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SnorlaxLazy

Title: Akira (the whole fic's title)

Rating: T

Genre: Humor/Romance (idk, so far my fic seems like everyday normal life. I might change the genre depending on where the fic leads. Ugh! I'm unorganized)

Summary/Storyline: It's about a girl named Akira who transfers into Seigaku high school. She gets an application from Ryuzaki-sensei and faces a lot of problems with fangirls and life.

Warnings/Notes: After a while it has gotten cliche, and is down the road of Mary-sue-ish-ness! Plus, I'm the kind of writer who has to be on the computer to write(type) in order for anything to come fruitfully into a story. If I write something down, it is never used because when I reread it, it turns out to be crap. I write as I go so some things aren't thought out all the way through (My major flaw!)

How they can contact you: You can contact me at chowza.fix at gmail.com.

What kind of BetaReader needed: A really strict one! And can help my edit my story with great patience. I have some chapters already out and all but I don't know how to edit it right.

This post will still be up till I get a Beta Reader...Uh well, I don't know if I can delete my post...So...Uh, I'll just edit this post and say I HAVE A BETA READER when I get a Beta Reader. It will be under Edit.

Oct 14th 2009, 8:04pm . Edited Oct 16th 2009, 3:18pm #201
kuraberri

/pouts/ fox-chan, ffnet eated yer email. /points/

Oct 14th 2009, 8:27pm #202
SnorlaxLazy

sorry. I fixed up my post not long ago XD

Oct 17th 2009, 9:08am #203
reckless-rage

Done~! ♥

Oct 31st 2009, 5:33am . Edited Nov 01st 2009, 5:36pm #204
Peridot Tears

Anyone willing to edit a military!school!TezuFuji? 8D Or is this thread dead or is my request uncalled for?

Nov 20th 2009, 7:46pm #205
sonofon

Ooh, I can help?~ =D If you still need someone, that is.

Nov 20th 2009, 8:32pm #206
Peridot Tears

Thanks, sono-chan! =D I appreciate it!

Though I'm pretty harsh with beta-ing. I want people to be open-minded and not just follow what Word tells them to. Is that okay?

Nov 20th 2009, 8:41pm #207
sonofon

So, is this grammar beta-ing and such? And of course. And how do you want to send it to me?

Nov 20th 2009, 8:48pm . Edited Nov 20th 2009, 8:48pm #208
Peridot Tears

Grammar, and maybe a bit of advice on the flow and the word usage? I'll send it by DocX, unless you prefer another way.

Nov 20th 2009, 8:49pm #209
sonofon

All right then. n__n And that's fine. Let me add you.

edit: I've added you. =D So just send it over whenever you're ready.

Nov 20th 2009, 8:55pm . Edited Nov 20th 2009, 8:56pm #210
Peridot Tears

Wah! Sorry for ditching you yesterday!

Thanks n_n

The document...I think it incomplete, it's pretty much too bad to be satisfying "D I think it needs a lot of work...

Nov 21st 2009, 1:00pm #211
Megumi Sagara

Hello! :)

I'm new to writing POT fics, and I need a beta reader to check the characterization and writing style (coherent paragraphs, that the text makes sense, not straying from the original idea, etc.). I already have a beta to look for grammar and spelling mistakes, but she doesn't know the series. The fics may or may not be checked by her before sending.

Title: No title at the moment

Rating: K/K+

Type of fic: One shot

Summary: A look into the lives of the Sanada brothers since their childhood.

Characters: The Sanada family

Contact: through PM

Notes: Grammar and spelling not revised yet.

It would be great if I could count on them for future fics. I write het. (my favourite pairing is Sanada/Sakuno) and (usually) slice of life fics.

Thank you! ^^

Dec 30th 2009, 12:43pm #212
kuraberri

I won't mind helping you beta but I'll be taking ten subjects next year so my replies will be slow at best. ♥

Dec 31st 2009, 6:52am . Edited Dec 31st 2009, 6:52am #213
Megumi Sagara

Thank you! ^^ Don't worry if you can't be a steady beta (we all know how real life stands in the way of our hobbies), just this story will be enough. Normally, I'm a slow writer, but my muse has decided to stay for a while these holidays :) I'm finishing it, there are a few sentences I don't know well how to write so they sound nice, but I suppose it'll be done this weekend. How can I send it to you?

Happy New Year! :D

P.S. Don't worry if you take your time. It's for a holiday challenge but they allow me to post it unrevised and edit later. ^^

Jan 01st 2010, 2:46pm #214
kuraberri

I opened a DocX connection already, you can send it by there anytime 8D;

Jan 01st 2010, 5:39pm #215
Megumi Sagara

I've already sent it to you. :D

Jan 02nd 2010, 10:26am #216
kuraberri

Got it. XD

As for your question, school starts tomorrow. XD; I'll beta it after I reach home or something. n_n"

Jan 03rd 2010, 2:33am #217
AniManGa19930

Actually, I already posted this fic, but I still need it to be Beta-Readed. Onegaishimasu!

Title: Happy Birthday, Yanagi-senpai

Genre: Romance/General

Rating: T

Pairing: YanaKiri, SanaYuki

Summary: It's Yanagi's birthday, but Akaya is upset, why is that?

Comment: I know it's not a very unique plot, and I was stupid to post it before it's beta-readed...but I was determined to do something on Renji's birthday, so it can't be helped :(

Part I needed to be beta-readed:

- Grammar (obviously)

- The Romantic Scene ( I'm not very used in romance plot, so I'm afraid the scene will be very cliche, I'd like to hear some thoughts about it...)

Thanks in advance.

-AniManGa19930

P.S. Admin, please delete my previous post. Thank you.

Jun 12th 2010, 10:34am #218
Linnea7299

Title: Incipient

Genre: Romance, a bit of angst, family, general

Rating: May get to M, not 100% sure though

Pairing: Main is InuKai. It starts off Inui/OC, there is also golden pair, TezuFuji, Tezu/OC, and MomoRyo in varying degrees

Summary: After a car accident, Inui is left to raise his young son alone. However, in the same turn of fate he is reunited with Kaidoh, and maybe what his wife said to him the night before wasn't so far from the truth after all...

Other Useful Info: This is a Future Fic!! I intend for this to be long-ish... I also intend for this to be a bit more...realistic? (They don't all end up going through school in their happy little couples and marrying and having manbabies and such, much as that amount of fluff sounds wonderous.) So, like, Tezuka, being the dutiful son, got married and has kids, but he and his wife are not "in love" and each have their relationships outside of their marriage and know about it and are okay with it... Things like that...

Needs in a Beta: Someone to kick my ** into writing, as I have a horrible inferiority complex about the level of introspectiveness and seriousness in this. I have a grammar beta already, and she functions pretty well as a sounding board and such, but she's also my best friend IRL, so I don't completely trust her judgement on my writing... I also need someone who likes InuKai as much as I do because that is the central pairing...

So... um... thanks? ;_;

-Scarlet

Edit: For anyone who is interested, I posted the first chapter...

Jan 01st 2011, 8:34am . Edited Jan 03rd 2011, 10:52am #219
crassreine

Title: Rikkai AU

Beta found.

Edit. The post was edited, because it was full of spoilers.

I don't like spoilers. Cliffhangers are much more awesome.

And yes, I did try to delete the post. I am that...

Sleep deprived at the moment.

Jan 27th 2011, 1:46pm . Edited Feb 01st 2011, 10:33am #220
NDebN

Title: Back to Life(might change later on)

Genre: slice of life, romance, drama, humor. I think it will have everything that life has.

Rating: I probably intend to go M in the end(but don't worry I won't make you read the smut if you don't want to)

Pairing: as of yet undecided, but it will be yaoi, just not sure which pairing, I do know it will involve Ryoma XD

Summary: Retiring from the tennis world at 21, Ryoma sets out to learn something new, to learn about life and possibly love. Warnings: contains character death and yaoi.

Other Useful Info: Okay i suck at summaries, sue me , if you want to know about my writing style then I suggest "Revised: Prince of Music" and "When eyes say it all", those are my most current PoT fics, I think you'll get a good picture of my writing style.

Needs in a Beta: Why do I need a beta, well first and fore most because I need someone to look over my grammar and to see if I don't use too much of certain words like: as, while, which. Also I need to be pointed out if I use too much I, he, she, we, it and they and if I use at the right time an and a, since some times I get them confused as I'm typing too fast for my brain to exactly register. Also the one that will beta me shouldn't have anything against yaoi, must be able to chew me out at times without going overboard and musn't mind that this will be a Ryoma centric fic. Also wouldn't mind to help find me the perfect pairing for this fic ^^

if you are interested than you can contact me through a pm or e-mail me at nastydeb at hotmail.com

Feb 18th 2011, 10:58am #221
Adolescence

Title:Second Chances

Category:Manga/Anime Gantz

Genre:Horror/Suspense/Drama/Supernatural/Action and Adventure

Rating:M

Setting:AU, New York, with original characters.

Summary:

"Unlike the rest, you were the one that cheated death. Be it fate or dumb luck, you are still here. Each breath of air, exhilarating, and your next drink of water will be that much more refreshing. You've been given another chance - a second chance!"

She knew her brother kept a lot of secrets; it was his way of always protecting her. However, she'd soon find out that this was the understatement of the century. Very few knew the circumstances behind his death, and her obsession with finding the truth, may very well lead to one of universe's most darkest secrets. Aliens do exist, and her and her team would fight to remedy that. Atleast that was the theory anyways.

Needs in a Beta: I'd like assistance with correcting Grammar and word repetition. I'd also like advice on how to improve the overall appeal of my story. I plan on having a chapter ready once a month and need someone willing to not only read and beta, but also give insight and suggestions.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7501609/1/Second_Chances

If interested, contact me via pm or e-mail me at ronnieg90 at yahoo.com

Dec 01st 2011, 7:32pm #222
Naito Writer I don't know why but I've pretty much thought of giving it a go. So what I'm really looking for is a person who understands the game more cause I kind of don't, even though I came back to being interested in the anime. Maybe even help out how the story can go along and check to make sure things are good before posting it. Title: Knight of Tennis (Digimon Tamers/Prince of Tennis) Rated: K+ or T Writing style: (Shrugs) I'm pretty much still picking up pointers as I read how others do their stories. Pairings: Takato/Rika (Rukatolice, depending what direction it goes.), future Ryo/Saku, others. Summary: A year after the Digimon went back and the Tamers were pretty much down about it, Takato took it the hardest and didn't have the heart for the card game anymore. A new route took him to a recently established tennis field, where he finds a match going on and one of the players is a certain Prince of the game himself. Things lead to the point where Takato might have found a means out of his sadness, which leads to Ryoma actually training him on what he needs to know for the next two years. Comments: Pretty lengthly on the summary, but I wanted to get in how Ryoma was involved. It might stick to the plot in the anime before Ryoma goes to the U-17 Camp, just in a different time frame, or it might be different. I believe that maybe it. So if anyone's interested you can pretty much PM me since I mostly do fic work if I'm not doing anything else. Apr 28th, 11:04am #223
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