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Susanoo's Endless DarknessTopic: Story idea prototype
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessAura techniques- Techniques which channels natural and live chakra through a persons body. The person must reavh certain conditions to reach it. | #2 Jul 20th 2008, 10:01pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessTwin fox part 1 The sun rose in a large village called Konoha. In one particular apartment a young looking boy stood watching over a sleeping girl. He was about 151.3 cm tall and had blonde spiky hair tied in a short pony tail that went just pass his neck. His irises are a blue color. He has on a pure black shirt on with white dragon a on the front and black cargo pants with a red phoenix on the right pant’s leg and a blue wolf on the left pant’s leg. He leaned down to the girl in the bed and smirked. He took a deep breath and let out a mighty roar. “WAKE UP!!!!” The girl jumped straight out of bed wide eyed. She looked around and once she stopped the boy she narrowed her eyes. “Do you know what time it is?” She asked in a dangerous tone. “It 5 am. Let’s go it time for you morning excises.” He said. “Why must we do this today?” She whined. “Because Homura, you need to control your chakra, you have too much.” He said. The girl identified as Homura pouted. “But the test is today.” She said still pouting. The boy moved in quickly and gave her a quick kiss on the lips. He pulled away as her eyes widen, a blush covering her face. She narrowed her eyes at him before rushing at him. “You bastard. You took my first kiss!” She yelled throwing a punch. He dodged it as he smiled. “I told you I would kiss you if you pouted again.” He said dodging a kick. “Now even though you red panties are nice to look at you need to put on some clothes.” He said. She froze and looked down. She realized she was only in her underclothes and blushed a deeper shade of red. “NARUTO!!!” She yelled angrily as he dashed out the room. Naruto sat on the in a chair at the table with his eyes closed sporting a few bruises as he wait for his friend to come from the bathroom. “Hurry up Homura. You’ve been in there for half of an hour.” Naruto yelled out. “Shut up you perv. I’m right here.” She said standing next to the table. Naruto opened his eyes and got a good look at her. She was about 150.1 cm tall, she has a slender build and near b-cup bust size. Her blonde hair is in two pony tail and she has bangs covering her forehead (Think Sexy no jutsu Naruto.). Her eyes are cerulean blue and she has three whisker like scars on both cheeks. She is wearing orange and blue jumpsuit that shows off a little of her figure. She has on blue shinobi sandals and a blue crystal on a necklace. “Finally. I thought your food was going to get cold.” Naruto said. “Yeah, yeah.” She said sitting down. She looked at the bacon and eggs on her plate and picked up a fork. “Thanks.” She said. “No problem.” Naruto replied as he smiled. “What did I tell you about wearing that orange jumpsuit?” Naruto asked. “Shut up. Orange is my favorite color.” Homura said. Naruto shook his head and watched her as she eat. After she was done she got up and placed her dishes in the sink. She quickly washed them and put them away. Naruto stood up walking towards the door with Homura behind him. He opened the door and walked out with Homura following him. He walked down the steps and stopped as she closed and locked the door. She quickly walked to him as he waited down the stairs. “Now let’s go.” Naruto said before jumping up to the roof. Homura followed him as he dashed towards their training spot. “So what are we doing today Naruto-sensei?” She asked. “Hn, just normal chakra excises. Other than that nothing.” Naruto said smirking. “What’s up with that smirk?” She asked. “What smirk?” He replied. “That smirk that was just on your face.” Homura replied. “There was no smirk on my face.” Naruto replied still with a smirk. She dashed up to his side as he turn his face to his left. “Then why won’t you look at me?” She asked with a tick on her forehead. Naruto turned to look at her with tears rolling down his face. “Why are you crying?” She asked with a surprised expression. “I’m just so happy.” He said sobbing. “Happy about what?” She asked. The tears stopped rolling down his cheeks as he took on a thoughtful expression. “I don’t know. I didn’t think that far ahead.” He said. Her right eye started to twitch as she glared at him. “Baka.” She said. “No I’m not.” He replied. “Yes you are.” She replied “No I’m not.” He replied again. “Yes you are.” She said quickly. “No I’m not” He said just as quick. “Yes you are.” She said almost yelling. “Yes I am.” Naruto said. “Not your not” She said glaring “Yes I am” Naruto replied. “No you’re not and that’s that.” Homura replied. “Alright I’m not.” He said smiling. She blinked with a frown. ‘What just happened?’ She thought. It took them five minutes to reach their training ground. Naruto stood a foot away from Homura with a smile on his face. “Now first I want you to run up the tree. Then I want you to balance on this strand of hair.” He said plucking a strand from his head. “Then I want you so sing a song while making a kunai hover five inches over your hand.” Naruto said. Homura just stared at him like he was stupid. “You can’t balance on a strand of hair!!!” She yelled out. Naruto blinked at her. “Is it necessary to yell? I’m right here.” Naruto said. She blinked in embarrassment and anger as he showed her his strand of hair. He closed his eyes with a look of concentration on his face. After a few seconds the strand of hair stood erect like a pin. Naruto opened his eyes and placed it on the ground. | #3 Jul 20th 2008, 10:08pm . Edited Jul 20th 2008, 11:14pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMissing ninja Naruto part 1 A young man stood in the middle of an empty clearing. He stared forward with his right hand on the butt of the hilt of his buster sword that was stabbed into the ground. He stood at a height of 5'10 ft tall. He has long golden blonde hair is spiked in different directions and is tied in a ponytail. There is three whisker like marks on both his cheeks. His body is hidden behind a pure red cloak swaying in the wind. His eyes is shaded by the shadows of his hair. The young man sighed before tilting his head upward. "Hello Maya." Naruto said. A woman appeared in the clearing with a snarl on her face. She is about 5'8 ft tall. Her silver hair reaches her neck and two thin bangs come over to the side of her face like antenna. Her eyes are pure blue. She is wearing a red quipo dress with a dragon on it. Around her neck is a black yin pendent. She is wearing black wrist bands and high heel shoes. In her hand is a long nodachi. "Naruto..." She said glaring. "Such an angry tone." The person known as Naruto replied. "Of course I'm angry! Why, Why, Why are you running away? Why are you becoming a missing ninja!" She yelled out. | #4 Jul 20th 2008, 10:58pm | |
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The MotherLands Free Loyaltyboth of them seem good but how about this Inuyasha naruto cross over FUTURE CHAPTER (Skip into four weeks after team 7s arrival in feudal Japan) (Also after naruto and sakura have an argument about Sasuke and inuyasha and kagome have a fight) “……………what was that?” Kagome asked her self as she woke up to a sound. She looked around to check the room. “…..nothing here.” She said checking the next room, while constantly feeling cold. She soon came to Naruto’s room to find it empty “…maybe….he went for a walk?” kagome asked herself Looking at the wide open door the cold midnight breeze sweeping in “…..no wonder I was so cold” she said blankly she then looked at the ground which was still wet and muddy from the storm earlier that same day. She stepped out and closed the door now in search of naruto. “what was he thinking…it is way to cold out here” she said to herself wondering why he would go out so late at night She walked thought the night the cold wind blowing on the grass making it sway with the trees full of leaves and life as the moved from side to side along with the wind giving into its force the sky a dark blue with the moons shine illuminating the forest Soon after passing a meadow and a few muddy streams now overflowing with water thanks to the storm she saw a figure sitting on top a hill Kagome paused and stated to approach “….hello…..kagme chan” naruto said “Naruto …..Why are you up here” kagome asked running up to him while naruto seemed to move his arm across his face vigorously “…..I just came for a walked” he lied immediately before kagome could come up to him “well why at night” kagome asked “it is way to cold” she said shivering “……..I don t know” naruto said “I just felt like it” he said soon there was a silence as they both sat at the top of the hill the breeze sweeping by as the minutes passed Kagome was staring at naruto silently trying to figure out the real reason he came out. Naruto stared at the starry night and the full moon lighting the area the stars helping along “he isn’t usually this quiet from what I have seen” she thought “what made him like this” she then saw naruto mouth something slowly with a sigh kagome mimicking it “as…sasu SASUKE” she thought realizing it “so that’s what it was so this Sasuke person is more than nothing” she thought “……naruto” kagome asked Naruto turned his head towards her “yes” he asked “……..who is ….Sasuke uchiha?” the moment he asked a gust blew by the leaves sweeping up and tearing as they where picked up “………he…was a old teammate of mine and sakura” naruto said looking away his eyes narrowing “….who…what happened to him” she asked “….Sasuke was a kid….when his brother killed his whole clan” naruto started shocking kagome “…from there he went down hill…he focused everything on revenge for his brother massacring his whole clan for some unknown reason …..Yet he was the heartthrob off all the girls” naruto said “…soon he came to team7 along with me and sakura……” “Soon after a while on the team we went to the chunin exams” naruto explained “where …..orochimaru gave him a curse mark, the curse corrupted him and made him lust more for power and vengeance on his brother” naruto explained “after the exams where over his brother….itachi came” naruto said “….he was a part of Akatsuki …a organization after people like me who are containers” he said pointing to his seal “….sasuke then challenged his brother and lost terribly” naruto said “this made him want more power even more…..soon……making him go to orochimaru” naruto said his eyes narrowing even more “me and some of my friends went after him ending up battling some of orochimarus best men we not against them but had many fatalities” he stated “…ending up with me facing sasuke…….in that battle…….he tried to kill me at least three times” naruto said kagomes face growing more shocked “..It ended with one last hit I went for his face but instead swiped away because I did not want to kill him….but he did different, he then left…” naruto said “…soon after I trained for a few years. We found information on sasukes whereabouts” naruto said “I still wanted to bring him back” he said “with that I faced orochimaru and…..in the fight hurting sakura because I lost control of the kyuubi” he said “we then got to sasuke...but instead he barely killed us and got our asses handed to us” naruto said “…..then we tried a third time and failed………I made a promise to sakura that I would bring him back….but I don’t know if I can do that anymore” naruto said “Well don’t worry” kagome said “I am sure you can do it” she said “….but that isn’t it” naruto said causing kagome to get a puzzled look “….these past years sakura hasnoticed me more” naruto said “and I think if I bring him back…….sakura wont notice me anymore” naruto said “….that was what you two where arguing about before” she asked “yes” naruto nodded “it seems no matter what I do I won’t be better” he said “…..wow…he is such a nice person…..more nice than stupid inuyasha” kagome thought “well she doesn’t know what she is missing” kagome said
“What?” naruto asked? “Well first off you’re smart funny and attractive” she said “you think?” naruto asked “yeah” kagome nodded “so what if she wants that traitor” she said “, but still.” Naruto said “naruto…its okay” she said”…thank you……kagome chan” naruto said smiling “burr it is cold out here” kagome said shivering”….this better” naruto asked hugging her “...yeah it is” she smiled “….you knows….its beautiful” naruto said causing kagome to look puzzled “the sky” naruto said “…..oh yeah…… it dose” she said hugging him tighter “like you” “what?” kagome asked “Huh?” naruto asked putting his hand over his mouth “…s…sorry it just came out and I” he said trying to explain “,,,,,,thanks” she said smiling “…….no need”naruto said ”this dose seem kind of like a romantic scene right” kagome chuckled “yeah it dose” naruto agreed “….could you hold me a little closer its way too cold” she said “sure naruto said hugging her tighter son another sweep of wind blew by this time a small leaf hitting kagome and startle ign her she move away causing her and naruto to fall down together ending up with naruto ontoof kagoem both of them blushing”……uh” naruto said his face getting redder by the seconds with another now more powerful gust a small rock hit the back of Naruto’s head making his head go down his lips locking with kagomes both naruto and kagome froze in the kiss “naruto looked at her and then got off as quickly as possible kagome sat up “………we just kissed…didn’t we?” kagome said naruto slowly shaking his head yes they stayed silent for another minute before naruto spoke up “….kagome chan….may I ask you something?” naruto said “…what” kagome asked “……..did you enjoy……’it’?” he asked “d….did you?”“………yes” naruto answered slowly “……..I ….I did to” kagome blushed “…want to?” she started before naruto kissed her again pulling her into a hug “….wow” kagome said blushing”…so…you. Like me?” kagome asked “do you like me?” naruto askedkagome nodding “……I guess I do to” naruto smiled the blush getting stronger “….thank you…kagome chan” “….for what?” she asked “…..for being here for me” naruto smiled “….no need” she mimicked naruto as they broke into another kiss as a pair of eyes watched from behind the shades and trees “….k…kagome: inuyasha whispered not believing what he was seeingbefore running away from the scene |
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Susanoo's Endless Darknessalright at least it's a good crossover. not those lame ones |
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The MotherLands Free Loyaltywha do u mean atleast T_T it was that bad? |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessNot what I mean. I mean at least it's like the other lame crossovers. It was good |
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The MotherLands Free LoyaltyOKAY XD now for this one |
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The MotherLands Free LoyaltyKyuubi “Naruto….kit…you awake” Kyuubi asked “Yeah I’m here” Naruto then answered “Do you have the body yet?” Kyuubi then asked “Well…..you need a mans body right” “No brat!!!” Kyuubi yelled back “I’m a girl!!!” “Yeah right” Naruto said with a laugh “I am too!!” Kyuubi then yelled back “Then prove it fox!!” Naruto then asked “Fine!!!” Kyuubi yelled as the fox disappeared in a poof of smoke. “Where the—the hell are you” Naruto said coughing on the smoke. “Over here idiot!” A feminine voice then said. As the smoke cleared Naruto could see her. She had long red silky hair that reached down past her shoulders. She also had red eyes like Kurenai Yuuhi. She was almost as tall as Naruto wear a black kimono that was a little to small. Naruto found his self looking up and down her body examining her surprisingly developed body. “Ummm….kit” Kyuubi said back with a small blush “Could you….not look at me that way” “Oh…oh I’m so sorry” Naruto said realizing her was staring at her. “It’s okay kit” Kyuubi said back wit a sick smile “It’s been a long time since someone’s looked at me that way. How know…..you might just have yourself a ‘mate’ if you play your cards right” Naruto’s faced turned a bright red. Kyuubi only giggled at his appearance. “So….do you have a body?” “Well yes” Naruto said back “I brung both a male and female. But before I do anything more….explain to me why I’m doing this again?” “Well…..your Hokage said you need a ‘mate’ to continue your clan, remember?” Kyuubi said back “The deal was that if I get a body I’ll get you a ‘mate’. But now I have to marry you” “What?!!” Naruto said dumbstruck “Why?!!” “Well….when I leave this body I will have to transfer all my power to you” Kyuubi said with a sigh “And I have to marry the demon king….which technically would be you. Why you have problem ‘mating’ with me Naruto-kun?” “No but….I’m basically marrying you?” Naruto then asked “Yes…” Kyuubi said back with a sigh “I will be the demon kings queen. Anyways you’ll have to have help you can get controlling the energy I leave behind for you” “So will I have all of it?” Naruto then asked “I’ll have a little but not that much” Kyuubi said back “Second question” Naruto then said with a small blush “Well you….ummmm…like exactly like this?” “Oh” Kyuubi said with a soft voice as she revealed more of her leg “You like how I look” “Umm….well ummm….yeah” Naruto said madly blushing “Hmmm…glad to see that” Kyuubi said back with a smile “And to answer your question yes I will look exactly the same.” “Okay…should we start the process” Naruto then said “You read my mind” “What the….where I am?” Kyuubi yawned stretching her arms. She the recalled the entire event. She then looked over to find Naruto on his knees in pain. “Kit…kit you okay” Kyuubi asked as she ran over to help him. He seemed to be traumatized and shivering. “He must be in a lot of pain” Kyuubi thought to herself as leaned him against a tree “What if I….no I….I just can’t” She argued with herself “A kiss would calm him down though….” She then sat there and looked at Naruto. “Dammit….I can’t just sit here and watch him suffer” She then leant in and claimed his lips. Naruto opened his eyes slightly as he kissed back. “My….my first kiss” Naruto thought to himself “Dammit….he’s awake now but….why can’t I stop?” Kyuubi mentally cursed herself as she deepened the kiss “Dammit pull away!!!” Soon Kyuubi slowly pulled away. Naruto was now wide awake and staring at her. “I’m….sorry” Kyuubi said blushing “It’s just it’s been so long since I---” Kyuubi was unable to as Naruto kissed her. Kyuubi quickly deepened the kiss and then broke away “Why….why did you do that?” Kyuubi asked trying to catch her breath. “Because I…..kind of liked it” Naruto said back causing Kyuubi to blush “Let’s get going kit” Kyuubi said getting up “We need to go see your Hokage” Naruto then also rose. As they started walking Kyuubi almost fall but Naruto caught her “You okay…Kyuubi-chan?” Naruto then asked “I’m fine” the demoness said back “It just feels a little weird walking. I mean…I have done it since I was locked up” “Oh….” Naruto said back saddening “Hey….that’s not your fault” Kyuubi then said back “Let’s just look forward” “Hey is Kyuubi your real name?” “No it’s not” the demoness said back “That’s my ex-husbands….mine is Kyuuba” “Kyuuba huh” Naruto then said “Well that’s different” “I names a name kit” Kyuuba said back “At least I’m not named after ramen” “True” Naruto said back as they approached the Hokage’s office. “You ready?” Naruto then asked “Let’s just get it over wit kit” Kyuuba said back with a sigh “Hey there Naruto…who is this” Tsunade asked “This is Kyuuba-chan” Naruto said back “And she has agreed to help me revive my clan” “So Kyuuba….do you know what’s required?” “Yes I do” Kyuubi said back in a loving voice “I feel a strong attraction to this one” She then kissed Naruto on his cheek “Fine…..if this is whom you chose to have your kids with then sign here” Tsunade said giving him the clipboard. They both signed and then left the room. “Wow Kyuuba-chan that was some good acting” Naruto said as they were walking in the street. “Who ever said I was faking” Kyuuba said back with a smile “Now let’s get back to your place” Kyuuba said walking ahead leaving a stunned Naruto behind. “Wow….it’s sure looks different out her then inside your body” Kyuuba said walking in “Can you show me around?” “Yeah sure” Naruto said walking around. Naruto showed her the whole house. “And this is my bedroom” Naruto said walking in “The place I wanted to see the most” Kyuuba said back as she pounced on Naruto. They then landed on the bed. “He-Hey” Naruto stuttered “Well getting to work” Kyuuba said back as she kissed him “Those baby’s aren’t gonna themselves” “But don’t you want too wait?” Naruto then asked “No I don’t” Kyuuba said back as she started grinding against Naruto “I don’t know what it is today, but I just can’t stay away form you. I want you now Naruto”“Anyway…..I know your enjoying it…aren’t you Naruto-Kuuuun” Kyuuba purred in his ear “I don’t want to right now” Naruto said avoiding her kisses “I’m still tried form our journey today. I just want some rest” “Fine!!” Kyuuba said madly as she rolled off of him and laid on the opposite side of the bed. Then Naruto heard her mumble something a bout not fulfilling ‘her needs’. “Kyuuba….I’m just not ready” Naruto said back “Can’t you understand that?” “Hn” Kyuuba grumpily responded “Just get your ‘precious’ sleep” Kyuuba said back. “Kyuuba….” Naruto then asked “Why do you want get right to it?” “Well….I just want a family….a place of belonging” Kyuuba said turning around “And….I just feel really attracted to you right now” “Do you…..do you really want to have my kids” “Yes I want to have your litter” Kyuuba said as she kissed him “And I know it’s a little soon to say this, but I have loved you ever since I came out of my cage. I want to be with you” “I….feel the same” Naruto then said “I really want you to have my children to” “Then-then why the wait?!!” Kyuuba nearly yelled “I just….feel overwhelmed with these quick feelings” Naruto said back “I really love you though” “Then show me” Kyuuba said as she slid on top of Naruto again “But Kyuuba-chan I--” “Not now” Kyuuba said with a warm smile “Just fellow your heart” Naruto then spontaneously kissed her. (7 Hours later) “Ummmm….that felt good” Kyuuba said waking up with a yawn. She then looked over at Naruto. “I demon with a human…who would have though it” Kyuuba then licked the side of his face. “Huh….Kyuubi-chan….is that you?” Naruto said cracking open an eye “Who else would it be idiot?” Kyuuba said with a smile “So how do ‘following you heart’ feel?” “Great” Naruto said back with a sigh. He then bought her head to his and claimed her lips. They kissed like that for awhile before braking apart “Ummmm…..you are one fascinating human” Kyuuba said with a smile “I can’t wait to have a litter with you” “Are you hungry….Kyuubi chan?” Naruto then asked “Well…yeah” Kyuuba said as her stomach rumbled “I guess I could go for some ramen” “You read my mind exactly” Naruto said with a smile (At the Ramen cart) “Ummm….I remember that smell” Kyuuba said back inhaling the smell “Can I have two large original ramen dishes” Naruto said as he sat down next to his future wife “Sure thing Naruto” the old man said back. “And who’s the lovely lady?” “Oh well that’s just---” “I’m Naruto’s wife” Kyuuba said interrupting Naruto “Oh really” the old man said back “And your name is?” “Kyuuba….Kyuuba Uzumaki” Kyuuba said back “It’s nice to meet you” “Likewise” The man said back before going back to make their orders. “Did…did you have to say that?!!” Naruto said back “I mean…were not even engaged!!” “Look if I’m going to have your babies I want to be considered as such” Kyuuba pouted “I’m not just some wh*re” “I never said you were!!” Naruto yelled back “Stop putting words in my mouth” “Okay okay, cam down” Kyuuba said hugging him “I didn’t mean anything by that….I just want you to be mine and no one else’s” “Okay…but after we eat I have to meet my team” Naruto said back “I’m coming with you” Kyuuba hen added in “Huh, why?” Naruto then asked “I want to meet your team in person” the demoness said back darkly “I also want to see Sakura” “Huh, why Sakura?” Naruto then asked. “I have my reasons” Kyuuba said with a smile “Here’s your ramen” the old man said as he handed them their bowls. They then finished and walked hand and hand to the training grounds. “Hey there guys” Naruto said as he met up with his team. Sakura who was listening to one of Sai’s boring conversations was overjoyed to see Naruto. “Naruto!!!” Sakura yelled as she tackled Naruto in a hug. Kyuuba glared at them at the angrily. “What the HELL does she think she’s doing to MY Naruto!!!!!!!!!!” Kyuuba mentally screamed “Fuck this I’m saying something” “Ummm what the hell do you think you’re doing with MY Naruto!” Kyuuba said madly “Your….Naruto?” Sakura asked as she got up “How is he yours?” “I’m his girlfriend” Kyuuba said back cracking her knuckles “And I’d appreciate you not playing with my mate!!!” “Mate?!!” Sakura said back raising her fist “Hey, hey calm down both of you” Naruto said jumping in between the two “Just give me five minutes Naruto” Kyuuba said trying to get at Sakura “Five” Sakura said with a laugh “I’ll only need two for this sl*t” “That is it b*tch your going down” Kyuuba then yell “Would the two of you stop!!!!!” Naruto then yelled at the top of his lung making them both cover their ears. “Ummm Naruto can you come here?” Kyuuba then asked him sweetly “Why sure” Naruto said as he walked over only to get hit over the head “Next time warn me when your going to do that!!!” Kyuuba scolded him “Okay, okay” Naruto said back not wanting to hit again “Just calm down” “Fine I will calm down” Kyuuba then said as she took three deep breaths. She then looked over at Sakura and did a low grow only to get a scale from Naruto. “Look…..let’s start over” Kyuuba said a little calmer “I’m Kyuuba Naruto’s girlfriend” “Hi…..I’m Sakura” Sakura said back”Nice to meet to meet you” “Oh so your dickless wonder’s new girlfriend” Sai said with his usual smile “Good luck trying to have kids” “Unless you want to lose your’s shut up!!” Kyuuba yelled back with anger “Yo!” Kakashi said as he appeared with a poof of some. “Why are you always late?!” Sakura yelled with Naruto “You better have a good excuse!!” “Ummm to be honest….I don’t” he said rubbing the back of his head. ‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’ “So….who are you?” Kakashi then asked “I’m Kyuuba” Kyuuba said back “Come on….no way that energy back there was human….now be honest” Kakashi then said with a sigh “Your quite the smart one Kakashi of the copy wheel eye” Kyuuba said back “Fine….I’m Kyuuba or….what you guys call me…Kyuubi” “No…no that’s impossible” Kakashi said in disbelief “That beast is sealed away in Naruto” “Just for the record human I don’t enjoy being called a demon” Kyuuba said with a low growl “If it weren’t for Naruto I swear I would……….” Kyuubi then started muttering to herself. Kakashi heard her mutter the words ‘Killing’, and ‘Murder’“Soooo….” Kakashi said pulling Kyuuba out of her daze “You’re Kyuubi?” “Kyuuba with a ba!!!!” Kyuuba then yelled “I’m so sick and tired of people confusing me with my ex!!! It just makes me want to scream!!!!” “Okay, okay!!” Kakashi said back “Just calm down” Kyuuba then took three deep breaths before speaking again. “Fine…….now what do you want?” “Well….I wanted to know why a monst—I mean person like you is doing out?” Kakashi then asked “I mean….I thought that seal was unbreakable” “Me too” Kyuuba said as she leaned agaist a tree “But there was a way to reverse it left but his father” “But why, why are you out” “To get married to him” Kyuuba said pointing at Naruto “You’re marring Naruto?” Kakashi asked “I thought you would have hated him” “Well….he need a spouse and I……felt bad for the kid” Kyuuba said trying to hide her blush “I mean…look at all the shit he’s been put through because of me. But I do love him and he loves me” “So you’re here….basically just to get married to him?” Kakashi said lazily pointing at Naruto “And what’s wrong with him?!” Kyuuba said with another low growl “I’ll just let you know ahead of time that I’m very protective of my mate’s. Very protective, got it?!” “Mate’s?” Kakashi asked confused “Well……My first husband was Kyuubi” Kyuuba said “He was the one you guys mistook me for. We both turned into foxes and battled. When I killed him he turned back into a human. One of your ninja found Kyuubi and mistook him for a leaf ninja and me for the ‘great demon lord Kyuubi’ thus starting that little war. His father though knew I was not Kyuubi and agreed to seal me in his son to keep me safe. But he asked in return that I protect his son……Who would have guessed that he would be my next mate” “Don’t mean to be rude but…” Kakashi asked “Why were you two fighting in the first place?” “It’s okay…I know your just curious like most humans” Kyuuba said back with a sigh “Well….my ‘old’ mate decided to kill my kits so I killed him basic plan and simple” “Wow I hope that never happens to Naruto” Kakashi said under his breath. “I would never hurt Naruto!!” Kyuuba said offended “Because he loves me!!” “And your other one didn’t” “No….he didn’t” Kyuuba said back “Look…I just want a happy life with him…is that to much to ask for?” “No…not really” Kakashi said back “And if you ever need help…I’ll be there for you two” “Truly……thank you” Kyuuba said back with a smile “Thank you for supporting us” “No prob” Kakashi said with a lazy smile “I’m just happy Naruto found some one loving protective like you….but I have one more question……you were the one giving Naruto power right?” “Well…yeah” Kyuuba said back “Some of those opponents were way above his level……I had to step in……why?” “Well…you see I wanted to know if Naruto still has powers” Kakashi said getting to the point “Well….the transfer makes me leave most of my power behind” Kyuuba then said “So…how much power do you have right now?” Kakashi then asked “Well…I can only muster up one maybe two tails at max” Kyuuba said calmly with shrug “The rest of the powers with Naruto” “You sure are calm about this subject” Kakashi said back surprised “Aren’t you even slightly worried, I mean most of our enemies can handle that kind of power with ease” “I know I’ll be at a sight disadvantage” Kyuuba said with another shrug “But I know how to use the power Naruto doesn’t” “How can you say that?” Kakashi then asked “He’s able to go up to the fourth tail and has two more he can use” “Yes that is true….” Kyuuba said back “But…it’s only triggered by rage. Naruto becomes blood thirsty and attacks everything in sight. I on the other hand can think while using it” “True….but shouldn’t it be gone now that your out of his body?” “No…that’s the chakra it’s self not me” Kyuuba then stated “He still can’t control any of it, and with Akatsuki on the hunt….I’m just worried about him” “That just means we’ll have to train harder” Kakashi said back “Could you teach him how to properly us his powers, and if so how long would it take?” “A couple of months maybe….” Kyuuba said thinking about it “It depend on how fast he learns the basics” “okay then I’ll be expecting you to help him train” Kakashi said jumping down from the branch he was sitting on “Now lets get back” “So what’s wrong Kyuuba-chan?” Naruto asked as she and their teacher came into view “Naruto I’m fine but thank you for worrying” Kyuuba said as she came up and kissed him “We were just talking about your training honey” “My….training?” Naruto said back “Yes you will be trained by Kyuuba” Kakashi said walking up to them “She will show you how to use the nine or seven tails you have left” “Okay sounds good” Naruto said back “Let’s start” “Give me four laps around this training ground” “Four laps that’s like 6 miles!!!!” Naruto yelled in response “Why yes it is and unless you want another you will make it in under less than thirty minutes!” Kyuuba yelled back “Now go!!!” Naruto then ran off as fast as a bullet. “Ummmm……was there any point behind that?” Sakura then asked “I though you would work on chakra” “There is a method behind my madness” Kyuuba then said back with a smile “By lowering his stamina he has to use his chakra” Sai then blurted out “Correct” Kyuubi said with a smile “So now it will be easier to use” “Wow…you really know a lot” Sakura said back a little amazed “Why thank you” Kyuuba said with a warm smile | #10 Jul 21st 2008, 2:16pm | |
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The MotherLands Free Loyaltyoops....i have been blocked) | #11 Jul 21st 2008, 2:17pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless Darknessyou really need to space out who is talking. | #12 Jul 21st 2008, 2:19pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMissing Ninja Naruto part 2 ".....Hn, Why?" Naruto asked looking up. "...Hn odd question." Naruto said. Maya growled before dashing at him. She raised Reiki upward as Naruto grabbed his buster sword. With a hard tug he rippped it from the ground and spun blocking Maya's incoming strike. Sparks flew as Maya pushed down on his blade. The ground cracked under Naruto as he stood easily. "Stop messing around. You know everything that would happen if you leave. So why? Why are you leaving your home?" She asked before jumping back. | #13 Jul 21st 2008, 2:59pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMissing Ninja part 3 "Home?" Naruto asked out he he moved his large buster sword downward. "...I never thought of Konoha as a home." Naruto said. Maya blinked at him surprised. "What?" Maya said. "Maya....a home is someplace where you can feel safe....where you can relax." Naruto said. "Konoha is no such place for me." Naruto said. "Why isn't it?" Maya asked before dashing at him. | #14 Jul 21st 2008, 3:15pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMissing ninja Naruto 4 Naruto smirked before moving over to the side dodging her attack. He kept moving as Maya turned and slashed at him. He stopped and jumped up flipping over her. He landed just behind her and leaned back touching her back. "Do you remember when we fought twenty bandits and we decided to fight back to back like this?" Naruto asked. "Grrrr...Yes i do." She said before turning and slashing at him. Naruto felt the movement and shifted his buster sword to block it. "It was really fun." Naruto said not even looking at her. "Stop changing the subject." Maya said pushing against his sword. "The first memory I have is of a blade being poised to stab me." Naruto said. Maya stopped and stared at him. "He was stopped and I acted like i was sleeping so they wouldn't know...." Naruto said before pushing Reiki off his buster sword. He walked forward smirking. | #15 Jul 21st 2008, 3:53pm . Edited Jul 21st 2008, 4:54pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMissing ninja Naruto part 5 "...they even went after Aya....How do you expect me to trust people who would kill innocent girls for no reason." Naruto said before stopping. "Naruto..." she started. He turned to Maya and tilted his head slight. "Maya...come with me." Naruto said. Maya eyes widen in surprise. "Wha?" She replied. Naruto stabbed his buster blade into the ground before walking towards her. She quickly stepped back as he smiled. "Come with me." Naruto said walking closer. "I..I...I can't." Maya said stopping, her back hitting a tree. | #16 Jul 21st 2008, 5:54pm . Edited Jul 21st 2008, 6:07pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilight(anyone here?) | #17 Jul 21st 2008, 6:31pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless Darknessyea | #18 Jul 21st 2008, 6:32pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilighthey sup | #19 Jul 21st 2008, 6:33pm | |
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BiteMeasHidansGalI'm here. I just posted a new topic and part of a chapter you might wanna take a look at. | #20 Jul 21st 2008, 6:34pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless Darknessnotyhing just writing ideas for stories | #21 Jul 21st 2008, 6:35pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilightsounds like fun....i'll post one up... eventually.... when i finish it.... | #22 Jul 21st 2008, 6:41pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessI need help with what Naruto should say to Maya to get her to come with him | #23 Jul 21st 2008, 6:44pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilightwell does naruto like maya....cause if so i could probably think of something.... | #24 Jul 21st 2008, 6:48pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessNo Naruto doesn't like Maya....He LOVES HER. the problem is Maya has a boyfriend | #25 Jul 21st 2008, 6:49pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilighthm..... that makes things a little more difficult...so whats this boyfriend like? | #26 Jul 21st 2008, 6:51pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessHe's a nice guy. Strong (Not stronger than Naruto.) Smart, brave, kind, caring, courageous, good looking, nice fasion sense, not to talkive yet not quiet, he listens. | #27 Jul 21st 2008, 6:53pm . Edited Jul 21st 2008, 6:54pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilighthas naruto known maya longer | #28 Jul 21st 2008, 6:54pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessYes...since he was about eight | #29 Jul 21st 2008, 6:55pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilighti guess he could point that out.....how old is maya | #30 Jul 21st 2008, 6:57pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessSame age. Around 18 | #31 Jul 21st 2008, 6:59pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilight.....hm.... *thinking*...... | #32 Jul 21st 2008, 7:00pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessAnything yet? | #33 Jul 21st 2008, 7:12pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilightmaybe.....since naruto's loved maya for so long he could also ask her to marry him..... step it up a notch.... | #34 Jul 21st 2008, 7:13pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless Darknessnot sure it's going to work for this. Maya's cousin is in Konoha also | #35 Jul 21st 2008, 7:14pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilight....ok....um.....i guess he could confess his feelings and ask her to travel with him.... then she could say that she just cant leave her cousin behind.... and then he could say that hed bring her cousin along as well *shrugs* | #36 Jul 21st 2008, 7:16pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessNaruto asked Aya the night before....She said no....And I could add him confessing his feelings but I think I'm going to need more | #37 Jul 21st 2008, 7:18pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilightwell you can have maya ask instead if she decides to go.... | #38 Jul 21st 2008, 7:19pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMaya loves her boyfriend so I don't think she should go | #39 Jul 21st 2008, 7:20pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilightk then naruto should get rejected XD | #40 Jul 21st 2008, 7:22pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessHe is but I need him to say something that makes her consider it | #41 Jul 21st 2008, 7:23pm | |
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Elf Hime of the Twilighthm...... well he could confess then she rejects him then she starts to think twice taking into account thats hes been there for her ever since they were little.... im gonna go to bed....or im gonna pass out... see ya | #42 Jul 21st 2008, 7:26pm | |
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BiteMeasHidansGal*sigh* | #43 Jul 21st 2008, 9:01pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessNaruto's death part 1 A young man leaned against a tree with his eyes closed. He is wearing a black shirt with a gold dragon on it and a black pair of pants. He has a katana at his side as though he was a samurai. His long spiky blond hair tied in a ponytail swayed in the wind as he waited for the man who he knew would come. As if on cue a man who looked to be no older twenty walked into the clearing. "Waiting long Naruto?" The man asked. The young man identified as Naruto opened his eyes. His blue irises and slitted pupilsstared ahead at the man taking in his appearance. The young man wore a simple black cloak covering his shirt. He wore black pants as well and black shoes. A katana could be seen on his waist as well signifying him as a samurai or swordsmen. His hair was long and looked to be like silk. It was tied in a pony tail like Naruto's. His eyes were dark green giving a errie glow as he smirked at Naruto. "No really...now who exactly are you?" He asked. "Oh quiet simply...I'm a god....Sasunoo to be exact" He said. "Sasunoo...Th god of the sea and storms? Then why are you here?" He asked. "Is that really a question you have to ask?" He asked drawing his blade. "I...I guess not." Naruto replied leaning off the tree. He also drew his katana and got into his stance. "Lets see what you got...... ." Sasunoo said before disappearing. Naruto turned to his right quickly and blocked the an overhead strike. "Tsukuyomi" Sasunoo whispered before disappearing again. | #44 Jul 22nd 2008, 6:24am | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessThe death of Naruto part 2 Naruto looked around trying to get Sasunoo's next move with his ryuugan. "It won't work on me." He heard from behind him. Naruto quickly turned swinging his blade only too miss and before punched right in the middle of his chest. NAruto felt his sternum crack as he was forced back was tremendous force. He hit a tree breaking through the truck. He recovered as the tree fell down and flipped in air. He landed on the next tree as his back ached. He slid down the tree before making hand seals. "Katon: Karyuu no jutsu" He said before exhaling blowing out a stream of fire that shifted into the form of a fire dragon. The fire dragon rushed toward Sasunoo setting a blaze anything too close to it. Sasunoo shook his head as he raised his katana upward. the wind gathered around his blade before he swung it down. A vertical arc of wind came from the sword and headed toward the fire slicing it in half. The fire headed for the source of the fire and cut Naruto in half. Blood flew into the sky before he disappeared in smoke. 'I have to go strike for the kill.' Naruto thought as he looked at the sun set. '....No don't think about them. I'm completely alone.' He thought. 'I have always been alone.' Naruto thought. He placed the flat side of the blade against his forehead and closed his eyes. After a few second he opened his normal blue eyes and jumped from his hiding stop towards Sasunoo who hasn't even moved from his spot. | #45 Jul 22nd 2008, 6:39am | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessThe death of Naruto part 3 Naruto swung his blade down and Susanoo only raised his katana to block it without looking at Naruto. Naruto growled as his pushed himself back from the katana. Sasunoo looked at Naruto as he landed and with a smirk charged at him. Naruto did the same and the moment the was in blades length of each other the swung their katana. The blades clashed sending spark out before the drew back and swung their blades again. Both of their blades disappeared in a blurr, only thing to be seen is the sparks that flew from the blades as they clashed. The blades clashed one more this time one katana was send sailing in the air. Naruto blinked before leaning back dodging an extra swipe. He did a back flip a couple of times before landing in a crouch. He placed his hand in front of him and a swirling ball of chakra appeared in his hand. Lightning sparked from the orb as wind and fire also appeared around it. Naruto stood up and quickly grabbed his blade. He placed the spiraling orb on the hilt and watched as it traveled to the blade. The fire, wind and lightning circled the blade as Naruto narrowed his eyes as he got ready to attack | #46 Jul 22nd 2008, 7:28am | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMissing ninja Naruto part 5 "Yes you can Maya." Naruto said stepping closer to her. "You have always decided to be by my side...when Shin left you stayed with me....why is now any different?" He asked as she looked downward before closing her eyes. "It is....Your talking about..." Maya started before looking up and noticing Naruto was a few inches from her. "Maya....I want....no I need you with me...I want to see you smile, laugh, I want to be the one who cheer you up when your down. I want to be the one who can make you happy when your angry." Naruto said. Maya looked into his blue eyes and started to shake as she looked into his warm gaze. "N-Naruto please do...." Maya started. "I love you, I always have." He said before leaning down and capturing her lips with his own | #47 Jul 22nd 2008, 2:40pm . Edited Nov 23rd 2008, 4:58pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless DarknessMissing ninja Naruto part 6 Tears swelled up in her eyes as the flowed down her face. After a brief moment Naruto leaned back breaking the kiss. "Please Maya." He said lifting his right hand up and wiping her the tears from her face. "Come with me." He whispered. "N-Naruto, I-I..." Maya started with a sob. "Please Maya....All I need is you." Naruto whispered with a soft and loving tone. "N-Naruto....I Can't. Aya is here...and so is Tamotsu. I love him I can't just leave." Maya said. Naruto looked at her before moving back. She stared at him as he smiled sadly. Maya said stepping towards him. Naruto sighed before as he looked into her eyes. Maya watched him closely as he turned around and moved walked to his sword. "Hn....I always seen to wind up alone in the end....but I guess it's fine." He grabs his buster sword and starts to draw it. "You don't have to be alone. I can make everything better. I can make it so you will never be alone again. Just come back with me." Maya pleaded stepping forward. Kaze glanced at her before looking at his blade. "Odd....I want to believe you....it must be the relationship we have made. We must truly have a strong bond." Naruto said completely drawing his buster sword. "Then believe in our bond. Just come back with me please." Maya pleaded. | #48 Jul 22nd 2008, 4:03pm . Edited Nov 23rd 2008, 5:08pm | |
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Susanoo's Endless Darkness.. | #49 Jul 22nd 2008, 4:12pm | |
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Nostalgia For InfinityNaruto x 9 tail's Please. | #50 Jul 22nd 2008, 4:15pm | |
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