  Dudly Well- this is the place to all write a story together! ^^ Rules: -You can't write more than three sentences and the beginning of a dialog -Try to let it open... Because we won't all think about the same plot ^^ -Do not double-post And it should go well enough ^^ Ready? Set... go! (I have no imagination left XD) edit: Hi~ Anyway, we should have put this up long ago, but anyway, the story is being posted on FF. If you want to take a look at it, it is posted under my penname, titled "Molesting the Facts". XD That's it. -Rea Aug 08th 2007, 5:34pm . Edited by Sweet Obsidian Rain, Apr 28th 2008, 12:38pm #1 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain Karupin meowed as her master's alarm clock started to ring. One Echizen Ryoma stirred awake and he glance at the time. Pounding footsteps of his (stupid) father could be heard coming up the stairs. ----- xD Erm... Like that? Hey, how are we going to write the conversations without dailog? Aug 08th 2007, 5:47pm #2 |
 Eternal.Angel Exasperatedly his father, Echizen Nanjiroh, banged on the door loudly thrice before stomping away. The first year simply glared at the door, then his alarm clock, and lastly at his cat, Karupin.--- God, I'm stuck now. xD Aug 08th 2007, 6:01pm #3 |
| Dudly You can write the 'beginning of a dialog' For instance: Without caring if he was going to be late (when did he care anyway?), Ryoma pulled the covers over his head and fell back asleep. Two minutes later, he heard other knocks on the door, and just when he was about to chase his father away, a voice yelled for him. "Echizen Ryoma!" His mother exclaimed angrily. "I want you downstairs in five minutes; there's a guest for you." --- And then, the next person can choose whether Ryoma replies or not... You know, it only means that only one character gets a line in your post. Er.. but the following post can have more if it's not more than 3 lines... How clear is that? ^^' Aug 08th 2007, 6:14pm #4 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain Oh. I see. xD EDIT: I'm editing this. xD --- Ryoma shot up and out of bed; no one wanted to cross an angry mother. "I'm up! I'm up!" He shouted as he briefly wondered who the guest was. Hopping on one foot as he pulled on his pants for school, the boy tried not to trip over anything in his bedroom. Aug 08th 2007, 6:26pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 6:27pm #5 |
| Eternal.Angel The feline pounced onto the mattress and ogled at his master, meowing as if in protest. She noticed that her owner now wrenched the door open and quickly ran down the stairs. Loyal as she was, Karupin followed Ryoma to the first floor. Aug 08th 2007, 6:34pm #6 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain The boy finished buttoning his shirt as he set foot into the living room where his family and the guest were. "Ahem," the guest stood up, "Hello." Ryoma stared in shock at his guest. Aug 08th 2007, 6:40pm #7 |
| Kyoka-BOO There stood Fuji, with his typical smile on. Obviously, he was a morning person. "Fuji-senpai?" Edited because I posted at the same time. xp Aug 08th 2007, 6:40pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 6:43pm #8 |
| Eternal.Angel "What are you doing here?" questioned Ryoma suspiciously. Karupin meowed and looked directly at the guest with a puzzled expression. Aug 08th 2007, 6:44pm #9 |
| awintea Fuji said cheerfully, 'Can't I visit my favourite kouhai?' He smiled at Ryoma, who shuddered slightly. Aug 08th 2007, 6:44pm #10 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain "Saa... Echizen," Fuji said as he looked at Ryoma's expression, "Your mother's cooking is delicious." Ignoring his sempai's comment, the boy sat down and stared blankly at Fuji before asking, "What are you doing?" "Eating of course!" Fuji responded cheerfully with his usual smile. --- xD I was hoping someone would say it was Fuji. Aug 08th 2007, 6:46pm #11 |
| Eternal.Angel *Sorry for double post* The cat now eyed his master, and then his sempai, curiously. Setting itself in a comfortable position, it began to watch and observe the two carefully. ---- Too much Karupin..xD Aug 08th 2007, 6:46pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 6:49pm #12 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain Question... Is Karupin male or female? --- Ryoma twitched. "No, I mean, why do you need to visit me? You see me at practice don't you?" Rinko cleared her throat, "Ryoma, your father and I have an announcement to make..." Aug 08th 2007, 6:56pm #13 |
| awintea Ryoma said with a touch of impatience in his tone, 'What?' He glanced over at Fuji. 'And what does he have to do with it?' --- Karupin is male. xD Aug 08th 2007, 6:58pm #14 |
| Eternal.Angel Answer: Female, I believe... ------------------------------ His mother cleared her throat again and looked directly at her son, then at her husband, but found him to be missing. "Nanjiroh!" yelled Rinko angrily, "Come here to the living room this instant!" Unaware of the newly arrived guest, she waved her hands frantically and bowed, apologizing, "Sorry for my rude manners." Aug 08th 2007, 6:59pm #15 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain ...That doesn't help that you both say the opposite. xD --- "It's quite alright, Echizen-san." Fuji sat down again and watched as the elder male in the Echizen household rushed in. Aug 08th 2007, 7:04pm #16 |
| Kyoka-BOO "Nanjiroh, you weren't by any chance reading one of those magazines again, were you?" She was getting a little off topic, perhaps. Fuji just sat there smiling through it all, as if all of it was completely normal, including his mother's temper. Aug 08th 2007, 7:08pm #17 |
| awintea The Himalayan cat owned by Ryoma Echizen in the Prince of Tennis anime and manga series, Karupin, gets his name from the Calpis drink. ^___^ Straight from Wiki... I know Karupin's male ... because I said he was female in a fic, and never fixed it. xD --- Aug 08th 2007, 7:08pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:09pm #18 |
| Eternal.Angel Never mind, continue you all... -------------------------------- The former tennis pro grumbled as he settled himself on the couch next to his feisty wife. Aug 08th 2007, 7:08pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:12pm #19 |
| awintea 'What makes you think that?' Nanjiroh said evasively. Rinko sighed, and decided to continue with what she was saying earlier. Aug 08th 2007, 7:11pm #20 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain "We are going to go to France for a week with Fuji-san's parents and sister," Rinko explained, "We've decided that Fuji-san and Yuuta-san will be staying with you in this house." Ryoma dropped his fork. Aug 08th 2007, 7:18pm #21 |
| Dudly "Like I said, we have something very important to say," Rinko repeated, taking a deep breath. "You're a girl... you can't play on the boys tennis team anymore. And we bethroted you to Fuji here." Aug 08th 2007, 7:18pm #22 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain Er... which thread do you want to use? Mine or yours, Dudly? Aug 08th 2007, 7:20pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:20pm #23 |
| Dudly Both XD "You see... we decided that it will be better to live with your fiancé while we're gone," Rinko added at Ryoma's shocked look. "But Yuuta will be here to chaperon (er?) the both of you." Aug 08th 2007, 7:23pm #24 |
| awintea Chaperone XD But Firefox doesn't accept the word. Don't worry about it. - - 'What? I have to quit the tennis team?' Ryoma shouted, focusing on the more important thing, which was quite clearly tennis. Aug 08th 2007, 7:28pm #25 |
| Eternal.Angel As if he understood the gibberish that sounded in his sharp ears, Karupin immediately scurried off and out of the living room, leaving behind a puff of smoke trailing. It did not have a very good feeling about this... Aug 08th 2007, 7:28pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:29pm #26 |
| Dudly Leave Karupin alone already! XD -- After a moment, Ryoma frowned. "How come I didn't know I was a girl before?" Aug 08th 2007, 7:30pm #27 |
| Eternal.Angel OK! He won't come out anymore! -- His parents worriedly looked at each other before sighing and turning towards their child. They did not want the truth to hurt him, after all. Aug 08th 2007, 7:31pm #28 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain O_O Very twisted. --- EDIT: Rinko sigh as she carefully chose her words, "Ryoma, dear, you're genetically a girl." Aug 08th 2007, 7:32pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:34pm #29 |
| Kyoka-BOO "Genetically?" Ryoma asked, rather sharply. "How can I be genetically a girl?" ---- Edited. Aug 08th 2007, 7:33pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:34pm #30 |
| Eternal.Angel Ok... [LEAVE ME OUT ON THIS POST!] --- Aug 08th 2007, 7:34pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:37pm #31 |
| awintea Fuji smiled widely. 'Why don't I help explain, Echizen-san?' He leaned into Ryoma's ear, and whispered. Aug 08th 2007, 7:34pm #32 |
| Dudly Yeah... it's rather cracky XD --- "I don't understand," Ryoma declared. "I'm a boy. I look nothing like dad's magazines..." His parents looked at each others before sighing. "Eh, thing is that you are as flat-chested as your mom!" His father explained with a smirk. Aug 08th 2007, 7:35pm #33 |
| awintea Should we be saying 'Her parents' now then? XD --- Fuji added with a smile, 'And don't you feel that you're missing ... a certain male genitalia?' Aug 08th 2007, 7:39pm #34 |
| Kyoka-BOO "Nanjiroh, what are you saying?" She asked sharply, looking about ready to strike him upside the head. "Flat chested?" Ryoma pointed out. "I don't see..." ----- Hope that's not too much. Absolute crack is fun. Aug 08th 2007, 7:40pm #35 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain "Nanjiroh!" Rinko warned her husband. "Kaa-san, please stop joking, and just say hurry up and tell me the truth." "I'm afraid that what we told was the truth," Fuji said. Aug 08th 2007, 7:41pm #36 |
| Kyoka-BOO Ryoma jabbed a finger at Fuji. "Why did you tell him before you told me?" Aug 08th 2007, 7:43pm #37 |
| Eternal.Angel Rinko sighed again before eying her daughter, "We just didn't want for you to know that..." "Know what?" interjected the twelve year old. Aug 08th 2007, 7:46pm #38 |
| Dudly "Don't be that way, Ryoma," Rinko soothed. "You're going to marry Fuji. He was told by his parents that he'd marry you and... well." She stopped and looked at the floor with a shy face. Aug 08th 2007, 7:47pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:47pm #39 |
| Kyoka-BOO "Well what?" asked Ryoma, rather clueless to the whole idea. "I don't want to get married!" Aug 08th 2007, 7:51pm #40 |
| Eternal.Angel Fuji only smiled at Ryoma and said, "But it's been decided." Rinko only nodded in agreement, while Nanjiroh sat bored on the couch with his arms crossed. Aug 08th 2007, 7:53pm #41 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain EDIT: Ryoma remianed stubborn, "Yadda." Rinko burst out, "But Nanjiroh and I thought you and Fuji-san's children would look so adorable, we decided to enage you two together! You're not going to ruin your poor mama's dream, right?!" Rinko "sobbed". Aug 08th 2007, 7:54pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 7:55pm #42 |
| awintea 'Fuji-sempai, you agree with this?' Ryoma asked the other boy incredulously. Aug 08th 2007, 7:54pm #43 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain "Of course, Echizen," a pause, "Or shall I call you Ryoma-chan now? Saa... either way, you are pretty cute. I didn't mind." Aug 08th 2007, 8:04pm #44 |
| Eternal.Angel Echizen felt shivers tingling down his spine. He certainly did NOT want to be called such a thing by one of his sempais...or did he? Aug 08th 2007, 8:05pm #45 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain Ryoma glared at Fuji. "Fuji-sempai, I would appreciate it if you didn't call me that." "Now now, call me Syusuke. Say it: Syu-su-ke." Aug 08th 2007, 8:07pm #46 |
| Dudly In his head, he saw every Seigaku regulars as 'suitors' and imagined the way Momoshiro and Kikumaru would poke him once they'd know he was a girl. "He was a girl" was the strangest sentence he ever said. But he nodded absently anyway, considering Fuji might leave him alone so he could muse on his new life alone. Aug 08th 2007, 8:07pm . Edited Aug 08th 2007, 8:09pm #47 |
| Eternal.Angel "I'm never going to say that, Fuji-sempai," scowled Ryoma as he began to stand up from his seat, but Fuji easily persuaded him. "Shall I tell all our Seigaku friends then that you are in fact a girl?" 'She' could only gulp and swallow her Adam's Apple. Aug 08th 2007, 8:12pm #48 |
| Sweet Obsidian Rain S/HE *SWALLOWED* IT. xD --- Rinko watched with stars in her eyes at the "couple"'s interaction. "Now that we're all set," she said while clapping her hands, "Please show Fuji-san to the guest room!" Aug 08th 2007, 8:15pm #49 |
| Dudly Ryoma blinked. "Since when do we have a guest room?" Definitively, lots of things were hidden from him... I mean, her. Aug 08th 2007, 8:19pm #50 |
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