Someone just flamed it...so I deleted the review, MWAHAHAHA!

Any tips or ideas on how to continue? I'm stuck!

I just know that

A) I need to introduce some other guy to make a love triangle.

B) Do some backstory.

C) Tell Slash haters to get a life and stop reading.........

D) Write some new chapters.

I'm working on some other updates for other stories, but I hope to update this soon.

lmao so diffrent then what i do to flamer i put them in the hall of flamers where they get laughed at for reading the story when it was clearly warned to be whatever it is lmao yeah its really good though it sort of is getting faster then before slow i down like add detail and such there was apoint that is seemed to skip from one place to another i didnt get it lmao

Going from point a to point b is my biggest weakness, and I didn't want to move too slow and lose people's interest, so I ended up going too fast.

I'm trying to add more detail though, is there anything specific you want me to elaborate on?

yaoi wow ever thought it pairing for JLAD maybe like jake and spud ?

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