Sil, I think you should make a topic for your story so we can discuss it there and give you whatever help you want. I have no problem with starting to talk about a story here, but I think we've taken enough space and should move onto a separate thread for now.

I will tomorrow, thanks Final. Don't worry I won't Grumpy.

I have a new fic out, called Seals, Illusions and Fans. I'd like some opinions on it, so if anybodys willing to read it, it would be greatly appreciated.

Sleepy time music? Now I feel like a sad snowflake too.

Hey, if Inner Sakura is just an entity created by Sakura to deal with her insecurities, then how did it manage to force Ino out of her Shintenshin during the prelims?

I don't think that was Inner Sakura, I don't remember seeing "Inner Sakura" written on the images head. I think that was just Sakura period.

Your memory could just be faulty, because I also think it was Inner Sakura.

It was inner Sakura. Afterword Ino was all like "Whoa how does she have two souls!" and Kakashi gave some crazy explanation of her fighting spirit being uber strong or something in his head.

Inner Sakura always made an appearance when Sakura was at odds with it. So when Sakura was like "Naruto! That's disrespectful!" her inner had to show up and be like "Cha! Serves him right!"

Sakura doesn't have two souls. Her inner-self is the more driven and outspoken part of Sakura's personality that is hidden, which catchs Ino off-guard and forces her out because Sakura hides this side of herself. If she had been expecting to find that, Ino wouldn't have been forced out.

I never said she had two souls. :P I said that was Ino's assumption, and Kakashi called it her fighting spirit.

Actually I should reword that. Kakashi attributed Sakura's success in fighting off Ino's ability to Sakura's strong fighting spirit and Ino's weakened state. Ino called Inner Sakura a second soul.

Edit(because one-liner double posting is bad enough): You realize I'm not disagreeing with you, right?

I'm finally back from not having any Internet! :] I missed you all! :O

Nice to have you back,

Scarlet is back! (HUG!)

Thank you, thank you. (HUG)

I missed you guys! :]

http://www.narutospot.net/naruto-shippuden/naruto-shippuden-episode-136/

The Itachi/Sasuke fight is finally out in the anime and it is epic.

I know this is really random, but I have to say this, why doesn't anyone try to make any Naruto crossovers involving anything other then anime? My point is there's about a billion crossovers out there involving Naruto with things like Inuyasha but never anything from a live action film or American books. Look I'll give you an example of what I would consider to be the type of crossover that I'm talking about, ( I would be up for co-authoring this story with some one if they'd want to make it) what if Naruto was raised by Billy Jack the main character from the series of films of the same name, imagine what would happen with a Naruto who was influenced by Billy Jack's views. One he probably wouldn't like the hokage and fire lord system of government or the fact that when you think about it Konohoa isn't really run by the people so much as it is by the military (shinobi) and the rich/aristocrats (council/clan heads). Not to mention how awesome it would be to see Billy Jack tell Danzo to back off at gun point (ninjas or not I highly doubt they could dodge a bullet) I pretty much see the scenario of Billy dealing with the council as sort of like Billy Jack goes to Washington (see the trailer for it if you don't get what I mean) or seeing a Billy Jack influenced Naruto tell Neji where to shove his fate controls our lives philosophy right before telling him what his kick to the face related problem is. I know this whole thing comes off as kind of odd, but what I'm mostly trying to say is simply this, why does everyone only seem to be trying to make crossovers with anime and nothing else when there's all this other stuff out there to do that could be just as interesting if not more? Please reply and tell me what you think. P.S. I wasn't kidding about the Bill Jack/Naruto crossover I'd seriously help co-author that.

But there are plenty of Harry potter and twilight crossovers with Naruto? And I'm pretty sure there are alot more.

Well yeah you're right about the Twilight and Harry Potter thing but there's like nothing else, also for the Harry Potter ones they allmost allways have the same plot of Naruto goes to Hogwarts/is hired to protect Harry which has gotten very old, I just wish people would try some new types of crossovers instead of just redoing the exact same concepts over again without adding anything new to the disscussion.

Show us how to do it then, write your own fic in another crossover section or give a unique idea for it. Thats the best way to get people to try and write it.

I actually thought about trying to write a Naruto/HP crossover. The idea was that Naruto would end up in the HP world and from there just enjoy life. Not really doing anything until Death, or Shinigami approaches him and tells him there are three items to recover, AKA the Deathly Hallows. This would be happening around the middle of the fifth year. Naruto does not become a teacher, guard or otherwise. He is just operating on his own mission, find and secure the three artifacts created by the Shinigami. Through the course of his adventure he meets a strange woman named Susan who will help him out a few times.

Kudos to those who can guess where Susan is from.

I can guess the reason as to why the god of death wants him to do find the items, it wouldn't like the idea of and immortal someone who cheats him.

Well truth be told I wish I could write a fanfic, but in between school and my job I really don't have the time, also what do you mean by give a unique idea for it?

Well truth be told I wish I could write a fanfic, but in between school and my job I really don't have the time, also what do you mean by give a unique idea for it?

Hello, anybody there?

Anyone you say? O.O

It's about 12:14 at the moment but I can safely say I'm here.

Alright, repping a new name. I don't hate naruto, just Kishi. Please, flame away at him.

I'll flame away at Kishi haters. O_O @$$%=1/2becauseikickeditwithrage!!!

What makes Kishimoto so bad if the series doesn't?

Kishi-hater? That's clever, Foxy.

Clever my foot. ***! (flame)

Seriously tho... Is there method to this madness? Why hate Kishi and not Naruto?

Because Kishi set up this awesome universe and world, the naruto world, and made the entire first half of the series awesome. And then he wrote shippuden and just completely let down everyone and screwed up his entire storyline. Thats why Kishi fails.

Well I can't tell you what and what not to like, but I think it's going a bit overboard to hate the guy. In the beginning, people like it; in the end, people don't. So the guy must be a bastard. Honestly, if you don't like the series anymore you don't have to keep up with it.

Its like reading an awesome book, but a sudden twist in the second to last chapter makes it terrible and ruins it for you. You don't stop reading the book, you read that far already, so you might as well finish it. Thats why I keep reading Naruto, I've read this far, I might as well see the series to the end.

Anyways, I've recovered from that brief bought of anger and chosen a real penname. I don't hate Kishi, I just very much dislike the way he's chosen to take this manga at some points.

Anyways, since grumpy deleted the thread for it, posting for top 5 manga can be in here now.

1. Fairy Tail

2. Bakuman

3. Sekirei

4. One Piece

5. Naruto

Ok, I will leavethis alone as long as it doesnt keep going and going, it can only pertain to the top five shounen jump not personal favorites

O.O I always stop reading... but I stop reading when I'm interested sometimes too, so that doesn't say much. I guess I understand where you're coming from though. (I can see the back of Data's head! XD And his reflection in the window!)

Grumpy, I'm gonna start calling you sir now. Your new avatar scares me, sir.

There's a rumor going around the Kishi has announced another time-skip.

Hmm, don't care

I think its likely, considering that a war is about to happen, so preparartion will probably be needed for the villages and Madara.

Hey does anyone know any good crossovers involving any Akatsuki member or Kakashi?

If you saw a heat wave, would you say hello?

should you ever feel the need... i like chicken. And I like disco sticks. you should too. Also, paparasshi is amazing. like starstruck birdies. with cheese in thier teeth. basically, avril laviene is spelled wrong. I love yew Ne-San. :3

Birdies don't have teeth. CX What's paparasshi?

XD I love you too!!! (insert "pweeg" sound effect three times successively to experience this exclamation to the ultimate degree)

I spelled it funny. its true spelling goes as follows. (coughs) o.o PaPaRazzi . I was referring to the song by Missa GAGA. of whom I was listening to at the time. Yeah. And birdies gizzards instead of teeth. they are these little rocks they swallow and carry around in thier throat that grinds up the food that they swallow. n, i never said that they have teeth silleh face. ^_^

Greetings, peeps.

Yo...Long time no see all.

Does this give anyone a story for a Naruto idea or is it just me?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hu_Bi9vcsTw

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