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RedwingBluebird

Hi, all. I feel weird asking this, but I just posted a Criminal Minds/Pushing Daisies crossover called 'All You Need Is Love', and I just really want to know if I should even be bother ing to do this, especially as I already have the next two chapters written. It's not a major romance or anything, and after the first two chapters I'm trying to keep the fic light and all, but if I'm not a good writer I don't even want to try it, so if anyone could read and review I would really appreciate it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5338099/1/All_You_Need_Is_Love

#401 Aug 28th, 5:17pm
jimmidiggincats

This is my new installation for heroes. I am introducing a new character, someone who seems to have quite a lot of powers and someone who clings to her "fate". The set up begins with the past where the lady first appeared and then in the present where she gives a hint that her fate is intertwined with that of other heroes. Don't worry I'm not giving it all up; she still has a lot of secrets.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5344004/1/We_call_her_Snow_Drop

#402 Aug 30th, 6:15pm
protector91

After a very long hiatus, I finally returned to this story for all you Terminator:Sarach Connor Chronicles fans.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5147249/1/Future_Shock

Ignore the bold face print if you haven't read the story before.

At this point in the story John is leading the resistance on a resuce mission to free Kyle and Derek Reese, Jesse, and everyone else imprisoned in the Sky net prison camp. Cromatire, however, has an ace up his sleeve for just such an occasion.

#403 Sep 03rd, 4:58pm
Angel Wings-008

Hello, hello. I'm back with another one. This one is a oneshot humor fic in the Jedi Apprentice fandom. It's called, "Horrific Assumptions."

Summary: Bant overhears a sketchy conversation between her best friend and his Master, and she draws a rather disturbing conclusion. "Bant swore that if a Mon Calamari could blush, she would. They couldn’t be talking about that could they?"

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5362452/1/Horrific_Assumptions

#404 Sep 08th, 9:00am
Gryphaena

Hello.

I just posted it so maybe it's too early to ask for reviews.

Anyway,it is a drabble featuring Layla Williams from Sky High. She is very pleased with Will. It is rated K.

The link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5381836/1/Almost_a_Musical_Number

#405 Sep 16th, 6:21pm
Gryphaena

If anyone cares to know, I changed my Sky High drabble and re-uploaded it so it probably has a different ID now.

The title is still the same 'Almost a Musical Number' and so is the rating but I fixed a grammar problem and altered words and blended two sentences.

#406 Sep 21st, 12:28am
protector91

Ever wondered what happened to Cyclops in X Men the Last Stand since it was never specified that he died? Well this is what I think could have happened.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5386801/1/Alkali_Lake

#407 Sep 23rd, 8:24pm
T.F. Author

Yeah . . . can someone PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE review my story On The Other Side of the Universe. . . . it's an FMA AlXOC I need to know if I should continue it. . . . or not .. . . . I took my character through a Mary-sue litmus test and she's not one. . . . . so PLEASSSSSEEEE!?!?!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4768189/1/The_Other_Side_Of_the_Universe

#408 Sep 29th, 8:22pm . Edited Oct 11th, 10:16am
animationiscool

Hi, I have joined recently, and I am currently working on a Rocky and Bullwinkle fanfic. I have the first four chapters completed, and I'm almost finished chapter 5.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5355876/1/Clueless_Campers

I do not have very much writing experience, and I'm sorry if it does not have very much description. It's okay if you are not interested, but comments or consrtuctive critcism would be appreciated.

#409 Sep 30th, 7:52pm
the-dreary-unicorn

*is also newb-ness*

Need reviews for Feather. I will review anyone who reviews me. Please no one-liners.

#410 Oct 05th, 2:15pm
The True Elemental Alchemist

Wow I was looking for intresting forumes and came aloung this. I would love more reviews. I have writen 3 fable fics and 1 Bully fic. So... um... yeah... pie... please review... :)

#411 Oct 05th, 7:41pm
Nutella's Biggest Fan

Hey there!

I'm pretty new to Fan Fiction.net.

Recently I have plucked up the courage to write a lemon for Naruto... here are the details:

Title: An Immoral Revenge

Category: Naruto

Rated: M

Stars: Mainly Kakuzu, but some Hidan too (of Akatsuki, if you didn't know)

Other Notes: Lemon, Sado-masochistic. Oneshot, features an OC.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5425018/1/An_Immoral_Revenge

The story is one day old, and has 100+ visitors! Only two bothered to review. I would like just a bit more feedback from any medium you wish- ie PM, review, etc.

So far the reception has been good, so I have no idea why people don't want to comment.

Much appreciated! Thanks for your time.

#412 Oct 07th, 2:32am
animationiscool

I started the first chapter to another fanfic, The Elusive Snowmoose. I was not sure about what to add for chapters 5 and 6 of Clueless Campers. I was thinking about eventually posting a story that is related to Halloween, but I have not thought of a plot for it yet.

#413 Oct 09th, 6:55pm
FullHouseandPixarLover

Anyone interested in:

A Full House DJ/Steve fluff called Miserable Until Tonight

A series of oneshots about various Pixar short films (under Misc. Movies) called Pixar Short Film Short Stories

A Wayside School book series fanfiction (under Misc. Books) about when the kids are all in their 30s called Even More Sideways Stories from Wayside School

If you're interested in any of those, just visit my profile and look to the bottom of the page. I also have a Percy Jackson and the Olympians story, but I abandoned it, so just ignore it.

P.S. Even if you don't actually go and read it, I would like some suggestions as to what to write next in Pixar Short Film Short Stories. I'm having major writer's block for that one. So far, I've done Tin Toy and Lifted chapters.

#414 Oct 14th, 5:15am
Michael2

You have to read Lost Boys of the Cascades

#415 Oct 14th, 9:56am
animationiscool

I completed chapter 5 of Clueless Campers. I'm sorry about the slow updates. I have been busy with college assignments. I will try to read and review your stories if I have some spare time during the weekend.

#416 Oct 15th, 4:50pm
FullHouseandPixarLover

GAH!! My Wayside School story has five chapters (just updated last night), it's really fun to write, and I think it's really good, but I STILL DON'T HAVE A SINGLE REVIEW!!! Ahem. Sorry about my freakout. It's frustrating. I rather enjoy feedback, but none of my stories ever seem to get any. Sooo... you get what I'm asking, don't you? :-)

#417 Oct 17th, 6:09am
animationiscool

I was stuck on what to add for the fanfics. I started to work on a story that is somewhat related to Halloween. I will try to read and review more stories when I have enough time.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5449747/1/Pottsylgeist

#418 Oct 17th, 7:13pm
Sebastian-Wolf

well Ive actually couldn't have found this at a better time i have a story that I'm trying to get out there.. Is called CRF (Cormic Research Facility) so if you could check it out that be great its also just been started so it only has three chapters ill have chapter four up by the end of tonight i try to update daily for now.just got to my profile ^^ its at the bottem.

Sebastian.

#419 Nov 05th, 10:00am . Edited Nov 05th, 10:06am
Insanely Random Ducky

Hey, I just posted my first story on here, today, and I was just wondering what you guys think about it...it's called "Feeling Death" and it's for Alex Rider.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5495387/1/Feeling_Death

#420 Nov 07th, 4:22pm
protector91

This story is for Power Rangers set during the SPD season. I'm going to continue writing it regardless of whether or not I get reviews, but I would like to know what some people think of it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5490418/1/Time_Fugitives

#421 Nov 08th, 11:11am
protector91

I wrote this a few days after the premiere of V on ABC dealing with the character of Lisa.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5506190/1/Lisas_Secret

#422 Nov 12th, 8:54am
Mysterywriter221

Off topic: Awesome avatar Insanely Random Ducky!

#423 Nov 13th, 6:31pm . Edited Nov 13th, 6:32pm
Kikiome

Hey if you like Inuyasha or sorta do come read my story. Currently revising.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5435800/1/Warrior_Miko

#424 Nov 16th, 6:13am
Jasperlover12

yah i would greatly appreciate some reviews for my story "Steamy night in the bathroom". It's a saw fanfic.Here's the link.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5515856/1/Steamy_night_in_the_bathroom

#425 Nov 17th, 7:00am
HyperInSugar

Summary: Love. It is a tenuous human emotion. Strange and unpredictable. What happens when Maya Thomas starts to feel that kind of feeling for William Tavington, your average 18th century arrogant and ruthless British Colonel?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5450657/1/Crossroads_of_Destiny

The title from my fic comes from an Avatar:Last Airbender episode, and well, I know there's not much fanbase for the "Patriot" section and at first my story sounds cliché and boring, but please just give it a try, and in case you don't like it, well...leave a feedback flaming it with your opinion and I am not having any issue writing a reply for it.

#426 Nov 19th, 2:38pm
No Longer Alive

Hey... Newbie here

I was wondering if anyone would review my fanfic for a Supernatural?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5523770/1/Passion_Fruit

#427 Nov 21st, 1:49pm
Warrior07

ok guys i made a brand new chapter i know my last story sucked ass but i feel like this is betta jus search my name its the 1st story there sorry couldnt put a link

#428 Dec 01st, 2:09pm
protector91

I have once again been bitten by the writing bug and threw out this Power Rangers story as a result. It involves Alex showing the other Time Force Rangers how Wes' battle to save the future went as oppossed to just telling them he died.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5546486/1/Wes_Last_Stand

#429 Dec 01st, 3:41pm
Insanely Random Ducky

Hey, it's me again, and I have two new twilight stories...the first is a one-shot, and the second is a multi-chap story that I just started. I would appreciate it if you guys told me what you think!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5497576/1/New_World

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5522811/1/Imperfection

Please, and thanks! :)

#430 Dec 01st, 5:27pm
protector91

I'm back again with a new Smallville Story. I wrote an alternate version of the Pilot starting from the end of Chloe's Wall of Weird discussion. I changed the antagonist of the story and left open two plot points at the very end. I'm also open to suggestions for how this story can go so please review.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5559022/1/Alternate_Pilot

#431 Dec 05th, 9:00pm
FlameoHotmen

Ok so I recently updated a new story of mine based off of Avatar the Last Airbender and I want to know what people think. The title is called Secrets of Infiltrating the Fire Nation. Any reviews would be helpful :)

#432 Dec 05th, 11:26pm
xosnobunniox

I just wrote the first chapter of my first story and I would appreciate it if people would read it. It's a Bleach fanfic and it's basically about Ulquiorra's sister who died way before Bleach started. It's called Life As A Wilting Flower. Please review and tell me if I could do better on it. If it sucks, go ahead and tell me. The plot isn't even fully introduced, but I have it in my head already. Pleaseee check it out! :DD

#433 Dec 13th, 1:56pm
xosnobunniox

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5578487/1/Life_As_A_Wilting_Flower

here's the link

#434 Dec 13th, 1:59pm
KH-Leon

I have one called " Smith....Roger Smith" It's about a secret org finding out about roger and wanting to control him...so they kidnap his family forceing roger to go out to search for them.

Its easy to find go to cartoons....American Dad and my fic is right on top.

If it wasn't so easy to find I'd put a link but meh...so review it.

#435 2 days ago, 8:54am
xXThe AnomalyXx

Hey I'm new here and wondering if I can get some feedback...

Basically a sad romantic story for the Haruhi Suzumiya series based on some of my life experiences

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5572638/1/Breaking_Inside

#436 Yesterday, 1:00am
My-Last-Chance

Hey I'm new and it would be really cool if someone could please review my Supernatural story so far?

uhh its about the type of girl Dean Winchester may fall for.

Please and thank you!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5563227/1/Two_lost_Souls

#437 Yesterday, 9:21pm


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