Uhm, I have some (okay, maybe a lot) free time in my summer holiday. I'd like to help out reviewing, as well, if people here don't mind. I don't have nothing better to do anyways. XD

Here's a story that I published during my holidays: Captivated - Complete.

Summary : AU, [Roxas x Namine]: Taking a step to the past, can she forget what was once her present and move on? Genres: Romance/Angst. Please, tell me what you guys think. I really appreciate reviews and critiques of any kind; even if you don't like it. It's always better than leaving it not reviewed. :D

Desperation has led me to this place. Really I consider myself a pretty good writer and have been putting too much effort into my fic to be this alienated! Give it a try. I promise it's worth it. :)

Story: Town of Sunset and Shadow

Pairing: Riku/Roxas&Sora

Genre: Romance/Suspense

Summary: Before Sora had ever lost his heart or Riku was even thrown into darkness, Riku knew of Roxas through a strange occurrence in the secret place. Now, after Riku and Sora have returned home, he cannot seem to align his desire to enjoy his homecoming, to flee once more, and for the Nobody without immersing himself in isolation and possible danger, not only for himself but for Sora as well.

Hey, all. I’ve got a new fic here that I’ve been eager to write for quite some time now. The title’s called Kill Switch. I’ll give you the summary:

The tale of three individuals whose births were eclipsed by the darkest shadows destiny had to offer. They are unable to die and be free of their curse, for choosing death would condemn their immortal souls to oblivion. Now they must band together to retaliate against the System preventing their salvation.

The main characters are Roxas, Axel, and Naminé. This is not a Roxas/Axel fic. In fact, there aren’t any pairings at all.

The genre’s Tragedy/Sci-Fi with a lot of action, horror, and government conspiracy in the mix.

Let me know how you like it and please don’t hesitate to offer constructive criticism. It’s much welcomed and appreciated.

Kill Switch

No one likes it, eh? I'll delete it.

Could've said something to me. I did come here for opinions, after all, and not glowing reviews of eternal worship. It's tough to judge my own work, as I imagine it is for everyone. Besides, this site has enough bad fics in it without me adding to the stockpile.

-- SolidusDave

don't assume things just because no reviewed it, this doesn't mean no one likes it there could be many other reasons if it's still up I'll give it a look I've got free time today

I agree.

You have to give it a chance. Just because you don't get a review on the first week you uploaded it doesn't mean people hate it. Keep in mind that other members others things to do and they are not on the website 24/7. It's also summer as well.

exactly, I'm a good example. I thought I would have a lot of time with the summer, and no school, but I've been extremly busy with my mowing job, and house cleaning and all of that stuff. Re-upload the story, because it sounded good, I just never got a chance to read it, and you've already taken it down.

Hey, all...

I didn't mean to sound impatient or anything along those lines. I've had some things going on with my personal life that have directly affected my behavior, so I apologize for that. I'm just going to try and cool down before I do anything else stupid.

I appreciate you taking an interest in my story. I've re-uploaded the prologue, but not the first chapter (prologue's long enough to be considered a chapter, though). I want to expand on that chapter, but I can't do it until things quiet down for me. I'm too much of a nervous wreck to be writing a deeply intricate plot.

Please don't think that I'm doing this for the review count. I'd be happy if someone just PMed me to ask questions about the plot or to say how they liked it (or didn't like it). Feedback is important to me because I have no idea what kind of job I'm doing. Kingdom Hearts is an awesome story on the whole and I would be doing it a great disservice by writing a story that's unworthy of its characters or themes. To me, that's the greatest insult of all.

I realize people are busy, and under normal circumstances, this wouldn't have happened. All I can do is apologize. Please don't feel obligated to review. This time, I'm keeping this story up no matter how many 0's run across its board.

Kill Switch :: Prologue: Proof of Existence

-- SolidusDave

Because I keep writing this story and I honestly want someone's opinion. It's hard to improve one's writing skills when you've got no one reading your stuff and telling you if you failed at the goal at hand. Especially if your goal is to have a nerd in Kingdom Hearts in a way that makes sense to the general public. Feel free to get creative with your reviews... if anyone reviews at all. Generally, I'm just using this as writing practice for a first person narrative. So please (with as many cherries and whirls of whipped cream as your hearts desire) someone tell me if I'm doing this story right or not.

Requiem of A Heart

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5074489/1/Requiem_of_A_Heart

Genre: Self-Insert/General

Rating: T - plethora of bad language and some violence

Summary: In which the world ends and a sarcastic sword wielding teen gets to deal with it as best as she can... and that's to say not at all. Someone's going to pay for this. SI with a dead girl in her sword and a Mysterious Stranger with ulterior motives! Set about five years prior to the events of Kingdom Hearts.

If you don't want to read it, you do not have to. I would just really appreciate it. So, thank you for your time.

--- LdL

It's hard to improve one's writing skills when you've got no one reading your stuff. Feel free to get creative with your reviews... if anyone reviews at all. So please, please, please leave a review and tell me if it looks good and if the characters seem OCC or any other thing you can think of.

Title: Rising Shadows

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5228967/1/Rising_Shadows

Rating: T

Summary: ...Even the brightest light...Can fade away into Darkness...SoraxOC.

Please leave a review! I'm a new author here, and it's my first fanfic.

I have a fanfiction

Your heart or their's?

Sora is an abused child whose father dies from a brain tumor. Who knows not where to go, then he finds Roxas.

Rated: M

Caution: YAOI, drug references, sexual content, disturbing behavior, language and other mature content.

I didn't know that you made yaoi stories Captain. But anyways, I'll review the yours and the other boy love story as soon as I can.

Actually this is my first. I didn't do this cause I didn't find interest before. Now I'm just trying something new.

((Edit: Ignore this. I'm rewriting it right now, and it won't let me delete my post. D: ))

Haha, I finished it now. It's sad that nobody has posted since my edit.. :P Anywho, like seven people have read it. xD Feedback would mean the world to me. Sooo, here's a summary:

Glimpse: A fleeting glimpse of the future sends Namine on a journey to make sure that she, Axel, and Roxas don't end up separated. What starts as her loving intervention explodes into a new journey beyond the Realm of Light into another. During/Post KH2, AkuRoku. http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/story_edit_property.php?storyid=5200956/1/

Sound interesting? Boring? I don't know. It'd be amazing if someone would let me know. :) Thanks!

Hey True, Kai Saitou here. I hate to break it too ya but we have only one, possibly two, people in the Coalition that will read Yaoi stories. That being said I'm going to do something I've never done before. I'll read it and give you a strictly technical review, i.e. grammar, structure, plot, etc. etc.

Oh, okay. Gotcha.

If you don't want to read it because of that, I'm totally fine. (I saw that when I read through your preferences and such, but I also saw someone post a yaoi a bit above me and assumed it'd be okay. Sorry! )

Don't worry about it. I'm fine with reading it. But it will be awhile before I can get to it. My sister is about to have my nephew so I'm caught up in all the family chaos that goes with it. Lol

~Kai Saitou~

Haha, I know how that can be.

And don't worry about it, if yaoi makes you uncomfortable then don't read it.

It's up!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5265724/1/Kingdom_Hearts_Genesis_II_Atonement

I'll make a summary later.

Okay. Here's what my new fic is all about.

It's the second half to my first fic Kingdom Hearts:Genesis.

Summary

After using the power of darkness to return from the dead, Aero escapes the Realm of the dark with his brother Zephyr. However, the real crisis begins for the two boys. Thanks to his master's manipulation, Zephyr has become a vessel for Xehanort's soul, in which he will eventually take control of his body and destroy the Key to the light within Zephyr, along with the Keyblade master.

At this moment, Zephyr has no interest in continuing to live if his whole life has been built up on lies up to this point. He wants to die by Aero's hands, but Aero refuses. During these hard times, the two boys have to learn how to connect, casting aside their resentment towards each other if they want to return to the path of light from which they have fallen from. But can Aero do that without his inner demons consuming his Heart? And can Zephyr do the same? The two of them do not have much time left....

Just a few warnings:

1. It is an OC centric fic. Sora and co are not born yet.

2. It is important that you read the FIRST half before you move on to this because it had important events that lead up to this point in th story

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Hey, all. I’ve got a new Parody/Humor story here that I’ve written just to focus on a different plot for a while.

The title is Operation Pie Eater and it’s rated K+.

Here’s the summary: The Keyblade master undertakes a stealthy operation, risking life and limb for the pastries he loves.

It's a KH parody of Metal Gear Solid but you don't need to know anything about that game to understand what's going on here. All you need handy is knowledge of KH.

I’m working on both Kill Switch and TIAC simultaneously, so they’ll both get updated sometime soon.

Hey there, here's another fic I'm working on: Operation l'amour. I've just posted 2 chapters, but I'd be pleased if someone could give me his/her constructive criticism, creative ideas, or something like that. The link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5266902/1/Operation_lamour

Summary: After KH2 - Selphie has tried many times to make Riku fall in love with her, with no success. When she finds a strange book in the library, everything goes wrong. Selphie and Riku change from body! what to do now? Will they find a way to solve this problem?

Another one-shot i did instead of focusing on Retribution.......yeah...I know....just shoot me :P

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5310104/1/Pain

Hope everyone enjoys it!

Um...if it's okay, could I put a link to my story up here too? It's a Squiffie one. Um...here you go. ^^

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5205056/1/Waltz_For_The_Moon_On_Your_Birthday

Please enjoy!

Um...hi. Here's the link to my story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5356919/1/Kingdom_Hearts_Another_Reality

Summary: Set in an alternate Kh2 universe. A year after Ansem's defeat, Sora, Donald and Goofy awaken in a hospital. How did they ended there? Where are Riku and the King? And what are those words Sora can see?

The story is very short, but that was my intention.

It's called Countdown. It's an Organization story. Hope you guys enjoy. :D

Hey, sure you can check mine out. It's a "Next Generation" fic centered around Sora's children as they go on a journey like he did.

The FULL summary is inside. It's really long just to let ya know. The story is called Power of One: Society of Shadows.

I'm a new author here, and I would really appreciate all the honest reviews about how it so far.

Once the story gets going I would also like it if you could warn me if a character from the KHI and II games is getting out of character. I'd really appreciate that.

Okay, I'm writing a story right now about what happens after KH2. It's slightly AU 'cause I changed a few things toward the end of the 2nd game. Anyway, the story is told in first-person POV but through more than one person, so I split it up into different fics. There's more info about it on my profile if you want to know more.

The story hasn't gotten very far yet, but this is what the basic plot will be when I finally manage to get there. The Heartless counterparts of Organization XIII are causing trouble through the Worlds and Sora has to stop them; but Axel (Yes, he's alive. Like I said, slightly AU) finds out that he has a chance to reclaim his Heart if he can find his Heartless. So it becomes a race to find his Heartless before Sora kills it.

There's more to it than that, but I'm too lazy to type it all out right now. The summaries I put on the actual fics are below in bold.

Also, I've gotten some reviews that say 'It's good' or 'I like it' or whatever else, but what I really would like is if someone would give me some constructive criticism. The reviews I've gotten to this point have been too vague for me to tell what needs to be changed/improved, and what is good as is.

No Yaoi/Yuri. Slight AU. Canon after KH, CoM, and KH2 is not taken into account.

This one is Axel's -

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4790554/1/After_Organization_XIII_Axel

When Demyx reappears with his Heart, Axel finds himself being dragged on a wild adventure spanning the worlds; all while trying to keep the young musician who has forgotten his past out of trouble and finding clues as to where his own Heart is. NonYaoi

And this one is for Edym (Demyx's Other) -

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4790559/1/After_Organization_XIII_Edym

The last ten years are a total blank to Edym, but his memory of the past is slowly returning. His goal isn’t just to recover his forgotten memories however; he’s also on a mission to help a friend of the past regain something he’s lost. His Heart. NonYaoi

To anyone who actually bothers to take a look, thank you!

Hm... I figure I might as well post this here, since it's getting a depressingly low amount of reviews (I'll never understand why my old crappy stories got dozens of reviews, but when I actually write something better nobody looks twice at it...)

It's called "Organization XIII: Fangirl Extermination Squad" and it's pretty much AU. Takes place in what's essentially real-life Earth, with a few small changes, so there's no Disney characters, no Heartless, no Nobodies, and most of all none of the usual Light and Darkness crap. There are quite a lot of OCs, but they're mostly secondary characters--the original thirteen Organization members are the main focus of the story. In this universe, they're a group that formed to study and wipe out the newest threat to the world, creatures spawned from the Internet: Fangirls. Some other Kingdom Hearts characters (Sora, Riku, Ansem and not-particularly-Wise, and maybe Terra/Aqua/Ven) will show up later on in the story, though they haven't been introduced just yet.

Here's the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5178400/1/Organization_XIII_Fangirl_Extermination_Squad

ugh......I would like to apologize to everyone who has posted a story up fairly recently......this is probably the ten hundredth millionth time I've said this but being a senior in high school is not condusive to having ANY time for fanfiction.......So my reviews might come over the holidays....sorry for the wait.

~Kai Saitou~

Here's a good one. I decided to get a little out there.

Title: "Link thy Chain"

Fandom: Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time/Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories

Genre: Adventure/Romance

Summary: After many toil and hardships, Link has defeated Ganondorf and the Seven sages have sealed him away. But in exchange, Link lost the chance to be with Saria. Three years have gone by with Link in depression. One night four years later, nightmares from an unknown place have be sent to him, with Saria's voice in the background. After dealing with them for three months, Link finally realizes that Saria may be calling out to him to rescue her. Following his heart, Link sets out on a journey, with Mido as his companion, Master Sword in hand, and follows his Heart to Castle Oblivion. But one must remember: Memory may the key, but it also be ones worst nightmare. And Castle Oblivion, is full of memories.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5488126/1/Link_Thy_Chain

Status: Not complete.

Other notes: The story proceeds very quickly in the beginning, but then soon starts to slow after Chapter 2. There is a order or specific way on how the chapters are written:

If it is on a floor of Castle Oblivion: It will range from 1000-2000 words. Details are kept at a minimum. This is also used to help further relationships with other characters. It can either be slow or fast.

If it inside a memory: Then it will range from 4000-5000 words and great details of the surrounding area. Most of the dialouge is kept as battle chatter as the characters can't talk much while fighting. Only when they possess a break will it not. Story will also be very specific on the memory that Link accesses. Story slows down alot here.

If it is with the Organization: Chapters will be less than 1000 words. There is where most of the plot develops from. It proceeds very quickly.

If it is a fight between an organization member or something else: It is questionable then how long the chapter will be. Very little dialouge will be made and great details of the fight will be made.

If it is something important happening: It could range from little to many words. All depends on how important the cutscene is. Slowest kinds of chapters.

Link personality that is made is derived as very similar to Sora's but more anger oritentated. He gets angry and fustrated more easily; and he's a little more agressive. However, he is still the same kind hearted indiviual as portrayed by many of games. Mido here has warmed up to the guy, but has his outbursts at times.

There's also a new character called Ariasx. We will see what involvement she has as the story proceeds.

Well there are six chapters up. Let's see how this is going. I cant wait for your reviews.

In addition for that, I also have a one-shot humor story about the Organization. And I pulled out everything for this fic. I didn't hold back on this. There's more swearing and sex oritentated things than Chirs Rock: Never scared.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5222168/1/The_Disorganized_Organization

*underbreath* you can do this, you can do this, you can do this...

*deep breath* Wouldsomeonepleasecheckoutmystory?

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Title: Dabble in Drabbles: 100 Days

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5488958/1/Dabble_in_Drabbles_100_Days

Summary: Goal - Write a drabble a day for 100 days on anything having to do with Kingdom Hearts. Humor, romance, drama, angst... a mixed bag of anything... odds and ends of everything... all will be fair game.

For those of you posting stories on here in hopes of getting a review or two, allow me to be the first to apologize. I regret to inform all people that post here in the near future that this forum is more or less dead. Many of us are very swamped with either school, life, or other things, and we just don't honestly have the time to look at your stories. This forum is not dead yet, attempts to revive it will be made later on down the road, but unfortunately, I can't really promise anything. For those of you who have posted your stories, let me say to not be discouraged by the lack of reviews you get. Have hope, and one day your story will get someone to look at it and write a review. Just because we don't review the story doesn't mean you should give up hope, keep it up. For those of you who have been here a while...it sure was fun while it lasted, at least the General Conversation topic is still kind of alive...off and on...

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