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We've decided to separate out the personal review requests from the recommendations for our archive, since it's hard to keep track of what's what in our current topic, and respitechristopher made an excellent point: if you've just posted a story, you're NOT immediately going to get 20 reviews in your inbox - It takes time! So of course new stories are under-reviewed. If you want some attention for them, mention them here please!!

(Of course, if they're appropriate to our purposes we'll archive them anyway, but please help keep life easy for us!)

Cuba, Lexie, Sadie & the staff

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#1 Sep 01st 2008, 6:50am . Edited Sep 01st 2008, 8:11pm
Shuna

Title: Stella Antrum

Lenght: For now, 1 chapter, but it will be a multi chapter fic.

How long has it been posted?: Since 27 August (I know, not long, but I hope to get some attention around it)

How many reviews does it have?: 1 (Very quick, to be my stories)

Characters: Peter Pettigrew and Harry Potter.

Summary: Sequel to Stars, hide your fires. Peter's drug abuse has sirously damaged his mind, and magic. He lives in the now, the dullness of the pills and the insanity and pain which he endures without them. When Harry Potter is kidnapped, he subconcisely attacks the Dark Lord, and miss. Death Eaters try to defend their Lord, and everyone is under crossfire. Two manage to sneak off without being noticed, more precisely Peter and Harry. Both being headhunted, seek the safety of the holy place, Stella Antrum.

Link: Stella_Antrum

#2 Sep 01st 2008, 9:15am
Wotcher-Tonks

Title: Violent Antipathies

Length: Right now, it has one chapter but will be projected novel-length.

How long has it been posted? : August 24th 08

How many reviews does it have?: 1

Characters: In first chapter- Hermione Granger, Harry, and McGonagall In the second chapter....well, you and Hermione will see...

Summary: It is shortly after Ron has gotten together with Lav-Lav, and Hermione feels utterly alone. Sure, there's Harry, but he has Quidditch and a budding infatuation with Ginny, so she busies herself with her schoolwork. McGonagall has a pupil who is falling very behind when he normally is the number two student (after Hermione). Sure, he could just be skiving off, but McGonagall suspects it's something much more...and asks Hermione to tutor him. The catch? The student is none other than everybody's favorite Slytherin... Will Hermione be able to teach him anything? Why is he falling behind? And will Ron and Lavender ever stop snogging?

Link: Violent Antipathies

#3 Sep 01st 2008, 10:54am
WuHaoNi

Title: His Greatest Mistake

Length/Chapters: 2

How long has it been posted?: Updated: 6-15-08 - Published: 4-26-08

How many reviews does it have?: 18

Characters/pairings: Lily, James, Remus, Sirius, Peter, Tonks, Alice, Frank Pairings: James/Lily, Remus/Tonks

Summary: AU. Voldemort’s ascent to power begins in 1981 instead of 1971. There is no longer a Chosen One. Who will save the Wizarding World? Takes place in 1991. 4 friends. 3 couples. 2 survivors. 1 bond. Never underestimate the power of love.

Link: here

If people review my story, I will definitely review yours. ^_^

#4 Sep 01st 2008, 5:07pm
L'amoureuse

Title: Hard To Find

Length/Chapters: 4/ 12,000 or so words ;)

How long has it been posted?: Started the 26th of August, last updated the 28th of August.

How many reviews does it have?: 8

Characters/pairings: Lily/James, Arabella/?, Remus/?, Sirius/?.

Summary: Lily Evans and Arabella Figg are known as beautiful and brilliant loners- girls who keep to themselves. James Potter and his friends are the Marauders and the Golden Boys of Hogwarts. When they come together, they chafe and fight and argue. How did they ever produce the love that they did? Here's how. Slightly AU.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4499788/1/Hard_To_Find -- can't figure out how to link it!

Edit: Linked!

#5 Sep 01st 2008, 6:23pm . Edited by The Reviews Lounge, Sep 01st 2008, 7:02pm
TheWordFountain

To link you go to copy the text you want to put the link on, and at the top tool bar the small chain next to the "styles" will be clickable. Click it and fill out the popup and then click the "Insert" button on the left. Simple as that!

#6 Sep 01st 2008, 6:31pm
starcrossedvoyager

SCV haz a question for Queen Ice Cubes, Ruler of the RL.

When a story has enough reviews, where do we post the fact that it's ready to graduate and that either you or the person who added the story to the archive needs to remove it?

#7 Sep 02nd 2008, 3:05pm
Cuban Sombrero Gal

Well, usually staff members just do a check of the archive every few weeks, but if you want... just post it in the Archive Awareness topic, I guess.

#8 Sep 02nd 2008, 11:30pm
Sara Winters

Title: Haunted

Length/Chapters: 2,179

How long has it been posted?: Since July 4th.

How many reviews does it have?: 7

Characters/pairings: Snape, Lily (sort of) and Harry. Technically, there are no pairings, but there's some sort of interaction between Snape and Lily.

Summary: Snape attempts to come to grips with why he is always uncomfortable around Harry. Unofficial description: It is set during Harry's third year and rated M, but not obscene (at least to me). This story is my attempt at getting inside Snape's head, taking into account what Harry learned about his feelings towards Lily at the end of the last book.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4371545/1/Haunted

#9 Sep 03rd 2008, 10:53am
TDI Ezekiel

Title: Lavender's Lycanthropy

Length/Chapters: Nine chapters so far

How long has it been posted?: since April 2008

How many reviews does it have?: 40

Characters/pairings: Lavender Brown

Summary: After the battle of hogwarts Lavender disappears, for 19 years, but returns when Rose weasley goes to hogwarts

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4215350/1/Lavenders_Lycanthropy

#10 Sep 03rd 2008, 11:43am
Rosette's-Chains

Title: Cold Stone Walls

Length: Three Chapters

How long has it been posted: 7-29-08

How many reviews does it have: 4

Characters/Pairings: Draco Malfoy & Hermione Granger.

Summary: What would Harry say? More importantly, what would Ron say? But as memories from last night became increasingly vivid she got chills…. Hermione awakes one morning questioning whether it was real.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4431809/1/Cold_Stone_Walls

#11 Sep 04th 2008, 5:26pm
Moge-

Title: The Wrong Shade Of Chocolate

Length/Chapters: Oneshot

How long has it been posted?: Two Days

How many reviews does it have?: 2

Characters/pairings: Lee Jordan/Ginny Weasley and Lee Jordan/Padma Patil

Summary: Lee looked in many places for the right shade of chocolate in their eyes. turns out it was right in front of him the whole time. ~ Written for the First Love challenge and the Random Characters challenge - both on HPFC

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4518706/1/The_Wrong_Shade_Of_Chocolate

#12 Sep 05th 2008, 4:13pm
Bad Mum

Since alerts seem to be down, I'm going to shamelessly self-promote here:

Title: What You Want To Do

Length/Chapters: Oneshot

How long has it been posted?: Five minutes

Characters/pairings: Charlie and the twins

Summary: “The thing to do,” Gideon proclaimed, “Is to decide what you want to do, and just do it.” Charlie and the twins take the lesson to heart. For Starkiller's birthday.

Link: What_You_Want_To_Do

#13 Sep 06th 2008, 3:23pm
daisyham8

I'm completely new to forums so I'm not sure if this will work... ehhhh... This seemed like the most respectable forum, so I decided to go for it.

Title: Difficult Circumstances

Length/Chapters: Prologue + 3

How long has it been posted?: Since July

How many reviews does it have?: Only 7 :(

Characters/pairings: Draco Malfoy/Charlie Weasley

Summary: It's a werewolf!Draco fic. He's been infected with lycanthropy, and ends up killing someone, everyone knows about it. So his parents send him away to Romania because of the different benefits etc... and he ends up living with Charlie Weasley, they fall in love. Drama, h/c, and I attempted some humor.

I'm looking at the screen, and it sounds really implausible and cheesy. I know it does. But the story nagged away in my brain until I decide to go for it, and I wanted to make it as believable and real as possible, and I think I did an OK job of it. Shameless self-promotion, yes.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4385904/1/Difficult_Circumstances

#14 Sep 06th 2008, 8:26pm
Hubacha

Title: Love, Hate and Revenge

Length/Chapters: 10 chapters, about 25000 words.

How long has it been posted?: Since last month.

How many reviews does it have?: 19, and they're all lovely but lack constructive critisism or any specific review-ness.

Characters/pairings: James/Lily, Sirius/OC, Remus/OC

Summary: Dumbledore's inexplicably made James head boy, and Lily's not happy. But she's not the only one with love troubles. Things might not end happily for everyone, but what you can expect this year is a lot of love, hate and revenge.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4498797/1/Love_Hate_and_Revenge

I originally wrote it a year ago, so the writing as good as my more recent fic, but I like the story and I'm fond of it anyway. Please don't be put off by the OCs, I tried my best to make them interesting characters, and neither of them are anything like me I promise!

#15 Sep 07th 2008, 4:17am
xoxcrescentmoonxox

Title: That Magical Moment

Length/Chapters: 4 chapters (about to be 5), 3,748 words

How long has it been posted?: since 8-20-08

How many reviews does it have?: 28

Characters/pairings: Ron/Hermione

Summary: It's that magical moment when Ron and Hermione finally get together. Travel down to the Chamber of Secrets with them, and learn what took place before the Battle of Hogwarts

#16 Sep 07th 2008, 7:49am
WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot

Title: Living in Hell

Length/Chapters: 5 parts/6,361 words (in progress)

How Long has it been posted: 08-23-2008

Reviews: 27

Characters/Pairings: drabbles of Dumbledore's Army, various characters--Neville L., Ginny W., Hannah A., Parvati P., Lavender B., Seamus F., Michael C., Terry B., Anthony G. . . .

Summary: A drabble series about the members of Dumbledore's Army and living through the Carrows and Snape. For Kore-Of-Myth's "Shuffle" challenge for the Harry Potter Fanfiction Challenge Forum.

#17 Sep 07th 2008, 10:20am
Islander2

Cool, let me totally take advantage of this! :D Let me add that the genre is humor.

Title: Dumbledore, Please Explain Your Twisted Logic!

Length/Chapters: 101,000 words, 17 chapters (still a WIP)

How long has it been posted?: Jan 19, 2008

How many reviews does it have?: 60

Characters/pairings: Dumbledore, Harry/Ginny, Harry/Luna, Hermione/Goyle, Draco/Pansy, Goyle, Draco/Trelawney

Summary: Dumbledore is putting on a play about the four Hogwarts Founders. Does anyone get the parts they want? Of course not! Mayhem ensues, complete with comedy, romance, insanity, tragedy, Slut!Draco, Harry/Ginny spats, Macho!Ron with a twist, Smart!Goyle, and some very irate parents. Oh, and some nude wrestling, too. Cue the curtain! Slightly AU

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4020847/1/Dumbledore_Please_Explain_Your_Twisted_Logic

#18 Sep 07th 2008, 10:33am
respitechristopher

Alerts are working just fine, but I'm an attention two asterisks, so hey...

There's More Mercury, Minions!

Title: The Mercury Chronicles: Angelica

Length/Chapters: ~10k / 4 itty-bitty chapters.

How long has it been posted?: Chapter four is hot off the laptop!

How many reviews does it have?: 28 lonely little reviews. *insert sad-face here*

Characters/pairings: Albus/OC (that would be the title character). Scorpius/Rose.

Summary: Chapter 4: It's Summer, and that means it's The Harry Potter Day Ball! Teen Witch Monthly has your exclusive access to the Mercurial Trio. Interviews with Rose and Scorpius. Pictures of their grand entrance. And oh, don't Albus and Angelica make a cute couple? -- what *is* going on with them, anyway? Intrepid reporter Magda Swinburne brings you there for all the juicy goodness!

Link: http://www.twm.mgc_uk/potterball2020

#19 Sep 09th 2008, 8:06pm
Wotcher-Tonks

Title: Nothing

Length/Chapters: about 700 words/ one shot

How long has it been posted? : since Sept. 8

Characters/Pairings: onesided Sirius/Lily.

Summary: Her name echoed in his mind, expanded in his soul, filled the room and grew until the universe was nothing but the sound of her name and its dismal echo. Sirius/Lily for the Random Characters Challenge.

Link: Nothing

#20 Sep 10th 2008, 3:49pm
Bad Mum

"Nothing" is definitely worth a look. (Somehow that sentence sounds very odd!)

I added it to the archive.

#21 Sep 10th 2008, 4:17pm
Wotcher-Tonks

wow! thanks, Katy!!! :D

#22 Sep 10th 2008, 4:23pm
juicyfruits

Title: 16 Going on 25

Length/Chapters: 1 Chapter, but it's going to be a multi-chapter fiction.

How long has it been posted?: One day! :)

How many reviews does it have?: 4 Reviews.

Characters/pairings: Draco/Hermione

Summary: Hermione wakes up to find that she has no memory of the past nine years- and she's twenty five and somehow married to Draco Malfoy himself. Humorous romance fic.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4534831/1/16_Going_on_25

Do check it out- I've been writing fanfiction for a while but it's my first time posting on Fanfiction.net as ME. :)

#23 Sep 13th 2008, 1:10pm
Dahtre-Writer

Title: Rakumata Rising

Length/Chapters: +17,000 words, 6 Chapters.

How long has it been posted?: A few days.

How many reviews does it have?: 2

Characters/pairings: I don’t use the original Characters very much, since the events of the book are based in Egypt.

Summary: In this fic, I have taken what JKR made, and gave it my own twist. There is a new Prophecy, and this one is more cryptic the last. In Ancient Egypt, there were two brothers who had never met. One was Rakumata, the youngest. He was a deeply Dark Wizard who wanted nothing but power, and had it, too! Well, Zakar, his older brother, who only three people knew about, came back to Egypt after about two centuries of Rakumata’s reign of terror. They had two Duels. Zakar was testing his little brother in the first, but he dominated him the second and it was the second that restored three thousand years of peace to the Land of the Nile. Now, three thousand years later, it is almost the anniversary of the Banishment Zakar performed, and at the precise moment it has been three thousand years, both of the two Dahtre brothers will awaken. This time, however, Zakar can’t stop Rakumata. Rakumata, for some reason, didn’t completely sleep during his Banishment. His mind remained awake, thinking. The more he thought the smarter and more powerful he became.

It is now up to Queen Alana Dahtre to ready her son, Imhosepto XXXXXXVIII to face Rakumata in a battle that will decide the fate of the throne, which Rakumata, legally, still holds, now that he is back. However, Imhosepto is only 11 years old, and nowhere near ready to face the Greatest Dark Wizard of all time. Throughout the series, Imhosepto will become stronger and stronger, and by the last book, will be ready to face his ancestral Uncle, Rakumata Dahtre. Also, during their slumber, Rakumata and Zakar have become Egyptian Demigods and are both legends that helped shaped Wizarding Egypt. The group the Prophecy calls the ‘TriForce’ will, of course, be Imhosepto, Virginya, and her cousin Draco.

Link: Rakumata Rising

#24 Sep 14th 2008, 7:17am
Pinky Green

Title: Better Than a Dream

Length/Chapters: 2490 words, oneshot.

How long has it been posted?: Just now

How many reviews does it have?: 0

Characters/pairings: Luna/Neville and a bit of Ron/Hermione

Summary: “Luna…I’d like to ask you something…” “Anything, Neville,” Luna said. “Well…do…do you want to grab something to eat?” Neville tries to pluck all his courage to ask Luna to the New Year's Ball. What happens next? Neville/Luna oneshot.

Link: Better Than a Dream

#25 Sep 14th 2008, 11:20am
Dramione Forever

Pinky's Oneshot is Great. I Loved It.

My Valentine's Challenge Dramione Fic for the Review Lounge is finally up :) .

Title: For Her Protection

Length/Chapters: 3177 words, Oneshot

How Long has it been posted?: Just now

Characters/Pairings: Draco/Hermione

Summary: Hermione finds out Draco is acting weird one day and she is determined to find out why. Written for the Valentine's Challenge for the Review Lounge. Oneshot.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4538027/1/For_Her_Protection

#26 Sep 14th 2008, 1:35pm . Edited Sep 14th 2008, 1:36pm
Violin Ghost

Title: The Restaurant

Length/Chapters: Oneshot

How long has it been posted?: 3 days?

How many reviews does it have?: 2. Sob.

Characters/pairings: The Golden Trio, with the slightest whiff of Ron/Hermione

Summary: On the run, the trio steal a moment of forbidden dreaming, and Harry is reminded of the things they're fighting for. Oneshot, inspired by the song Santa Fe from Rent.

Link: The Restaurant.

Thank you so much!

#27 Sep 16th 2008, 3:36am
Bad Mum

The_Restaurant is great. I've added it to the archive.

#28 Sep 16th 2008, 8:34am
KaryInTheSky

Just read it! *points above*, and I loved it.

#29 Sep 16th 2008, 9:46am
hondagirl

Thirding it. :)

#30 Sep 16th 2008, 10:15am
Sara Winters

Is this only for new stories? Because I wholeheartedly believe in long-term pimpage.

Title: Free Will and Fate

Length/Chapters: not quite 154,000 words/46 chapters

How long has it been posted?: Since February - completed in August

How many reviews does it have?: 232

Characters/pairings: Harry, Hermione, McGonagall, Dumbledore, Snape, Bellatrix, Lily, assorted students and others

Summary: (ignoring the posted summary) Harry comes into contact with a time turner and uses it to change the most significant part of his past. What results send him straight into a situation he can barely wrap his mind around - new associations, unknown threats and a mystery that gets more complicated every day. For those who love suspense.

Link: Free Will and Fate

Oh, but there's nothing like a sequel to make things better...

Title: Marked

Length/Chapters: (so far) 6 chapters/not quite 42,000 words (including the prologue/monster summary of the first story)

How long has it been posted?: since August

How many reviews does it have?: 29

Characters/pairings: Neville, Lavender, Harry, Ron, Hermione, Lily, Draco, Dumbledore, Sirius, McGonagall, the Hogwarts student body and others

Summary: Harry and Neville share the harsh reality of being the Boy Who Lived, Hogwarts politics and experience the uncertainty of relationships in the face of pending death.

Link: Marked

#31 Sep 17th 2008, 12:56am . Edited Sep 17th 2008, 1:00am
respitechristopher

Link: Free Will and Fate

Link: Marked

These two stories simply cannot be recommended highly enough. You're busy, school's started, and you deserve a break. Read (and review) some quality fanfiction.

#32 Sep 17th 2008, 7:56am
Perspicacity

Title: The Game Is Afoot

Length/Chapters: Longish oneshot (~20k words, complete).

How long has it been posted?: A few minutes

How many reviews does it have?: 0

Characters/pairings: Starts Harry/Ginny. Hints of Harry/Daphne throughout. I won't spoil the ending.

Summary: The War is over. Harry and Ginny plan a life together, then Harry disappears without a trace. Eight years later, Ginny wants answers. And where does Daphne fit in? A Harry/Ginny/Daphne anti-romance.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4543379/1/The_Game_Is_Afoot

Additional notes: Rated M. (Nothing explicit, but lots of adult themes). The piece started as a romantic comedy, then got an injection of gritty realism and turned into something else entirely. WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot is to be commended for doing an excellent job of beta-reading of the piece; if I ever have another child, I'm naming her WTF and hoping she can punctuate.

Thanks to those who click through. :)

#33 Sep 17th 2008, 12:46pm
WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot

WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot is to be commended for doing an excellent job of beta-reading of the piece; if I ever have another child, I'm naming her WTF and hoping she can punctuate.

*blushes* Thanks! Good to know all those years of English training came in handy. And I'll pay you good money if you do ever have another child and name them WTF. Because that would be mighty brilliant.

Anyways, I'm seconding Perspicacity's story, having very good knowledge of it. It's really fantastic writing, twisty, turny, and if you're one like me and don't go for Happy-Sunshine-Rainbow stories, it'll be right up your alley. He's got a great way with characterizations and dialogue, throwing in bits of humor and lovely character moments too.

Also, read all of Sara Winter's Free Will and Fate: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108875/1/Free_Will_and_Fate and her sequel (which I haven't gotten to yet, as I'm still slowly working on her first story) Marked: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4480625/1/Marked. She's actually made me believe that Harry and Hermione can work together.

#34 Sep 17th 2008, 1:33pm
Cymberline

Title: May We Look Ever Forward

Length/Chapters: 4, at the moment. But i have more written.

How long has it been posted?: about a week? a bit more maybe?

How many reviews does it have?: 17

Characters/pairings: AP/OC, RW/SM/LP, eventual LP/SM and RW/OC

Summary: Well, i changed the summary. The original was:

For Albus Potter, life at Hogwarts was always overshadowed not only by his father’s reputation, but by his brothers too. In his 7th year, with James gone, it is finally Al’s time to shine. Lost in a world of NEWTS, romance and the old prejudices and problems of the Hogwarts student body, Al is finally beginning to understand what it means to be a Potter.

But it's better as:

Al Potter's 7th year at Hogwarts was going to give him much more trouble than he ever bargined for. With dark and troubled times ahead, old threats looming and NEWTS on the horizon, things are really not looking up.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4529589/1/May_We_Look_Ever_Forward

cheers guys :) much appriciated. This thread is a very good idea.

#35 Sep 17th 2008, 10:05pm
xoxcrescentmoonxox

Title: Roses Are Red, Roses Are Blue

Length/Chapters: Oneshot

How long has it been posted?: Yesterday

How many reviews does it have?: Three

Characters/pairings: Lily is the main character; the main pairing is L/J, but there's various pairings, friendship and unrequited, with Severus, Peter, Sirius, Remus, Alice, and Petunia.

Summary: A red rose for Lily. A lavender rose for Lily. A black rose for Lily. Those, and so many more. Sometimes love was won, other times it was lost. There's always regrets, always heartache, but occasionally, something turns out perfect.

#36 Sep 18th 2008, 12:35pm
Bad Mum

Seconding the recommendation for crescentmoon's story. I added it to the archive.

#37 Sep 18th 2008, 2:44pm
Bad Mum

Title: Changes

Length: Oneshot, approx 600 words

How long has it been posted: Less than an hour

Now many reviews does it have? Four

Characters: Ginny and Draco. Not a pairing, and barely even friendship!

Summary: Ginny Weasley goes to buy croissants and coffee, and encounters an old adversary. "Things have changed, haven't they?"

This is diferent from my normal stuff, and is definitely a bit of an experiment. I'd like to know what you think!

#38 Sep 18th 2008, 4:22pm . Edited Sep 18th 2008, 4:24pm
WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot

Seconding Katy's piece. It's really good . . . and if you like Draco, I think it's definitely a piece that shows him in a different light.

Um, well, since I'm here--any Michael Corner fans?

*crickets chirping*

Okay, well, if there are any Michael C. or Daphne G. fans, I write them together, and I'm working on a little series about them.

Title: Lessons

Length: 627/will be 13 chapters each less than 1500 words (for the LJ community HP Rare Pairs Shorts)

How long has it been posted: I started posting it on LJ in August. It's been here on FFN since yesterday (only part one)

How many reviews does it have: three

Summary: Set in their sixth year--Michael Corner learns to love unconditionally and Daphne Greengrass learns to trust.

I do have my canon-ish Daphne Greengrass and the _____ Year From Hell series, which is a canon/AU series. Michael Corner and Daphne get together in that series as well. In Lessons, I'm writing it more like Daphne in canon--in this work, she has a sister (Astoria Greengrass) and a family and was never a part of Dumbledore's Army and was never friends with Harry, Ron, and Hermione.

#39 Sep 18th 2008, 4:44pm
Wotcher-Tonks

Title: Many Facets

Length: 500-something/will be one-hundred chapters

How long has it been posted:since August 18th

How many reviews does it have: 5

Summary: Written for Kore's 100 pairing challenge- I claimed all tables, so it will be 100 chapters. So far, I have Lee/Ginny and Hermione/Bellatrix.

#40 Sep 18th 2008, 6:34pm . Edited Sep 18th 2008, 6:35pm
FirstYear

I would like to request a "read", a review if it suits

Title: Death of a Generation

Length: One shot/ tad over 8200 words

Posted: July 26/08

Review: 6

Link: http://fanfiction.net/s/4425681/1/The_Death_of_a_Generation

Summary: Severus Snape meets with a mother of a fallen Death Eater who asks him a question that haunts him. "Who will bury you?"

#41 Sep 18th 2008, 7:18pm . Edited Sep 19th 2008, 11:06am
Alex the Anachronistic

Title: Flippant Affections

Length: 1,385 wds. Just a little one-shot.

How long has it been posted: Since 9/16/08

How many reviews does it have: 1

Summary: Sinistra points her nose down from the stars to see Argus Filch, scrubber of toilets. She freaks. He cries. Mrs. Norris meows. Then, just as suddenly as their relationship ends, he finds a new love. Also cameo appearances by Snape, Umbridge, Irma Pince.

#42 Sep 20th 2008, 8:28am
violet-phoenix-rose

Title: Pain, Sweet Pain

Length/Chapters: short one-shot

How long has it been posted?: Since 8/14/08

How many reviews does it have?: 0

Characters/pairings: Bellatrix

Summary: Bellatrix reflects on how she has defied every expectation. Slightly humanized but not too much.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4473419/1/Pain_Sweet_Pain

#43 Sep 24th 2008, 6:40am . Edited by The Reviews Lounge, Sep 24th 2008, 10:50am
xCailinNollaigx

Title: Matters Of The Heart

Length/Chapters: 3 Chapters(In-progress) , Words-9101

How long has it been posted?: 6/9/08...(6th of September 2008. Because I think Americans do it backwards to Irish..??)

How many reviews does it have?: 7

Characters/pairings: Based around Narcissa. Lucius/Narcissa is there, but it might not end between them. There is also slight Narcissa/Snape...

Summary: She wasn't going to go crawling back to him. Beg him to return, plead for him to rethink. Because she wasn't that person. She had more dignity, and a lot more admirers. Just because your middle-aged doesn't mean you can't fall in love again,does it?

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4520955/1/Matters_Of_The_Heart

Check it out in anyways! My reviews , as much as I really really appreciate them, are from the same two people. Anyway, have a look!lol

x Dramione4Lyf x

#44 Sep 24th 2008, 11:59am
JBean210

Title: Being Gilderoy Lockhart

Length/Chapters: 4 to date, about 28,000 words

How long has it been posted?: Since 8/25/2008

How many reviews does it have?: 3 to date

Characters/pairings: Gilderoy Lockhart, HRH, Hogwarts staff, OCs / none

Summary: Under the challenge "Write yourself as Gilderoy Lockhart," I go to sleep one night and wake up the next morning, only to find myself as Gilderoy Lockhart! I know no magic, have no idea who's making me breakfast, and Dumbledore is due at my door any moment

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4499794/1/Being_Gilderoy_Lockhart

#45 Sep 24th 2008, 1:51pm
JBean210

Title: Harry Potter and the Ultimate Showdown

Length/Chapters: 2 to date, about 8900 words

How long has it been posted?: Since 9/14/2008

How many reviews does it have?: 1, so far

Characters/pairings: HRH and various OC’s / none

Summary: A crossover between Harry Potter and the Ultimate Showdown of Ultimate Destiny. Only one will survive, I wonder who it will be? Chapter Two features HRH vs. Captain Kirk, Spock and McCoy, as well as Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Willow and Angel.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4538449/1/Harry_Potter_and_the_Ultimate_Showdown

#46 Sep 24th 2008, 1:53pm
JBean210

Title: Harry Potter and the Vault of Mystery

Length/Chapters: 2 to date, about 15,200 words

How long has it been posted?: Since 9/13/2008

How many reviews does it have?: 0 (sob)

Characters/pairings: HRH, canon characters plus 2 OC’s / ?

Summary: An AU 7th year story. HRH plan to find Horcruxes, but the quest is suddenly ended when Neville somehow kills Voldemort (maybe)! They return to Hogwarts, where Ron becomes obsessed with opening the Vault of Mystery, an artifact found deep inside Gringotts Bank.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4535243/1/Harry_Potter_and_the_Vault_of_Mystery

#47 Sep 24th 2008, 1:54pm
xxjonibaby

Title: Riddle Child

Length/Chapters: 1 ch/2631 words

How long has it been posted?: April 19th

How many reviews does it have?: 0 :(

Characters/pairings: OC, Snape, Dumbledore Harry/OC

Summary: Voldemort's daughter winds up being adopted by Severus Snape. As she gets older and attends Hogwarts, how will they keep Victoria Snape's parentage secret?

Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/4207036/1/Riddle_Child

I'm almost finished with chapter 2 so I'm hoping this story gets more attention..

#48 Sep 24th 2008, 3:26pm . Edited Sep 24th 2008, 3:28pm
Princess Gillybean

Title: The Plight of The Pygmy Puffs

Length/Chapters: four chapter/about 4500 words

How long has it been posted?: since 1/9/08 (Semptember 1st for the Americans here)

How many reviews does it have?: 18

Characters/pairings: Lily Potter and Hugo Weasley (no actual pairings yet)

Summary: Meet Hugo and Lily, youngest of the Potter/Weasley clan and ready to take on the world one step at a time. (not the best summary, I know but I suck at them)

Link: The Plight of The Pygmy Puffs

#49 Sep 25th 2008, 9:36am
respitechristopher

Title: The Plight of The Pygmy Puffs

Go read it. It's adoreable, and very well written.

#50 Sep 25th 2008, 9:59am


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