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Topic: Her Green Under the Red Moon

Here we can discuss my FanFic; Her Green Under the Red Moon.

Comments, complaints, suggestions or questions. You post them, I'll answer them or keep them in mind.

#1 Jun 07th 2007, 10:14am

Beetledude

I personally enjoyed reading Her Green Under the Red Moon, and I've been silently hoping for updates for some time ^^

But I'd just like to throw in my support of that project :D

#2 Mar 07th 2008, 3:16am

Tiax Anderson

I've been thinking up small parts for HGUtRM for some time now, but most of them aren't that great and this story is still suspended. After Birthday I might resume this though. But if you have any idea's, remarks or comments about the story. Please tell them.

#3 Mar 07th 2008, 5:11am

Beetledude

I've been toying with a little idea as a matter of fact, but it's of course entirely up to you..

but here goes...

Su will use the machine of Kei, and it indeed works like Su had envisioned, or in a way it does, but only for a fraction of a second. but it backfires and shut downs (the machine only). But Kaolla saw if, only for a second, she sees the memory. and it stirs something in her, trying to awaken a memory perhaps, but she doesn't entirely remember. this being due to her not being able to perfectly remember her past. But now she's brooding over why Kei's memory stirs such a reaction, within her own, and this leads to her thinking about it alot. Eventually coming up with the answer, she remembers, but does she wanna reveal it just yet, or does she wanna wait and see what time brings?

And this would of course be a perfect cliffhanger ^^

Ofc, this was only the outline, and still just an idea.

#4 Mar 08th 2008, 8:57am

Tiax Anderson

Well it's an idea if anything. And not a bad one at all, I'll think about it. Maybe I'll change stuff, maybe I'll keep it the same. But for now I'll focus mostly on finishing Birthday.

#5 Mar 08th 2008, 9:12am

Beetledude

It's your story so you should add your own touch to it, personalize, that's what makes stories nuanced, and interesting. And yea, trying to write two stories at once could quite possibly turn out to be a bother, so rather finish Birthday first ^^

#6 Mar 08th 2008, 9:42am

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