i really cant find any good ones i only found 2 that are really good but the authors arent updateing the others i either dont like who jakes paired up with or the writeing sucks(im sorry to those authors who wrote those but they do) so can someone write a good Yaoi fic for amdjl

I can try....do you like comedy?

It might take a while though, I have other stories to write.

Plus, it will probably end up sucking anyway.

But who should I put him with, Spud?

I guess that might work.

His dog?

Ewww, that's disturbing.

Oh well, I'll let you know if I get to it!

lol fudog lol no i was more thinking either with an oc like a male siern or something i read one where jakes paired with brad it was ptetty good i might read that pairing if it was reallly really really well written

An OC, huh?

I'll have to try that, wish me luck.

Also, what sucks about the stories you read?

What should I avoid in my story?

i cant really decribe it im sorry im an auther myself writeing a book so when something isnt right in a story it just dosent fit well lol but a lot move to fast and arent detailed enough some are to detailed it confues you (i spot this problem a lot faster cause it happens in my writeing) also the short ones that go super fast and dont have detail at all just plain anoyes me lol

Those sound like a lot of my weaknesses.

Anyway, I'm so jealous, I want to be an author!

I've got a few ideas but I can't type nearly fast enough to write a story. Plus I tend to get lazy half way through.

And I have no idea how to get published any way.

Any way, I have writer's block on two of my other stories so I might try the ADJL thing soon, but I haven't seen all the episodes, so it might end up slightly AU.

lol i havent even seen half the first season lol i moved to canada shortly after it was shown on tv and they didnt start showing it in canada till last year after i moved back and now i find its been stoped broadcasting here lol i missed like all of it but it is my favorite cartoon on disney why idk i just like it lol and to get a book published just search some publishers online google it or something

I just realized something...I can't do Jake's slang!

I feel so silly.

Any suggestions on stories to read to get the hang of the slang?

lmao hahahahaha that would be funny to see him not talking in slang lol lmao rofl hahahahaha of good one try that lol

What if I set in a few years in the future and explained that "he's matured beyond slang" but still acts like an idiot?

Do you think that would work?

oo yes i look forword to it lol i love jake lol hes like one of my fav char out of a lot of cartoons hehe

I'll start writing it as soon as I get over my laziness.

I'll probably load it up on this account, though it may be on my other one.

/throw unlazyness charms through computer to other computer/ NO LAZY!!!! i want to read a yaoi amdjl fic humph /throw more unlazness charms through computer/

Okay, but I tend to do short chapters.

Not to mention I haven't seen this show in a while.

I'll have to look it up on wikipedia to get my facts straight.

ok im just happy some one decided to write one finally its no fun when you write it yourslef cause the enoyment of reaing it is all gone

God the article sucked.

They only mentioned six characters.

Jake, Spud, Trixy, Fu, Rose, and his Grandpa.

thouse would be the main charaters so yeah id guess that would be all they have but you could probaly read somefnfics that have the other charaters

Have you read the wikipedia entries for shows like Naruto?

Anyway, the stupid thing doesn't even say how old Jake is!

And I can't remember.....

WHy do my n's always get capitalized when I write Anyway?

i think hes 15 dont know bt you said you would write himolder right since you couldnt do the slang so how bout uhm 20 thats old ebnough and i would ask for a mpreg but thats a little to much lol

20's a little old for me, plus I already started and I'm two lines in, 20 won't work.

Let's just say there's a dress involved.

yay well is mpreg to much to ask??? *chibi big sparkling eyes*

Male pregnancy...I can try.

But how does an Mpreg typically happen anyway?

What explanations are generally used?

uh what magicalcreature are you makeing jakes boyfriend or is jake the uke

Positions undecided, though I was leaning toward uke.

And I was going to go with super skilled human....I was thinking ninja.

Though if we go with magical creature I can do Shinigami.

well if jakes the uke then you can write it off as a dragon thing like ever what 6 generations a male dragon can get pregante or something if jakes seme then what ever the other person is it can be writed off as what ever they are it easy to to mpreg with magical creatuers

So should I go with Shinigami?

if that charater is uke yeah but if hes seme you dont have to its your choice you could also write it of as his family has this weird gene if hes human works both ways your story i wont interfer anymore dont want to ruine it lol

Does his boy friend have to be the father?

Or can I have the Dark dragon or some other bad guy rape him or something like that?

dosent matter to me i juust want to see mpreg in an amdjl fic lol its your story do as you wish im just sugesting some stuff

..............

God I have no idea how to go about with an Mpreg but this will be fun!

new experiences are good for you yeah /big chibi head smile/

Here's what I'm planning to open with.

......

“It’s coming,” Jake screamed. He couldn’t believe it. Many crazy things had happened to him in the seventeen years he’d been alive, but a male pregnancy? Didn’t these things usually tend to happen in the realm of fanfiction? How it happened was one thing to worry about, but a bigger problem lingered in his head. ‘Who is the father?’

ooooooooohhhhh i like it nice ring to the 'but whos the father line' i really like it keep up the good work

I just hope my computer holds up well.

Anyway, I'll try to get the first chapter done soon, but it may or may not end up being humor.

however it goes is fine as long as its yaoi well written and mpreg im happy :)

g2g its like 12 here and i have school tomorrow bye

Well, my computer is running again. See you tomorrow.

Have fun in school!

Chapter one is up, but its short, and nothing YAOI has happened yet, unless of course you count the birth scene.

Chapter two is up, but its short too.

This is harder than I thought.

Anyway, I need to work on my Naruto story soon.

omg 2 chapters already i only what went to sleep and went to school omg!!!!!!!!!!!11

They kind of suck though.

But I'm trying.

Its just a lot harder than I thought.

I'm trying to make it an action thing with some romance but I don't want to make the relationship move too fast.

I just hope its not too slow.

actuallly its not to slow its ok but its a bit fast not to fast that its like bleh but just a tiny bit faster then what a really good story would be at other wise i like it so far

So what should I do to slow it down?

Did I have the bad guys attack too quickly?

it was at the end of the chapter and the bigning of the next i felt a lottle fast like it was trying to move on faster

Taking things slowly is one of my BIGGEST weaknesses.

I'm trying my best to work on it though.

By the way, have you completely forgotten your RP forum? I'm still waiting.

my RP fourm?? i didnt get an email from it so i didnt know lol sorry

Thats okay.

Okay, honestly I'm, stumbling around in the dark with this story.

Normally I know where to go, but I have only the faintest idea of where to go.

Anyway, I'm planning a flashback scene of how Jake and Daisuke met.

well stumblring is sometimes good cause you start writeing on instint and it gets so random its funny when you write on instint it will go all over the place yet still make sence like the anime lucky star

Its not much, but chapter three is up!

I'm thinking of doing a comedy YAOI later.

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