Watari stared out the window at the gray sky and rain, pressing his hand to the glass. "Damn this case and damn that man for being so by the book." But he knew he couldn't blame Tatsumi for the way he was. "And damn me for loving him...even though he doesn't love me." He closed his eyes, fighting back tears. He thought he was alone in the darkened hotel room. He could have sworn Tatsumi was still getting ice around the corner, could feel the emptyness around him. but suddenly arms wrapped themselves tightly around him and a voice whispered so softly that he almost couldn't hear the words. "Watari...don't beat yourself up over me. i love you...just in my own way." Watari slowly turned, eyes wide with fear. how had he kown what he was thinking? before he could speak, soft lips were pressed against his and Watari melted all over again. "Damn us both for giving in to each other." Tatsumi smirked. "Yes, both." Watari looked up into his eyes. "How do you keep reading my mind?" Tatsumi chuckled. "You don't realize you've said every last word aloud?" Watari shook his head, still staring at him. Tatsumi sighed softly and gently ran his fingers through Watari's hair, tugging out the scarf. "Shut up and come back to bed, we have work tomorrow you know." Watari smiled and nodded as Tatsumi wrapped his arm around the blond's waist and pulled him back to the warmth of the comforter. "Good night Watari." Watari sighed happily as he felt Tatsumi's arm still around his waist. "But what about the ice?" Tatsumi glanced at him for a moment. "You were dreaming, now good night." Watari closed his eyes. "Good night Tatsumi."

Tsuzuki watched as the last of the rose petals curled into naught but black ashes. He had thought that he would feel satisfication upon completion of his task, but no... He still felt cold, so cold.

Vamp468's sentence defintely intrigues me, what task I wonder, awww more Tsuzuki pain.

shonen-aigoddess : maybe if you add more of Watari's thoughts, perhaps a flash-back to an incident or two that started this train of thought (could be a day ago or years ago), lamenting over Tatsumi's feelings for Tatsumi (thinking that they destroy any chance Watari has with Tatsumi). Perhaps he feels a little bitter towards Tsuzuki, then is instantly guilty because Tsuzuki is a friend. Maybe this is putting a strain on his friendship with Tsuzuki (or Tatsumi, for that matter). So he's tourturing himself, and has no idea that Tatsumi cares about him. And maybe you should add a bit with Tatsumi's thoughts?

Vamp468 : sorry, but there isn't enough for me to go on. It's interesting, though.

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