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Author Post LoveShinobi4eva Topic: Along the Path yup its my story about Soujiro and my own made up character ^^ lol #1 Jan 24th 2007, 4:55pm Aurorawhisperwind Mmm... I just read your fic. Well, firstly I must say that the situation is not unimaginable. But Soujiro- He is one of the most difficult characters ever, I really don't see him getting so intimate with someone he just met. You could have introduced Chi's genkiness affecting him gradually... also a little work on the spelling and grammer. But keep going! Would like to see more. #2 Feb 19th 2007, 12:11am

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