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otherrealmwriter
Topic: Ask for reviews here and not seem like a whore! XP How fun! Yeah!

I noticed a lot of topics popping up asking for reviews. So how about we open up one big topic for people to post the stories they want reviews on. Me? I can't pick just one right now....... but these are my fandoms: Invader Zim, Ed, Edd n Eddy, Card Captor Sakura, Powerpuff Girls, Grim and Evil, Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends, Harry Potter, Cartoon X-overs, Bleach, Misc. Cartoons, Naruto, and Angel Sanctuary. I will be willing to read most everyone's fanfics unless it's in a fandom I DISPISE. I just thought this would be a fun topic to open.

Request for reviews should be bolded and any links are appricated

Publicly replying to a review should be in italics and/or underlined.

#1 Mar 29th 2008, 12:11pm . Edited Apr 10th 2008, 3:46pm
Darkwinter999

Sounds cool!

I wrote several stories for Batman Beyond, but the last one (Joke's on Batman) is definitely the best. I get deep in the psychology of the character and try to find out just how far I can push the poor kid. I already broke a couple versions of him.

#2 Mar 29th 2008, 12:31pm . Edited Apr 10th 2008, 1:00pm
otherrealmwriter

I'll see what I can do with them, I don't know that fandom all too well but I'll see what I can do.

#3 Mar 29th 2008, 12:58pm
REVOLuTiontte En Casca

Pity this thread came late....two more potential last word games have formed....

#4 Mar 30th 2008, 12:55am
Darkwinter999

Thanks Relm.

I think this thread was actually inspired by those last wordable threads.

#5 Mar 30th 2008, 9:17am
otherrealmwriter

I think this thread was actually inspired by those last wordable threads.

It was. I thought if those topics were popping up like the last word ones that should go to the help topic, I figured that it would be easier and neater to just open up one big topic for it. I kind of modeled this after the help topic. I wonder if this could become a pinned topic........

#6 Mar 30th 2008, 10:25am
Darkwinter999

It's certainly a good idea. Some fandoms are unpopular, so advertising is likely the only way to get any recognition for your fic.

#7 Mar 30th 2008, 12:28pm
otherrealmwriter

I have 2 fics in unpopular fandoms, Rocko's Modren Life (under Misc. Cartoons as it doesn't have it's own catagory.) and Angel Sancutary.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3719962/1/Wheres_the_car_Mommy

Where's the Car Mommy? Rocko's Modren Life The story of the lost boy Rocko and Heiffer run into at the Otown mall while looking for a parking space. Oneshot.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4068838/1/Lord_Have_Mercy

Lord Have Mercy, in Angel Sanctuary Kirie's thoughts on her love for Rosiel and her desire to please him and help him achieve his dreams. Oneshot Kirie's POV Inspired by Mr. Mister's Kyrie. Slight hints of KiriexRosiel

#8 Mar 30th 2008, 1:05pm . Edited Apr 10th 2008, 3:43pm
Hiro Konobu

I should probably advertise my stuff...though I don't have anything new to post, but my older stuff can be reviewed just look in my profile, and you'll find them.

#9 Mar 30th 2008, 9:10pm
Lady Saru

Hey! I'm new here....

But review anything of mine. I put lots of effort into my stories, and want some feedback. Hit me!

#10 Mar 31st 2008, 4:10pm
Palex4life

I write Palex for Degrassi. I used to write Rai/Kim for Xiaolin Showdown. That used to be really popular. I guess people liked that I told them what they wanted to hear.

#11 Mar 31st 2008, 4:16pm
xxpiratexx

Here's my humorous LilyJames fic!

I would like some MEANINGFUL reviews, not the c*** I've been getting.

Please?

I'm aware there's a couple typos in the first chappie, and maybe like one or two in the second, but from the third on, I'm pretty sure it's fine.

R&R,

Rose

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4125713/1/He_Who_Must_Not_Be_James_ed

#12 Apr 01st 2008, 5:59am
otherrealmwriter

Just reviewed your fic pirate! :) I left my thoughts and comments on it as well.

#13 Apr 01st 2008, 11:29am
Irindiglo

Why would we seem like whores for asking for reviews? Why not just review monger?

#14 Apr 01st 2008, 11:38am
otherrealmwriter

The whore thing makes the title seem more interesting. XP

#15 Apr 01st 2008, 12:13pm
Irindiglo

True, hehe xD

#16 Apr 01st 2008, 12:26pm
otherrealmwriter

There's a saying "sex sells"..... XD

#17 Apr 01st 2008, 12:28pm
Irindiglo

LoL true! And males buy!

#18 Apr 01st 2008, 12:32pm
Berlioz II

Actually, I feel "whore" in this context has about as much to do with sex as a nun wearing a chastity belt has a chance of scoring.

#19 Apr 01st 2008, 12:53pm . Edited Apr 01st 2008, 12:54pm
Irindiglo

Haha, lol. Yeah review whores aren't really seen as prostitutes... Actually think it sort of does, I don't know why.

#20 Apr 01st 2008, 12:54pm
Berlioz II

Because they both moan when trying to entice you to action.

#21 Apr 01st 2008, 12:58pm
Irindiglo

Ahh, hahaha, too much info! lol!

#22 Apr 01st 2008, 12:59pm
Berlioz II

But so true.

Regular whore: Uuh... aahh... faster... harder...

Review whore: I won't update unless I get five reviews.

Sure, it's a bit of a different moan, but still...

#23 Apr 01st 2008, 1:01pm
Irindiglo

Lol! So true! And their both asking for more!

#24 Apr 01st 2008, 1:03pm
otherrealmwriter

Any stories people want reviews on though? I want more reviews on this Nartuo story of mine: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3987622/1/We_Dont_Always_See_Eye_to_Eye We Don't Always See Eye to Eye

summary: Hinata and Sasuke are in an arrnaged marriage for the Hyuugas and Uchihas to combine the Byakugan and Sharingan.The 20 year old Sasuke and Hinata are already involved with others forgetting about their enguagement. SasuSaku NaruHina possibleSasuHina

#25 Apr 01st 2008, 1:16pm . Edited Apr 10th 2008, 3:44pm
Palex4life

I would except I hate those couples with a fiery passion. Naruto/Sasuke forever.

#26 Apr 01st 2008, 4:47pm
Darkwinter999

I thought you hated Spaige with a fiery passion too, but you changed your screenname to Spaige4life ealier.

#27 Apr 01st 2008, 6:07pm
Irindiglo

April Fools prank?

Spaige lol

#28 Apr 01st 2008, 8:09pm
otherrealmwriter

Willing to review here....................

#29 Apr 02nd 2008, 6:50pm
otherrealmwriter

bumping for more people to see this......

#30 Apr 03rd 2008, 3:10pm
Darkwinter999

Did you review Joke's on Batman?

I appreciate your reviewing my other fic btw, thanks!

#31 Apr 03rd 2008, 3:25pm
otherrealmwriter

I'll take a look at it. By the way I PM'd Jixed to see if this can be a flagged topic. I was just wondering if you think that is a good idea Darkwinter.

#32 Apr 03rd 2008, 5:16pm
Darkwinter999

Totally, and it worked! Yeah, too many people started their own threads for this exact thing, wouldn't want this thread to get lost in oblivion!

Thanks for reviewing! I'll check out what you put in a few.

#33 Apr 04th 2008, 9:28am . Edited Apr 10th 2008, 12:58pm
otherrealmwriter

That's awesome. I really thought we should have something like this for people to review and offer concrit. I made a forum for this but no one came and I think that this would be a great help to writers out there of all levels.

#34 Apr 04th 2008, 5:36pm
Murasaki Yugata

Hey. I recently wrote a Sopranos fanfic. If anyone wants to read it, they can find it here. Hope you enjoy it!

#35 Apr 05th 2008, 4:33am
otherrealmwriter

I just took a look at it. I don't know the fandom all too well but I gave it my opinions and thoughts.

#36 Apr 05th 2008, 4:48pm
Green-Ace-4-Earth

Hey Relm! Can you look in the Hear LFE " topic? Thanks!

#37 Apr 05th 2008, 4:53pm
The Jeh

hi,

I just started writing a Harry Potter parody story and I'd appreciate it if people could give it a read and tell me what they think because I'm currently studying Creative Writing and am contemplating using it as my final coursework assignment.

thanks in advance

:D

#38 Apr 06th 2008, 12:52pm
Darkwinter999

Welcome! Also, I thank you so much for posting here instead of making your own thread!

Sorry, but that's been a problem recently.

Welcome to LFE!

#39 Apr 06th 2008, 1:34pm
CelloSolo2007

For any Naruto fans; here's a fic about what Sasuke did all those 2.5 years with Oro. It's as close to the storyline as I can get it. No AUs, no OCs, nothing that wouldn't happen in the anime/manga. Well, except for Kabuto knocking Sasuke out to do a surgery after he overloaded himself with the Curse Seal. Basically, it's scenes of Sasuke's training. There are well-described battle scenes between Oro and the snakes, if I may say so myself. Oro can make the Curse Seal hurt or spin out of control if he wants, to make Sasuke learn to control it.

If you like action, detail, and, well, Sasuke fighting but eventually getting his ass kicked, then getting up and fighting again, you'd probably like it. Also, if you like the bad guys, (Orochimaru and Kabuto) being sadistic and cheating like messing with the Curse Seal or playing mind games, this might be worth checking out. Here it is: Curse of the Snake.

#40 Apr 07th 2008, 3:26pm
The Negotiator of Promise

Well, believe it or not, I have a lot of fanfics written out. (I just havent got to posting them yet. Hahahah!)

But, I do have one of them posted and no one seems to want to read it. Maybe ill put another story up tonight. Still, I want someones support.

#41 Apr 07th 2008, 7:11pm
otherrealmwriter

I just posted my thoughts on your fic in a review. I think you have a lot of potentail and I am not one to judge myself, I started out similar to you. You have a lot of potenital. Keep up the facinating writing.

#42 Apr 07th 2008, 7:32pm
The Negotiator of Promise

Thanks. Actually, that was just random blurbs that appeared in my head at the time. And, thanks to you, I have decided to begin writing my other set of fanfics. These ones are actually written down, and they dont focus too much on hilarity. the prologue should be posted soon. Please enjoy!!!

#43 Apr 07th 2008, 7:50pm
REVOLuTiontte En Casca

I think we should do a format here. The idea is wonderful really....

Review requests in bold, replies in underline/italics? And chat in regular because we're too lazy to keep changing the format ;)

Maybe we should have a review thread, and keep this one solely for requests as I found it hard to find the ones wanting reviews... :p

#44 Apr 08th 2008, 5:10am
Darkwinter999

That's a good idea, I'll edit my posts. Everybody do the same!

#45 Apr 10th 2008, 12:55pm
otherrealmwriter

Just bolded the requests I have.

#46 Apr 10th 2008, 3:44pm
otherrealmwriter

And posted the how tos in the first post

#47 Apr 10th 2008, 3:46pm
Fynix

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4091405/1/Army_Men_Plastic_Soldiers

If you like shooter video games, then check out my literary work.

Please review to help improve what I lack.

#48 Apr 10th 2008, 10:59pm
Atama Ga Ii

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4187438/1/Frozen_Heart_Sardonic_Warmth

Uh.. I wrote a Fanfiction for Bleach, read it if you please... Thank you! ^^

#49 Apr 11th 2008, 9:27am
Sideshow Bob Roberts

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4185977/1/Life_Journey

Summary: Two adventurers set off for the adventure of their lives, while a group of villains band together. And It's up to the two adventurers to stop those villains.

#50 Apr 11th 2008, 5:40pm


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