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PrinceOfSorroW Zero
Topic: Our stories.
for anyone who wants to post about there stories, just post it here! and i'll read it for ya! I'm just sick of not getting any reviews while in the hits count it already counted like 1000 times or something... but here's my story! of Saku and Bo... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3943016/1/ plz. read and review though... I could really use it... anyways any .hack stories of GU accepted here!

~Skeith the 3rd is created to collect data on people and how they react to all emotions~

#1 Dec 13th 2007, 10:01pm
fmachibi
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3946348/1/

Short Haseo x Sakubo fic. I did it as quick as possible, so its short.

#2 Dec 14th 2007, 7:37pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
Ok, i'll read and review!!! heehee you should try mine too, if you have the time ;D
#3 Dec 14th 2007, 9:05pm
Scarlet Ookami
Well, my story isn't Haseo x Saku/Bo, but it's .hack... ya. I like writing full blown stories like these. I can never settle for one-shots...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3729825/1/Dot_hack_Restart

#4 Dec 17th 2007, 7:53pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
ah soka, i think i've read this before, the part where their avatars get taken ne? well yeah it's kinda nice too also the made-up God palace tourney! well i'll still read it though, i don't think it's finished yet ne?

~Does Haseo say Justice when you use it? Coz i think i heard him say it and he said "Merry"~

#5 Dec 18th 2007, 4:58am
fmachibi
Well LOL, I always thought that is GU gonna end? Im making up this story of Kite(in the story is Azu) in .hack//Legend hero returns edit version.

>W< And also .hack//Run is specially in the new Palace I created, Reaper Palace! (Im sorta out of names >__<") So yeah, ^W^

#6 Dec 18th 2007, 5:04am
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
to Scarlet Ookami: I think i've reviewed in dot. Hack: Restart, i think... well just tell me if i haven't and i still couldn't make and read stories due to my *cough* *cough* I think AIDA hit me while i was sleepin or something... Aura! save me!!!

to fmachibi: hey um have you received my PM? it's kinda weird though...

#7 Dec 21st 2007, 9:49pm
Scarlet Ookami
I haven't seen your review yet, but maybe it takes a little bit to show. I got some good criticism, though. Finally! Now I know what to improve on.
#8 Dec 22nd 2007, 11:49am
fmachibi
Sorry, I never check my msn too often. I will see it soon.
#9 Dec 22nd 2007, 5:39pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
to scarlet Ookami: huh? is that so... i'll just read again when i get better... *cough* *cough* then i'll review it, the review was prolly in my head, but i know i already sent one... *cough*... even Aura won't help me!!! LOL *cough*

to fmachibi: w8 i'll send ya another one then! *cough*

~Praying to Aura doesn't seem to work...~

oh yeah here's some things you should know! found it at .hack wiki!

Rengeki (連撃), Japanese for "combo attack", is a type of special attack in The World R:2. After breaking the opponent's defenses through a series of combo attacks a player can perform a Rengeki by activating one of their combat skills. This adds extra damage to the skill and also increases the experience gained at the end of the fight (a Rengeki bonus). Classes with higher attack speeds and lower attack power, such as Tribal Grappler, Twin Blade, and Dual Gunner have an easier time achieving Rengeki, since it is achieved based on number of hits rather than damage dealt, much like Data Drain in the original games. However, certain weapon modifications allow any class to perform Rengeki after much less than the usual number of hits.

In the Arena, Hangeki (反撃), or counter attacks, can also be performed by countering an opponent's combat skill with another combat skill. Hangeki is mistakenly called Rengeki in the American version of the first volume, with the word "Counterattack!" displayed underneath, but Hangeki written in Japanese in the background.

Retrieved from "http://dothack.wikia.com/wiki/Rengeki"

hahaha LOL hangeki! so that's the term in the arena...

~Aura save me!~

#10 Dec 22nd 2007, 9:42pm . Edited Dec 22nd 2007, 10:37pm
Scarlet Ookami
Haha, I thought it sounded different when I used counter attack in the Arena...
#11 Dec 24th 2007, 11:46am
fmachibi
I alrdy saw, I knew the said something different. But thought, I didnt really cared. I luv going to arena just to get some Pks.
#12 Dec 24th 2007, 5:57pm
Scarlet Ookami
Yup. That's the only reason I stuck around the Arena and got 9999 WP. Legitimate PKing. Of course, had this not been a game and real people were behind the PCs, the Arena would be pretty much empty... except for the cocky noobs and expert Arena participants. Know why? Cuz no one in their right mind would challenge 'Legendary Emperor' Haseo anytime soon. If I were there, I sure as hell wouldn't...

>.>

#13 Dec 24th 2007, 9:41pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
hmmm really? LOL i only stayed at the arena to complete my book of 1000, there no match for Haseo prolly kite would be the only one to dare challenge Haseo,

simulation:Kite vs. Haseo at the arena

Haseo just bang, bangs kite till kite keps on flying up the air

Haseo charged attack to make him look cool,

Kite takes it and skill triggers Chaotic Strike,

Haseo wasn't able to hangeki,

(oh, yeah kite's equipped with the empty skies LOL)

as soon as haseo gets back up he just quickly fired 'em up

Kite time reacted and guarded and attacked haseo

due to the effect of his empty skies haseo's hp becomes 1/2!

Haseo dashed away and fired 'em up again, due to the DG-Z's effect Kite's hp is reduced by 95%!

Haseo charge attacked again and before the attack was finished he skill triggered! Justice!

thus finishing Kite off, Kite suddenly curses Haseo and said he'll be back

LOL, i kinda like made a story here already LOL

well that's all i could say 'bout the arena

#14 Dec 24th 2007, 10:41pm
Scarlet Ookami
lol

Poor Kite... don't worry! I'm still your fan! Even though I like Silabus and Endrance more.... anyways!

^_^;

Speaking of the book of 1000, did you complete the item secion? I've finished everything else but that... I'm probably missing a lot of low-leveled items.

:/

#15 Dec 25th 2007, 12:14am
fmachibi
I skipped, I play vol 3 first. Then vol 2 I continue. Well this happen:

Me: Uhm...do u think u have .hack//G.U. vol 2 and 3?

Shopkeeper: Wait a sec...Looks like we only have vol 3.

Me: I'll take vol 3......

Me: Do u hav vol 2 .hack//G.U.?

Another Shopkeeper: Sorry, vol 3 only...

Me: Okay...O____O *uses phone* Hey cuz, do u think u can buy me a vol2 of .hack//G.U.??

And thats what happen!! I have to wait for the next day to get vol2. But I was so impatient so I play vol3 first. Without a clear data...>___< I finish my book of 1000 rank9, but Atoli has 10!!!!!!!

#16 Dec 25th 2007, 6:05am
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
hahaha i'll go make a story about that one... Haseo and Kite meets at the arena! hhaahahahaha LOL, anyways

to Both: look's like you guys have been to this site more than i am... oh well, and what's wrong? i started at vol.1 you guys started at vol.2? vol.1 kinda made me sleepy since there wasn't still much to do so i like finished it in 3 days...

to Ookami: LOL Kite huh? the only disadvantage Kite has is that he could only use 1 weapon and Haseo's pretty good he even has 4 weapons already... and about the Book of 1000

Monsters FULL

Party FULL

Arena FULL

Items 8th

Bike 8th

something like that, and the other ones that i've missed are FULL, items and bike are the only ones i haven't finished, my bikes already near and i'm kinda laxy to fill it up, it's not like i'm gonna need the guild privileges anymore and i wish that they would make an extra vol. that's full of callenges since i've already finished it....

to fmachbi: hahaha funny LOL nice story buying the series (pretty short like Gabi's huh?)

~do any of you guys know Initial D? its an anime about cars~

#17 Dec 25th 2007, 6:42am
fmachibi
Yeah...short...>___<"" Im so not a Gabi person......(I never like seeing sentences that are so long, like now Im studying BM...)

I play vol1 first, but when I see .hack wiki, I just wanna buy vol2 and 3. I finish the .hack vol 1 and train Haseo and others to level50. (I invite Silabus and Gaspard, I didnt like Kuhn back then. TT____TT Im now playing the bike to beat Matsu, man that freak!

But thats not a story of me buying, it real! >____<<< I sucks!!!

#18 Dec 25th 2007, 8:51pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
hahhaha LOL wat's BM?

hmmm i just played all of 'em and converted 'em

here's a cheat for the bike, when you are about to hit the king chim chim press select then cancel as in circle you might get 2 king chim or all 3 at once when you have thus finishing it in 5 seconds or less

#19 Dec 25th 2007, 11:59pm
fmachibi
That's cheating!! No way Im doing that! Im playing fair and sqaure, because its much more fun!

BM is the main subject of my courtry, it sucks like english...

#20 Dec 26th 2007, 12:40am
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
hmm yeah, but i don't have all the time in the world to spend on just playing .Hack so, i cheated but only on that part,

hmmm my grades are good i don't worry about studies at all and i think i'll update the story already...

#21 Dec 26th 2007, 2:46am
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
hey sorry for double posting but, i'm the moderator here! joke, anyways my chap.2 is up plz. R & R!!!

~Go SakuBo I love you!~

#22 Dec 26th 2007, 7:28am
fmachibi
Yeah...but then I play fair and sqaure...Thought I hope study hav cheats...>,>""

My subjects are really bad...I got good grades in Maths and English but not the others....CHinese is the worst!!!! >_____<

#23 Dec 26th 2007, 7:18pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
HAHAHA LOL yeah studies should have cheats too, joke

When it comes to studies everything sucks hey fmachibi i hope you read my next chap.! i already made the next one! it's kinda cute it's about Saku this time! >_<

welp see ya there kupo! have you made any new stories?

#24 Dec 26th 2007, 9:07pm
fmachibi
I got a lot of them in process, now Im doing a little ToA and some .hack. I plan of stopping Digimon for a while......
#25 Dec 26th 2007, 10:27pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
huh? process? you never told me what ToA is? hmmm Digimon does have lotsa series
#26 Dec 26th 2007, 10:39pm
fmachibi
Yeah, my profile got say it. A LOT AND A LOT!!!! Digimon Im doing OC (if u forgot, original character) but have some Masaru in it...(Marcus in english, bleh!!)
#27 Dec 27th 2007, 1:18am
fmachibi
Oh, I forgot. ToA means Tale of Abyss, a game from Namco. I just sorta have this when I see my cousin playing....

Me: *sees ToA* Whats this?

Cousin: Tale of Abyss, u can keep it.

Me: REALLy!?

Cousin: Yes...no one plays it anyway since its an object for killing brains....

Me: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...Now I know it really kills brain, I really need to study now...............

#28 Dec 27th 2007, 1:26am
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
Hmmm is that so in the PS2 kupo? i'd play it i guess and kill brain as in... difficult puzzles to solve kupo? easy for me kupopo!

~Go SakuBo!~

#29 Dec 27th 2007, 3:25am
fmachibi
Yeah, because PS2 is the only thing I can get...

not really puzzle, just me hard to find where to go...not like .hack go area words, there are like Kimlasca and Malkuth...Aw man u dounno this I guess...Go play the game and u will know! >W<

So easy? Hmp, u must be a genius or something! Man I wish I was pretty smart...

-You are smart, u just didnt use the brain!-

What!? Why trhte hhecgk!?

-Shut up and send it...!!-

Okay...My sister is so blocking me...she is talking here for a while.....

#30 Dec 27th 2007, 4:46am
Scarlet Ookami
Oh, oh! guess what! I went to my local bookstore and pre-ordered the first volume of .hack//GU+!

*fangirl squeal*

It's coming in January! I can't wait! >_<

#31 Dec 27th 2007, 10:21am
fmachibi
I already read .hack/GU+, so Im not really squel. But then, .hack/GU Trilogy is coming too~~!! >W<
#32 Dec 27th 2007, 5:08pm
Scarlet Ookami
lucky... I'm too lazy to search the net for scans. I guess my long wait has finally paid off! Now I just have to trudge through the horrible translations... honestly, fan-sub groups are better than the officals. The big companies screw it up so bad, it makes people want to stop reading....
#33 Dec 27th 2007, 6:55pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
LOL kupo,

oh yeah fmachibi! glad you enjoyed reading the 2nd chap. kupo, yeah the extra epilogue part was funny hehehe but not really since i'd want that to happen kupo... and i'll try to play the ToA if i can find it kupo!

hmmm i never do see any .Hack comics or whatever kupo so i have to do something about it oh yeah better read some more of Ookami's .Hack Restart i wonder where that's going to go and the chaotics are gonna take a long time i think...

and you don't make one shots right Ookami? w8 lemme check all of you are girls except me!? oh kupopo how crappy, have you read my review kupopo? you still haven't replied though kupopo?

~oh yeah! i love my pic it's actually Saku hugging an En doll and Bo hugging a Haseo doll! how cute!!!~

#34 Dec 27th 2007, 7:09pm . Edited Dec 27th 2007, 7:28pm
Scarlet Ookami
Haha, sorry, I'll get the reply underway soon. I'm busy watching the Japanese version of Yu-Gi-Oh... ya. I'm watching Yu-Gi-Oh right now. Call me a dork if you will, but the Jap version is way better than the gay 4kids version I've been watching all those years ago. THEY CAN GET BLOODY AND CURSE! W00T!! XD

And no, I do not write one-shots. They usually end up being 2-shots, anyways... I can never seem to write a simple story. Ya. I'm one of those people who can only write epic multi-chapter stories. Kinda like Dino from Reborn... he can only shine when in the presence of his 'family', but when he's not around them, he's a total klutz. But that's why I love him...

X3

#35 Dec 27th 2007, 7:34pm . Edited Dec 27th 2007, 7:37pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
hhmmm LOL i also watched the whole yugioh thing until the end... Go Slifer the Sky Dragon!!! also Blue-Eyes! go! yeah curse LOL

ahahaha two-shots i should make one too! wee Go!

:D

~I Love you SakuBo!~

(\ /)

( . .)

c('')('')

ooh and here's the bunny!

#36 Dec 28th 2007, 1:03am
fmachibi
Well I saw lots of Jap version manga, plus game walktroughs, jap magazine (no theres no hentai), and jap novels. Also, they have jap artcollection and jap drinks!! >W< (Well they are not free...but nice to drink.)

One-shot is kinda hard too, When I was young, I couldnt even finish my story!! I like to make scary and horror the most; ask young me...When I play barbie dolls with my cousins (yes I play them, I still hav them! Got a problem?) and Im the one who always make the story, I have to think of something fun or eles is just boring!!

EVen now, I know the reason why I like adventure battling...Stupid me...But then, I dont see much of the american shows (expect for Danny Phantom n Martin Mystery! >W<) But still they are intertsting...I heard of KHR, but I never seen it before. I plan of rent the manga after the test are over...(right now, Im borrowing Black Cat and Zatch Bell...>__<)

#37 Dec 28th 2007, 1:44am
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
huh is that so Kupo? well if there were action figures of .Hack i'd play with them heehee i wish could read manga's like you guys but i can't anyways here's some extra info! about SakuBo!

Offline

Basic Info

Contrary to Sakubo's claim of being siblings, both Saku and Bo are controlled by an eleven year-old boy named Iori Nakanishi (中西伊織). Saku appears to be a 'big sister' personality created by Iori in order to protect him against other people, hinting that Sakubo's player may have Multiple Personalities or Dissociative Identity Disorder. Iori originally had an older sister named Sakura (桜), but she was stillborn.

Sakubo's starting weapon is called Ogre Heaven, a rare level 65 weapon. She also carries the Dusty Miller, which Bo bought in Rebirth.

Sakubo's Japanese voice actress, Megumi Toyoguchi, also does the voice of Mimiru.

Sakubo's grimoire has a sun and moon motif on each side of the cover.

Coincidentally, Sakubo's Lost Weapon changes in appearance depending on who uses it. When Saku uses it the cover and back are two suns, and when Bo uses it they're two moons.

In Japanese "Saku" (朔) means "new moon" and "Bo" (望) means "full moon".

Sakubo is 4'5" (137 cm) in height.

Even though the member address list counts them as a single character, they have two different affection level meters.

Sakubo's starting level is 65.

and what do you mean by KHR kupo? and i still couldn't believe that i'm the only male kupo!

(\ /)

( . .)

c('')('')

~Aisteru SakuBo!~

#38 Dec 28th 2007, 4:48am . Edited Dec 28th 2007, 4:49am
fmachibi
I cant really say...I only know that KHR last word is Reborn, thats it.

I saw that and I cannot believe it!! >____<

#39 Dec 28th 2007, 6:11am
Scarlet Ookami
KHR: Katekyo Hitman Reborn. Katekyo is the manga, Kateikyoushi is the anime. Both are awesome, but the anime left yout Irei Shouichi in the beginning... I guess they didn't know how much of an important character he would be... 150 chapter later. ;)

And~ BASIL, SQUALLO, HIBARI AND DYING WILL TSUNA ARE MINE!!! >_<

And yeah, I knew that stuff about Sakubo... I read it on .hack//WIKI. If you ever want to know something about the characters, .hack//WIKI is the place to look.

^_^

#40 Dec 28th 2007, 11:28am
fmachibi
I saw it alrdy, I saw them all I like to see. Now I waiting for more updates at .hack//Link and Kite(Link), also Haseo!! >W<
#41 Dec 28th 2007, 8:34pm
Scarlet Ookami
rawr, major disappointment... the Kite in LINK isn't the real Kite, right? But CC Corp even suggests he is... those people just love to tease.

:(

#42 Dec 28th 2007, 9:24pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
huh? wtf i wanna see the real Kite! so .hack fragment was an online offline game in the PS2 kupo but they shut it down Kupopo and it's only in japanese too bad they don't make much out of characters like Subaru... and Elk doesn't seem like En to me En's a lot more confident than Elk.. just the same silent type though...

and yeah CC Corp likes to tease damn it i wanna play kite!!!

~I Love You SakuBo!~

#43 Dec 28th 2007, 10:15pm
Scarlet Ookami
Haha, to me, I saw through Endrance right away and knew he was Elk... Trust me. NO ONE will EVER have his same sense of style(ie: hat, hair, eye color, color scheme... actually, this changed a bit, but it was purple, which to me, stood for Mia-chan) or the same cat. If you've played the old games, you'll know right away who he is when you fight im in the arena... when he was ranting about "she", aka Mia, I wanted to break down and cry... no, not from the emotion. It was actually... "ELK! You're alive! When I get your adress, let's go toa feild like old times! *cries of teh happiness*"

XD

And ya, FRAGMENT was the first attempt at an MMO. Only I don't think it was connected to a big net server... I think it was isolated. How else would they manage such graphics and movement with millions of players? They didn't. Our technology isn't that advanced... yet. I know where to buy the disk, but the server shut down... so it would be obsolete. And it was in Japan only. Japanese people get everything! But I can't blame em, knowing that they MAKE everything, too. And China...

;D

#44 Dec 28th 2007, 10:34pm . Edited Dec 28th 2007, 10:37pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
huh? really kupo? prolly if i had played the old games... maybe i wouldv'e done the same like Elkie!!! you look like Tsukasa how cute!!!

about fragment if you prolly knew japanese writings and speak of it then you could play that but it shut down already kupo! yeah they do make everything possible kupo... well see ya kupo i think i'll go to the hospital for now too bad though Subaru heehee

:D

#45 Dec 28th 2007, 10:46pm
fmachibi
I wasnt intersted in Endrance, when I first see him...I hated him... When I see him with Mia, I shouted "WHAT THE HECK!? THAT FREAk IS FrEAKING STUPID!?" And thats when Kuhn appear and thought that he was wrong. NOw Kuhn's right and he's my fav~~~!!! >W< I would go americian server because its easier to see.
#46 Dec 29th 2007, 4:38am
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
yeah! me too i wanna play and have a brigade finding that stipid key and rape Aura joke... why would i do that? and anyways Ookami did say a part about vol.2 and Ovan when her controller vibrated hahaha yeah taht tickled me a lot EVERYTHING Sakaki!!! you pervert!! hentai!!! die!!!

~Oh, I Love You SakuBo!~

#47 Dec 29th 2007, 5:09am
fmachibi
Sakaki sucks...When I play ToA he reminds me of Dist the Rose...(Reaper...whatever...) Dist is so annoying playing like a kid...

Ovan is a jerk, so I didnt cared. >_< My ToA now is at the Tower of Rem, man Im going to beat some replicas butt~~!!! >W<

#48 Dec 29th 2007, 8:27am
Scarlet Ookami
Ah, you said it now, fmachibi.

Aina: Ovan-niichan IS NOT A JERK!!! *blasts with OrVak Don*

Me: Oh... that's gonna leave a mark.

:P

#49 Dec 29th 2007, 7:50pm
PrinceOfSorroW Zero
ahahaha LOL

GO AINA!!!

awww she's so cute too.... too bad you won't become my party member kupo...

:D

#50 Dec 30th 2007, 12:48am


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