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reimihara21

Title: Harry Potter Spinoff

Length/Chapters: 9 Chapters/9869 Words

How long has it been posted?: 5 months

How many reviews does it have?: 4

Characters/pairings: HP/OC; DM/OC(main pairings)

Summary:HP in a whole new twisted way. this is hp in my charc. POV and its in 3rd person with my own twist with animes and some movies plus a lot of pairings. looking for a dif HP stry mine might be it.main pairings.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4146465/1/Harry_Potter_Spinoff

#51 Aug 19th 2008, 1:52am
Deluxe Sugar Quills

Title: Voldemort's Lesson.

Length/Chapters: 912 words. (Oneshot)

How long has it been posted?: Since 3-6-08.

How many reviews does it have?: 4.

Characters/pairings: Voldemort and Snape (not a pairing).

Summary: Ever wonder how Voldemort could fly? Watch him pass his power onto Snape -- in case of a Potter attack.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4116136/1/Voldemorts_Lesson

#52 Aug 19th 2008, 9:17am
the madcap magician

My very first 'published' fan fiction, need some experienced eyes to tell me how i'm doing so far.

Title: Harry Potter and the Ministry of Magic

Length/Chapters: 77,000 words/six chapters so far, chapter 7 out soon

How long has it been posted: First chapter went up at the end of July

How many reviews does it have: 18 or 19 at last count

Characters/Pairings: Harry/Ginny Ron/Hermione/Fawkes Luna/Neville

Summary: At the end of his sixth year at Hogwarts, Harry's life is in turmoil, Dumbledore is dead, Voldemort's power is growing, and those with the power to help him cannot be trusted. Dark times lie ahead, but allies can be found in some of the strangest places!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4435432/1/

#53 Aug 19th 2008, 1:31pm
Bubbles-ZeeCrzy1

im back. have another fanfic that i put out. XD

Title: Alone and Too Sweet

Length/Chapters: about 1500 words/ oneshot

How long has it been posted: about 1 hour

How many reviews does it have: 2

Characters/Pairings: Draco, Hermione, Lucius

Summary: Every crack of the whip made him cringe. Crack! Cringe. Crack! Cringe. All he wanted to do was to save her, and himself, from this torture. But how? He had one idea... Songfic. Oneshot.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4485524/1/

#54 Aug 19th 2008, 5:44pm . Edited Aug 19th 2008, 5:46pm
Fallingintonothing

Title:Gambling with fate

Length/Chapters:2 [so far]

How long has it been posted?:18 days

How many reviews does it have?:5

Characters/pairings: Lily/James

Summary:What do the dice want me to know about James?" She was sacred to ask everyone else seemed to be freaked as well. Natalia sighed. "That your true love is James Potter

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4441337&chapter=1

#55 Aug 19th 2008, 6:08pm . Edited Aug 19th 2008, 6:12pm
x8jessica8x

Title: If You Only Knew

Length/Chapters: 1, Complete

How long has it been posted?: Since 6-2-08

How many reviews does it have?: as of this moment, 7.

Characters/pairings: Neville Longbottom

Summary: Neville is the way he is for a reason.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4296312/1/If_You_Only_Knew

Thank you for considering my fic.

#56 Aug 19th 2008, 9:30pm
x8jessica8x

CelticDragonfly,

I read your story and left you two reviews. It waas very good.

#57 Aug 19th 2008, 10:08pm
Emerald Olive

Hey everyone! Well, I found out about the Reviews Lounge about a year ago, and absolutely loved the whole idea of it, and then took an unannounced extended leave of absense from fanfiction. hehe.

But, I'm back! I just recently updated a new chapter of my story, Of Life and Lies, and I'd really love some more feedback from the fantastic people here. This story is already in the archive, but I'd just like to promote it a little because I'm not sure many people know about it =)

Title: Of Life and Lies

Length/Chapters: 10 Chapters, 25765 words

How long has it been posted?: Since last summer, but the latest chapter was updated a couple of days ago

How many reviews does it have?: 53 (which really only boils down to about 5 per chapter.....)

Characters/pairings: Kendra/Percival, Albus, Aberforth, Ariana

Summary: This is the story of the Dumbledore family: Albus, Aberforth, Ariana, Kendra and Percival. A family that was broken apart by vengeance, ambition, love, life and lies.

Link: Of Life and Lies

Thanks everyone!!!

#58 Aug 20th 2008, 1:44pm
Moge-

Title: Unrequited.

Length/Chapters: Oneshot/1092 words

How long has it been posted?: About an hour...

How many reviews does it have?: Four

Characters/pairings: Pansy/Filch - Don't let it put you off, written for the never before seen pairings challenge on HPFC

Summary: 'He hates Saturdays. They remind him of a girl he used to love.'

Link: Unrequited.

#59 Aug 20th 2008, 1:45pm
reimihara21

thanks. i'll read yours too when i have time. have to draw for my hw

#60 Aug 20th 2008, 4:21pm
PrincessDoubleT

Title:Return

Length/Chapters:8 Chapters so far

How long has it been posted?: since 8-11-2008

How many reviews does it have?: 7

Characters/pairings: Draco/OC

Summary: Our three favorite Hogwarts students are back to repeat their 7th year,with a new friend and a changed rival, this year will be anything but ordinairy!First Fic,please Read and Review!.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4464944/1/Return

#61 Aug 21st 2008, 10:22am
Just a Supergirl

Title: Empty Chairs And Empty Tables

Length/Chapters: Oneshot; 761 words

How long has it been posted?: About a day

How many reviews does it have?: Seven

Characters/pairings: Draco/Astoria, Daphne Greengrass.

Summary: Astoria never did like her sister. Requested drabble, Draco/Astoria pairing.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4487877/1/Empty_Chairs_And_Empty_Tables

#62 Aug 21st 2008, 5:02pm
kishiee

Title: Passion and Quidditch

Length/Chapters: Two chapters as of now. 2270 words.

How long has it been posted?: Less than five days.

How many reviews does it have?: 1

Characters/pairings: Oliver Wood/Ginny Weasley

Summary: Oliver gets into trouble in a game and as punishment, he is sent back to Hogwarts to teach flying and there he meets the fiery Weasley girl and finds they have more in common than they know.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4463816/1/Passion_and_Quidditch

#63 Aug 22nd 2008, 3:32am
RandomConception

Title: New Moon, New Beginning

Length/Chapters: 12,812 / 8

How long has it been posted?: about 12 days now

How many reviews does it have?: 9

Characters/pairings: Pairings – Severus Snape/Abigail Anderson (OC), Other Characters – The basics, I’m trying to get everyone seen at least once.

Summary: I don’t really know where it will lead but I have a general idea of what I want from it. It takes place after DH and Dumbledore had never died, neither did Snape, obviously, and I haven’t gotten him in it yet but neither does Fred.

So the Dark Lord is gone, and the wizardry world is safe, but like in every situation danger lurks around every corner. Snape, who was forced from Hogwarts for the summer has met a woman, however unlikely that may seem. Not only is he being targeted for the death of Voldemort, he comes to learn that there are even more rivals of the Wizardry world. But how does this woman come into the picture?

A/N: Summary is scratchy and messy I know J, but I think it’s a good plot.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4463746/1/New_Moon_New_Beginning

#64 Aug 22nd 2008, 7:22am
xosweetdreamsxo2

Title: Seventeen Forever [was orignally called Their Story]

Length/Chapters: so far, six chapters although i plan it to be up to thirty (i have high expectations)

How long has it been posted?: since August 18th

How many reviews does it have?: two reviews :(

Characters/pairings: James/Lily, Sirius, Remus, Peter, OCs

Summary: Basically, it's the story of Lily and James finally falling in love with one another. It also focuses on the Marauders and their problems. It takes place from the last couple of months of their sixth year to the beginning of summer after seventh year.

Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4482013/1/Seventeen_Forever

#65 Aug 22nd 2008, 8:02pm
bookwormofmassiveproportions

Title: A Sirius Problem

L/C: 10 chaps, 11668 words

Posted: 5/30/07

Reviews: 28

C/P: Marauders, Lily, OC (SB/OC, L/J, maybe RL/OC)

Summary: Sirius is pregnant. Strange premise, I know, but I have been assured that it's a funny fic. Sadly, that's all I'm getting. I'd love a little criticism from anyone (ANYONE!!) who wants to review it.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3566557/1/A_Sirius_Problem

#66 Aug 23rd 2008, 2:36pm
opaque-girl

Title: Lets Learn How to Deul

Length/Chapters: Till now 4 chapters

How long has it been posted?: It was posted in 2006 but i have now edited and re-posted

How many reviews does it have?: 43 Reviews

Characters/pairings: Ginny/Draco

Summary: When all the 7th graders are told that they are going to train the 6th graders how to duel, Harry Potter is sure, that his gf will be assigned with him. But what happens when Snape assigns Draco Malfoy to teach Ginny Weasley how to duel? Sparks fly...

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3166065/1/Lets_learn_how_to_Duel

#67 Aug 24th 2008, 2:17am
Colin Creevey

Title: The Wizard Hunter

Length/Chapters: 15

How long has it been posted?: 2 months

How many reviews does it have?: 5

Characters/pairings: Ernie MacMillan/OC

Summary: Self explanatory. A Muggle, as a child, finds out Wizards exist. As an adult, he hunts them. Little does he know one of his friends is a Wizard.

I posted this story a while ago, but I think the HP category is too active. I dont think many people know it exists. Thats my theory. Just please check it out and let me know what u think of it.

-Colin Creevey- (the one who returned from the dead as a crazed writer)

#68 Aug 24th 2008, 7:48am
Miss Bella Green

Title: Somewhere Along the Line Part I

Length/Chapters: 2

How long has it been posted?: 1 month

How many reviews does it have?: 6

Characters/pairings: Lily/James ...

Summary: What would've happened if Severus Snape had died that night in his fifth year. Voldemort will still reign and everything will be worse.

#69 Aug 24th 2008, 4:34pm
respitechristopher

Minions and Thralls: More Mercurial Madness is afoot! Chapter 2 of "Angelica" has just been posted. And it's not just a chapter, but a "Very Special Episode" of The Mercury Chronicles. Do make sure you've read "The Mercury Chronicles: A Hogsmeade Debut" first.

Title: The Mercury Chronicles: Angelica

Length/Chapters: 2

How long has it been posted?: 10 minutes or so.

How many reviews does it have?: Haven't refreshed my e-mail yet.

Characters/pairings: Albus/OC. ScoRose.

Read. Review. Tell a friend!

#70 Aug 24th 2008, 9:05pm
Elliot Pole

Title: Book Eight - Lily Potter and the Uppas of Declome

Length/Chapters: 1 Chapter, 4022 words

How long has it been posted? A year.

How many review does it have? 1

Characters/Pairings: Lily Potter

Summary: Harry's daughter is going to Hogwarts, but what happens when she's put in Hufflepuff? Find out!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3701828/1/Book_Eight_Lily_Potter_and_the_Uppas_of_Declome

#71 Aug 25th 2008, 8:24am
iheartwritingstories

i requested this story a few days ago, but i thought i'd try again.

Title: For the Love of Chocolate

Length/Chapters: 1038/ one-shot

How long has it been posted?: 2 weeks

How many reviews does it have?: 7

Characters/pairings: james and lily

Summary: A wish that James Potter has had for a long time finally comes true.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4468335/1/For_the_Love_of_Chocolate

#72 Aug 25th 2008, 2:41pm
L'amoureuse

Title: Hard To Find

Author: yours truly

Length/Chapters: two chapters, over six thousand words

How long has it been posted?: a few hours, but its been in the making for a month or so

How many reviews does it have?: none :(

Characters/pairings: Lily/James, sirius/OC

Summary: Lily Evans and her best friend Arabella Figg were often noted as brilliant and beautiful loners, girls who were mysterious in every way. Golden boy James Potter and his best friends were always in the center of attention. How can these two unlikely characters ever fall in love? Slightly AU.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4499788/1/Hard_To_Find

#73 Aug 25th 2008, 11:57pm
SweetSorrowxx

Title: Love Unending

Length/Chapters: 2592/1

How long has it been posted?: Almost three days

How many reviews does it have?: 1

Characters/pairings: L/J, mainly.

Summary: Only three things can endure forever in times of trouble. Hope, faith, and most of all, love. "The words ‘James Potter’ and ‘modest’ do not belong in the same sentence unless the words ‘is not’ are between them.” Or not...

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4496745/1/Love_Unending

#74 Aug 26th 2008, 8:06pm
Lizzy Lovegood

Title: Distorted Reflections

Length/Chapters: It has two chapter and is around 1,900 words total. I am currently working on Chapter 3.

How long has it been posted: Since August 13th

How many reviews does it have: 4

Characters/pairings: An orginal Muggle character and Remus Lupin. One of the pairings is going to - tentatively - be Remus/Tonks and unrequited OC/Remus. It's hard to explain.

Summary: Sixteen-year-old Diana Lark has been unhinged by Remus Lupin's death in the seventh book. However, what happens when she discovers that not only is the world of Harry Potter real, but that everything the best-selling series ever said, was a lie?

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4469775/1/Distorted_Reflections

#75 Aug 27th 2008, 7:47am . Edited Aug 27th 2008, 7:48am
HPFanFictionFan

I put a lot of effort into editing this older one-shot of mine today. I really want to improve my writing. And my English, too!

Title: Alicia & Fred

Length/Chapters: 1 chapter, a little more than 3,000 words

How long has it been posted?: Original version has been posted for a couple months

How many reviews does it have?: 17, one is a bad one, because in the original version I used German punctuation. I edited that.

Characters/pairings: Characters are mostly Alicia Spinnet and Fred Weasley, pairing: Alicia & George Weasley

Summary: After George lost his ear Fred goes to tell Alicia about it. The two of them have a little conversation and Alicia gets to see a part of Fred she hasn't known before.

Link: Alicia And Fred

#76 Aug 27th 2008, 1:06pm
froggiefriends

is this just for harry potter fics?

#77 Aug 27th 2008, 3:31pm
respitechristopher

is this just for harry potter fics?

Yup. Less need for polarized sunglasses that way.

#78 Aug 27th 2008, 5:22pm
reimihara21

Title(s): All my fics

link: fanfiction.net/~reimhihara21

#79 Aug 27th 2008, 9:53pm
dragonfire owns

Title: The New Marauders

Length/Chapters: 4 chapters, 4000 words

How long has it been posted?: 9 days

How many reviews does it have?: 13

Characters: Harry, Tonks, Fred, George, Hermione, Ron and Ginny are the main ones

Pairings: Harry/Tonks

Summary: Sirius convinces Harry to carry on the Marauder legacy. Craziness ensues. Fifth year.

Link: The new Marauders

#80 Aug 28th 2008, 1:45pm
Lexie-H

is this just for harry potter fics?

Yup. Less need for polarized sunglasses that way.

Ha! I love you, Chris.... *laughs*

Yes, this is just for the HP fics, because we're actually a HP specific forum and archive =)

#81 Aug 28th 2008, 3:14pm
Sara Winters

we're actually a HP specific forum and archive =)

You should edit the forum description to state that it's only for HP.

#82 Aug 28th 2008, 3:23pm
Lexie-H

*frowns* well.... good idea, logical, etc etc BUT - isn't finding us in the HP categories for both fairly self explanatory for most people?? (I would have thought so...?)

#83 Aug 28th 2008, 3:43pm
Lexie-H

Redirected from 'Recommend':

Deluxe Sugar Quills

I feel slightly bad for putting up my own work, but it's been up for nearly 6 months now, so... yeah.

Title: Voldemort's Lesson

Author: Deluxe Sugar Quills (totally.)

Length: 912 words. (Oneshot)

Character(s): Voldemort & Snape. (not a pairing)

Summary: Ever wonder how Voldemort could fly? Watch him pass his power onto Snape -- in case of a Potter attack.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4116136/1/Voldemorts_Lesson

and ....

nasimrochester

Title: The Touching End of Bellatrix Lestrange

Author: me! (nasimrochester)

Length: (chapters/words) oneshot of 558 words

Character(s):oneshot

Summary:This is crazy but I thought interesting. It;s an alternative ending to Bellatrix and Voldemort's sick relationship.oneshot

Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4465270/1/The_Touching_End_of_Bellatrix_Lestrange

#84 Aug 29th 2008, 5:21am . Edited Aug 29th 2008, 5:22am
PrincessDoubleT

Title:Return

Length/Chapters:6

How long has it been posted?: since 8-11-2008

How many reviews does it have?: 8

Characters/pairings: Draco/OC

Summary: Our three favorite Hogwarts students are back to repeat their 7th year,with a new friend and a changed rival, this year will be anything but ordinairy!First Fic,please Read and Review!.

So I asked for review on this story before but I've done some major editing thanks to my amazing beta charli800

So hopefully it has changed for the better,so read and review please!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4464944/1/Return

#85 Aug 29th 2008, 11:26am
Humnut

Title: 7 Floors of Crazy

How long has it been posted: No more than a few days, a week at most.

How many reviews: Four, so far.

Characters: (No true pairings) Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Neville, Collin, Denis, OC, Peeves, Snape, Minerva, Dobby, Severus and Albus.

Summary: What could Harry, Ron and Hermione find on their way down to the Great Hall for breakfast, you'll just have to read to find out. M for slight language and mature scenes.

Link: 7 Floors of Crazy

#86 Aug 30th 2008, 5:53am
strawberryfields091

Title: Let Love In

Length/Chapters: 6,710 words/12 chapters

How long has it been posted?: about 4 months

How many reviews does it have?: 28

Characters/pairings: Percy/Audrey is the main pairing (this story is for kyota-chan's aboard the love boat challenge) but the other weasleys pop up too, as well as some characters i've made up.

Summary: the story of how percy and audrey got together. i haven't yet decided where it'll end, but it starts in the autumn after the second war. there's fluff and angst and some stuff in between, the chapters are generally short. i've loved writing this and would siriusly (teehee couldn't resist!) appreciate if you guys checked it out.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4208790/1/Let_Love_In

#87 Aug 30th 2008, 8:53pm
EvilMuffinsOfDeath

Title:Odds and Ends

Length/Chapters: 1

How long has it been posted?:8-25-08... since then

How many reviews does it have?:1 :(

Characters/pairings: Cho/George, Harry/Ginny

Summary: for the shuffle challenge

Link: i am unable to post a link... stupid computer. Can you just click on my pen name and find it... sorry.

#88 Aug 31st 2008, 9:21am
En-En-chan

Oooh, interesting... Just found out this thread.

Title: Wherever It Takes You

Length/Chapters: 15,500 words approx. 15 chapters

How long has it been posted?: Last chapter was on 18/08/08

How many reviews does it have?: 42 (It might sound a lot, but with 15 chapters, that's only around 2-3 reviews on average)

Characters/pairings: mainly James/Lily, but a little bit of Remus/OC, and possibly Sirius/OC later on

Summary: Follow James, Lily and their friends through their seventh year at Hogwarts, with a whole load of new students.

Link: Wherever It Takes You : Chapter 1

Also, I think that people should actually put what their story's ratings and genres are, so we know what the story's like since some people don't read M stuff, or Horror, or something like that. Just a suggestion.

So 'Wherever It Takes You's genre is: Romance; and is a T.

#89 Aug 31st 2008, 10:22am
iheartwritingstories

Title: Spider Incident

Length/Chapters: 507 words

How long has it been posted?: since 8/13/08

How many reviews does it have?: 8

Characters/pairings: Ron

Summary: Ron vs. Spider: who will win? Based on a true story.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4471057/1/Spider_Incident

#90 Aug 31st 2008, 3:10pm
The Reviews Lounge

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#91 Sep 01st 2008, 6:53am


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