kidnaps one (Or both) of the babies. Just a suggestion.

Oh yeah, one more thing, just a little suggestion, but you might want to name the shows that you get your characters from, so people will know who your talking about. The people who read your story might regognize the characters a little bit easier if they know what shows they are from.

Just a few ideas, hope they helped. If it doesn't, don't hesitate to tell me, and I'll try and help to come up with some other ideas to help you.

#7 Mar 08th 2007, 12:15am

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