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This is where you can diss stories and Author from any catogory not just wrestling. And let me tell you there are alot of bad Diagnosis Murders

#1 Jan 01st 2006, 7:12am

Cutkitty

Any stories? Isn't that mean? Oh well, there fault 4 making bad stories! Um, 'Diary' by Keyala. it sux, the grammer is all messed up, and it's soooooooooooooooooo gross!

#2 Jan 20th 2006, 1:34pm

Princess-asturia

Really? I mean, you ought to tell them yourselves that they should check their grammar time and time again... of course, I have to admit, I've had my fair share of wrong spellings and wrong grammars as well, right? I mean it doesn't mean we, as other authors should badly criticize them for their faulty grammar.

But oh well, it's the opinion of one person, right?

#3 Feb 08th 2006, 5:53pm

laverdad

Actually, we have no responsibilty to be whispering in their ear for them to check their grammar. If you want to post a story, you should make it easy to read. I don't agree that we should tell them, "You suck" without a valid reason, but if there is so much bad grammar and bad spelling, then we have every right. It's their fault for not caring enough about their own stories to check their grammar. I'm not saying I expect every story I read to be perfect, but I expect some degree of legibility.

#4 Feb 12th 2006, 3:56pm

Dr. JNHardy

omg, I read that story. *cringes* it was disgusting. but the review pages already said that, so I didn't review.

#5 May 05th 2006, 1:01pm

BubblyShell22

I think the worst story I've ever read is "Della Is Cool" by Della9. It's in the Cheetah Girls section, but it isn't even about the Cheetah Girls. It's a silly little blog which is ridiculous. She can't even spell worth a crap either.

#6 Jan 31st 2007, 5:19am

doCHAI

omg, i just finished reading the 'diary' thing and it was disgusting... i wanna throw up... i didn't review it because i don't want to get into a fight like those people there... i think the author's sick and retarded...

#7 Aug 19th 2007, 7:38am

Lucy-Jane

I thought that the whole Diary story was being blown out of proportion...O..M...G...

That has to be the abosolute worst story I have ever read...but i did review it and tried to be supportive, let me know what you think of my review (I did throw in some hidden insults haha!)

"ummmmmm, well...where to begin,

I understand when writing a story like this, sometimes you get in the moment and find yourself leaving out details or certain literary aspects. I've done it time and time again...but I think that you can write an equally erotic story without using such tasteless and immature vulgarities. That is what marks the growth of a writer...

That being said, I seriously question your age and profile, most 18 year olds do not write like this, I would surmise that you are 16 and possibly younger, b/c this is almost identical to the story I wrote at 14.

Aside from that, This is my suggestion,

Take the story and write more INTO it. Add descriptive sentences, comparative similies or metaphors such as when they were in the shower, hot water gives us a plethora of comparitive references.

Add a little more background, a little more lead up to the actual scene. You'd be suprised how much a little infor or description can help a story, and one last suggestion, the word '**' can be used, don't get my wrong, but over usage again signals a lack of maturity or literary skill, use it sparingly and usually only in dialog,

I hope this helps and good luck!"

God...it was an awful story wasnt it...does anybody agree with my review, even if it's just parts of it?

Lucy-Jane

#8 Sep 05th 2007, 7:56pm

BubblyShell22

I do, even though I haven't read this story at all. However, what you said is good and constructive.

#9 Sep 10th 2007, 8:00am

Lucy-Jane

Thanks, If you haven't read it and don't want to be disgusted, then I suggest you steer clear of it, it is not something enjoyable to read..

#10 Sep 11th 2007, 5:15pm

BubblyShell22

Okay, thanks for the advice.

#11 Sep 19th 2007, 8:27am

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