Do you guy have any ideas for a good Storm Hawks crossover (that takes place after episode 52: Cyclonia Rising part 2)

I have an idea myself, but I want to hear what you guys would say (if you want to hear my idea, just say so)

Well, I haven't watched any episode past 39 yet (waiting for when me and my siblings can watch them together), but I do have a crossover idea about the Storm Hawks exploring an ancient temple that somehow trasports them to the temple in the ancient grove in Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess. I was looking for somewhere to put this idea and get opinions.

What's your idea?

Warning, this may be long...

My crossover idea is Storm Hawks, Fullmetal ALchemist, and the RPG, GURPS Infinite Worlds

rational: Infinite Worlds is about alternate universe, and there is one alternate earth that would (in my opinion) fit perfectly in the Storm Hawks universe

Azoth-7, 1780 (Exert from GURPS Infinite Worlds core rule book)

Many worlds have Industrial Revolutions. A few have Alchemical Revolutions. Infinity uses the “Azoth” designation for them, using the alchemical name for the “philosopher’s mercury,” a key ingredient in the Philosopher’s Stone. On Azoth-7, Isaac Newton found the keys to the Stone in the words of the angels. In 1693, he shared those keys with his world.

Ad Astra Per Angelis

Newton unlocked the crystalline harmonic code of the universe, creating a system of mathematical equations that gave man mastery over the lower orders of angels, including the material spirits of the Earth. Initially, his discovery merely meant an everfull English treasury, as gold mines erupted in Warwickshire and fish catches set records from Aberdeen to Sheerness. The hubristic speculation that followed nearly wrecked the British economy, and Louis XIV managed to unite Spain, Austria, Prussia, and Sweden in a war against a suddenly all-powerful England. Newton was able to summon Amnitziel, the tutelary angel of Britain, who swept away the Allied invasion fleet. The war ended decisively with the Duke of Marlborough installed as Governor of France, and the French and English thrones unified for the first time since the Plantagenets.

Gottfried Leibniz had deciphered Newton’s codes and allusions, and derived the Stone (and its attendant harmonies) himself in Berlin, which kept Prussia independent, as it harnessed Zuriel, the angel of Germany. The Inquisition announced that it had awakened “the holy angel of Spain,” which it called Barachiel, although English broadsheets trumpeted the charge that it had merely made a pact with Samael, one of the Fallen. Before Spain could subdue all of Italy, the Doges of Venice unleashed their own spirits, having somehow obtained the services of Dobiel and Uzzael, the tutelary angels of Media and Egypt. A rough parity established itself as the four angelic powers took the “four corners of the world”: England, the North, ruled North America; Spain, the West, took South America and the Indies; Venice, the South, took Africa and Turkey; Prussia, the East, took Russia and (eventually) China.

As the angelic-alchemical economy heated up, and new devices were built that depended upon Stones to work, the four powers fell to disputation over supplies of gemstones, which provided the necessary crystalline quintessence. Lesser angels could not move such stones, since the gems’ quintessential power resisted such weak force – the four powers began to charter first pirates, then privateers, then mercenary bands, to seize ships on the high seas or even loot mines from each others’ client states. French “sky dogs” left penniless Paris to swoop down on Spanish emerald shipments from New Granada; Dutch and Hessian homunculi clashed in Cochin-China; subtle Milanese prisoners lifted stones from Indian rajahs and Russian countesses alike. In 1752, just when the four powers seemed about to plunge the world into angelic apocalypse, the immortal but evermore reclusive and peculiar Newton revealed a new discovery.

The Ritual of Qauqabel allowed the angelist to commune with one of the Heavenly Virtues, angels who ruled (or personified, the math is not clear) the stars of heaven. Each star, Newton revealed – based on the uncredited work of Giordano Bruno – had its own worlds and those worlds had gemstones with unique powers granted by their ruling angel. Rubies from Regulus, for example, made cannon that fired lances of holy flame; the glow of emeralds from Spica could regrow limbs white and smooth; diamonds from Rigel could erect impenetrable walls. Every nation, and every independent angelist, immediately set out for the stars; colonies grew up under other suns, and soulless aliens were brought back as curiosities and slaves. The four powers found their rivalry increased, but on a vaster scope; although the piracies and raids grew to span the stars, the threat of war with the new weapons keeps the peace of Europe intact . . . for now.

With that said, I bet I would be preaty safe to say the Atmos would be one of those planets with mystical gemstone (crystal). Though the European Empires would be baffeled on how Atmos would have "gems" with a diverse aray of powers, the planet would probobly be plauged by four, count 'em, four, not one Cyclonian, but four European Empire, spaning many worlds, intent on exploiting their advance technology and crystals, along with pirates, priveteers, and outlaws.

Say they found a way into other alchemy Earths, and then start using Atmos to increase their political and alchemic powers. This might catch the attention of a certain alchemist with one arm and leg and his younger brother, promting them to goin forces with the legenary Storm Hawks to halt Azoth-7's persute of domination, and free Atmos from European might.

sorry for it being so long and sorry if it sounds stupid and seems like no sence and far fetched.

Very cool. It's too bad I have no idea what Fullmetal Alchemist is...

And I'd really like some feedback on my idea. I've started working on it, but I having problems getting it to sound good. Usually, I'm pretty good at just writing and it being not bad, but I'm having trouble now.

My advice for you is to have a good, non-cliche, villain. Personaly, I would stray from bringing back previous villains.

What I see as a good, canonical story would be Cyclonis attacking the sky worlds of Hyrule, or an OC atmosian villain (try not making his cyclonian) trying to obtain the Tri-force.

Now please note, this is my personal opinion, so you don't have to listen to anything I say.

and as for Fullmetal Alchemist, try looking it up in wikipedia

Hmm...good ideas there...and you given me a good antagonist idea that might just work...

I look up the Fullmetal Alchmist Wikia (fma .wikia .com It's like a wikipedia just for Fullmetal Alchmist) and that show looks awsome! I'm not exactly an anime fan, but this has piqued my interest...I can hardly wait to read your story if you upload it. Youtube, here I come!

Well, I just had another idea for a storm hawks crossover, but I just wanted to get someone's opinion on it before I go working my butt off on it...if anyone replies, then I'll be happy to post it!

Well, lets hear it. But I also have questions of my own.

I'm still stuck on my Azoth crossover due to not finding a sensable way to join together the characters, and I am very tempted to bring in something like Ed, Edd n' Eddy or Venture Bros. into the mix. Should I go for it?

And also, before I forget, have you seen "Cyclonia Rising" yet?

Hm...I haven't watched either, but I think something like Ed, Edd, n' Eddy (crazy and brainless) might be a funny way to bring them together. Or, maybe a little kids somehow leads one or two of the characters to the others? Maybe something like that, but I'm just spewing out ideas...

Yeah, I've seen Cyclonia Rising, via YouTube. Somehow my current Storm Hawks crossover fits it, and I started it before I saw the last episodes xP

So, my idea is a crossover based on Storm Hawks (of course) and a book series called the 39 Clues. The story that I've thought of so far goes like this:

Aerrow and Finn are doing a little recon of their own on an unknown Terra when they meet an old man who tells them of their past: how they got to Terra Neverlandis, and that the Storm Hawks aren't actually one of the oldest squadrons in Atmos, like everyone believed. It was Aerrow's father who founded them. And the old man gives them a shocking but of news, too. Aerrow and Finn don't actually belong to Atmos! They're part of an ancient family called the Cahills, a family with four branches: the Ekaterina, the branch of the family that included Albert Einstien, Marie Curie, and such smart people; the Tomas, the warrior-like side of the family; the Janus, people like Mozart who were skilled in fine arts, though during the World Wars, they doubled as some of the most skilled fighter plane pilots in history; and the Lucian, people skilled in strategy and trained to be such things as spies, generals, and tyrants. The Lucian were not the good guys, and the old man informs them that while Finn is Janus, Aerrow is Lucian, and because of this, is why at such a young age is one of the greatest Sky Knights in Atmos. The old man then offers them a scroll that will take them to Earth for a little while so they can discover their, and their family's, past in greater detail. The two-some head back to the Condor and tell everyone else, before opening the scroll and tumbling to Earth...

So, that's the basic idea. Beyond that, I don't have much of a plot, but I'm working on that...

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