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Hikari-and-Yami
Topic: Beta Readers

So, as the title states, this thread is for people in need of beta readers.

Now, if you are a beta-reader and are interested in a fic you see posted in this thread, then all you need to do is reply saying so. Then you and the author of the fic can take it from there, exchanging documents over email, DocX, or what have you.

If you are the actual author of the fic needing a beta reader, then what you need to do is post on here the title of your story, the pairings, rating, warnings, as well as a short summary. This will give beta-readers the chance to learn a little bit about your story and see if it peaks their interest as something that they would want to take part in (at least the editting process, that is).

This, hopefully, will make the beta process easier, since I know, from personal experience, that it is not an easy task to find a beta reader, nor is it easy for a beta reader to find something that they would actually enjoy reading and editting.

If you happen to be like me, both an author/authoress and a beta reader, then feel free to post your fics in need of betas on here, as well as browse through this thread for fictions to your liking.

Enjoy!

#1 Sep 23rd, 7:13am . Edited Sep 23rd, 7:40am
Hikari-and-Yami

I am currently working on a fic that requires a beta-reader. Unfortunately, I can't give much details right now. The summary is still a work in progress, as well as the first two chapters. But here is all the required info anyways. Let me know if anyone is interested. =]

Decode

There was something off about Atem. I couldn't pinpoint it, but I knew there was more to him than met the eye. And I wouldn't stop until I figured him out.

Rated: T (for Teen). May be raised in future chapters.

Main pairings: Poemshipping (Yuugi x Miho), Puzzle/Blindshipping (Yuugi x Atem)

Side pairings: TBD

Warnings: Violence, Sexual Themes, Language

#2 Sep 23rd, 7:39am
tavia454

*laughs* You know me, I'm always interested in beta-ing for any puzzleshipping fic, just for the break it gives me from my stories and (yeah, I'll admit it) for the sneak-peek at a new fic. I can't promise to get it right back within the same day, but if anyone needs a grammar nazi to look over their work, just let me know. And please, if anyone wants me to beta let me know what it is your looking for (just spelling mistakes, some grammar, or an all-out overhaul that you can put in your own words). 'Cause if I don't know what you're looking for you'll end up with something different then you're looking for. Ciao, tavi

#3 Sep 23rd, 5:59pm
AlwaysYourAibou

I need a beta! /waves hand dramatically in air/. I need one for Freezing Fire

Freezing Fire

Rated: M

Pairings: YYXY, side BXR, SXJ, YMXM

Summary: Hmm....well basically Yugi is caught outside a village in Va Hala, Yami's hell dimension, and is capture for Yami as a pet for his birthday. But Yugi isn't all he appears to be and has some sort of hidden power. Yami's concern is that he wants to "break" Yugi while keeping his spirit intact (hence my title freezing fire...get it? XP). Journey together with these two as they explore the realms of their emotions and learn that things are always as black and white as they appear to be.

Warnings: Yami is so cruel and mean! So um, swearing, blood, dark, and lemon (slight noncon)

#4 Sep 24th, 6:25pm . Edited Sep 24th, 6:28pm
Sabina-san

AlwaysYourAibou, if you're looking for a beta still, I can do it! Just tell me what you're looking for, and I'll see what I can do!

PM me, and I'll send you my e-mail address. ^_^

#5 Sep 28th, 11:53am
AlwaysYourAibou

Thanks so much! Yeah, I am horrible with punctuation and grammar at times. It would be great if you could go over chapters and make sure there are no typos that I missed. And an opinion on the chapter wouldn't hurt either! ;)

#6 Sep 30th, 6:33pm
Sabina-san

Sure thing!

#7 Sep 30th, 6:35pm
tavia454

Ack! I need a super picky grammar nazi, please! My beta is down until further notice as her comp blew up on her and I don't want to stress her out by making her do this in computer lab. So if anyone feels up to taking on another project I could sure use the help. What I'm looking for is ideas for what doesn't sound right, punctuation and spelling...or entire overhaul if its needed. What I basically need is for someone to tell me truthfully if the chap is an epic fail or if its a pass. Anyone interested just PM me or post. Lately me going around with an unbeta'd story is like wandering around Walmart half nekked. *laughs* Seriously, I could use the help...and the motivation. Thanks, tavi

The story is Mistaken Assumptions: Caught in a conflict not of his making as heir to a throne that shouldn't have been his, Yugi finds himself face to face with one of the most feared warriors of all time - The Pharaoh of Egypt. The result was not something he could ever imagine. YxY Yaoi.

Chapter 15: This is a pivotal turn of events that leads to the eventual enslavement of Pharaoh Atemu at the hands of the Hyksos King Yugi.

#8 Oct 02nd, 7:46pm . Edited Oct 02nd, 7:50pm
Sabina-san

Aww...Tavi! *giggles at the comparison* I would love to help out, but I'm going to be out of commission for the next week while I write my 5-10 page paper for school. I might be able to squeeze it in if I get the paper done early. If you can't wait that long, I totally understand. ^^

#9 Oct 02nd, 7:49pm
tavia454

Actually, If you could Sabina I would appreciate it. I can wait if you've got other commitments. Thank you.

#10 Oct 02nd, 7:51pm
Sabina-san

Great! I'll PM you my e-mail address.

I use the new version of Word, just in case you needed to know. ^^

#11 Oct 02nd, 7:57pm
YaoifanRisaMM

Title: Lake Lyn (Maybe I change it..)

Rated: T, but maybe I'll raise it to M later, not sure yet..

Pairings: YamixYugi, BakuraxRyou, SetoxJoey, maybe MarikxMalik and a few others..

Warnings: Violence, language.. XD And I don't own the plot, it belongs to Cassandra Clare^^

Short summary: In a world which on the surface is looking like ours, but under the surface hides the demons, werewolves and vampires, has a group of Shadowhunters vowed to fight the evil..

Full summary: In a world which on the surface is looking like ours, but under the surface hides the demons, werewolves and vampires, has a group of Shadowhunters vowed to fight the evil.. At a nightclub in New York, the 15-year-old Yugi Motou witness a murder, but he discovers that the murdered as well as the murderers are invisible to everyone but himself. Over the next days Yugi's mother disappears without a trace, and he is visited by and must struggle against a cruel furious demon. The Shadowhunter Yami draws him into his mysterious underworld where Yugi must try to find out why the demons are after him - and why he is one of the few who can see the world as it really is.

It would be nice to have a beta XD

#12 Oct 04th, 6:25am . Edited Oct 04th, 6:25am
arashi wolf princess

looking for a beta for my story

Title: Devil in Disguise

Rated: M

Pairings: Puzzle (YamixYugi), slight Tender (BakuraxRyou), Bronze (MarikxMalik), Polar (JouxMai), Stoic (High priest SethxSeto Kaiba), hints of DukexAnzu and MokiexShizukaxNoa friendship

Warnings: Some language, Nudity, bondage, and lemon

Short summary: Halloween is a couple of days a way, the whole gang looking forward to the day of the dead expect Yugi. All the Yamis and the high priest Seth came to visit but not Atemu.

Full Summary: Halloween is a couple of days a way, the whole gang looking forward to the day of the dead expect Yugi. All the Yamis and the high priest Seth came to visit but not Atemu. After his friends persistent Yugi joins the celebrations by dressing up as a devil. As night approaches, he gets a surprise of the lifetime…Atemu in an angel costume. Is it a night of trick or treat for Yugi?

#13 Oct 07th, 9:47pm
Hikari-and-Yami

Hey Risa, I can help you for your story if you still need a beta!

#14 Oct 11th, 4:17pm
YaoifanRisaMM

I don't need a beta anymore XD I found one but thanks..

#15 Oct 11th, 4:27pm
AtemuXSunehri

Ooh! Arashi, if you still need a beta, I would love to help you! My email is , but ill be out of commission most of next week though, i just wanted to tell you.

I NeEd A BeTa

Title : Medieval Love

Rating: T-M, Ill probably change it later.

Warnings: Some nudity, mild sexual situations and a little bit of violence.

Summary: The seductive, charming Yugi Renaud comes back to England to serve as a lady in waiting to the King's sister Anzu. She soon becomes irresistible to King Yami. Will she give into her desires as well as his?

#16 Oct 12th, 10:43pm
Sabina-san

Atemu, I'll beta your story! Just send me a PM, and I'll message you my e-mail. Let me know what you're looking for, and I'll get right on it! ^^

#17 Oct 13th, 12:57pm
Sabina-san

I need a beta for my one-shot! ^^

Title: Our Farewell

Pairing: Puzzleshipping! (Though, I do call Yami 'Atemu' in this story)

Rating: M

Warnings: Lemon!

Summary: Yugi and Atemu never got the chance to say good-bye. Given a second chance, they share the things they never got to share.

It's my first lemon, so I need some constructive criticism for that. I'm also looking for an opinion on the ending. The ending I have works, but I'm not sure if it needs more, or if more would ruin it. ^^

#18 Oct 24th, 10:23pm . Edited Oct 24th, 10:25pm
Hikari-and-Yami

Sabina, I'll beta your oneshot for you =)

#19 Oct 24th, 10:46pm
Sabina-san

Great! Thank you so much! I have Vista with Word 07. Is that going to be a problem for you?

Are there spaces in your e-mail address or is it all one word?

#20 Oct 25th, 8:44am . Edited Oct 25th, 9:16am
Hikari-and-Yami

My email is rayn (underscore) and (underscore) tunder at hotmail dot com. Send it how it is, and I'll see if it is compatible with what I have. =)

#21 Oct 25th, 11:23am
Sabina-san

Will do!

#22 Oct 25th, 11:24am
lucidscreamer

I can't actually give specific details because I'm looking for someone willing to act as a sort of Puzzleshipping beta for various stories, not just a single fic. I already have incredible betas who handle things like grammar, typos, continuity, etc. but none of them are actual Puzzleshippers. D: In fact, none of them even like slash! They all say they'll only read Yami/Yugi if I'm the one writing it, which is a nice ego-boost, but it also presents a bit of a problem. What I need is a beta or betas who would be willing to give me feedback on the shippy, romantic parts of the stories.

All the stories that I'm looking for beta feedback on have: Yami/Yugi (or Atem/Yugi) pairing, no explicit sexual content (nothing more graphic than what's in "1001 Domino Nights" or "Shadows on the Nile", for reference), no sexual violence or kink, um... If you have a specific question or concern, I'd be happy to answer it, but I can't think of anything myself, so...

I specifically would like to have betas for "1001 Domino Nights" and the upcoming sequel to "Shadows on the Nile" (working title: "Reflections in the Nile"), as well as several other WIPs. If anyone is interested in working with me on any of these, please contact me. Thanks!

#23 Oct 25th, 10:48pm
tavia454

I can help if you're still in need of an extra beta, Lucid. Let me know. C'ya - tavi

#24 Oct 26th, 9:16am
Hikari-and-Yami

I can help out too, Lucid, if you need it!

#25 Oct 26th, 9:57am
ZombieBlinky

I need a Beta for High Noon! Kytrin and I have scheduales that conflict at points. She's utterly fabulous at what she does, but I'd only be stressing her out with the additional work ontop of everything else she has going on. Especially during November where I'll be going insane! Anyone interested enough to look at my POS story? High Noon AU Atemu knew that something awful would happen to him at High Noon. Something always did. But when ghost towns mysteriously begin popping up all over the West, Atemu has no choice but to team up with a cranky inventor to find a solution. Or a cause. YAOI Warnings: You have to be able to put up with my strange humor and my even stranger sense of story ideas. Also, I'd like it if you wouldn't mind being a soundboard so I could bounce ideas at you. Thanks to anyone who's interested! ~ZB

#26 Nov 01st, 1:55am
iSparrow

Lucid, it looks like you're in good hands with Tavi and Yuri (also, I trust Dragon with her betaing as much as I trust air to let me breathe), but in case you need someone else, I'm all ears, as well. Good luck!

Zombie, I can't dedicate long amounts of time to focus on fanfiction in the coming weeks/month, but if you want, I can at least chat with you and help you where I can. My email is mckero110 (at) yahoo (dot) com. :)

#27 Nov 01st, 6:44am
lucidscreamer

Thanks, Tavia! I'll PM you when I get back to fic writing. I promised a friend I'd be her NaNoWriMo partner this year, so I won't be able to concentrate on fic until after November, most likely.

#28 Nov 01st, 10:33am
lucidscreamer

Thanks, Hikari-and-Yami! I'd love your help, as well. I prefer to have at least 2 betas look things over, especially for something like this, where it's mostly opinion. Like I said, I have about 4 terrific betas who handle the nuts-and-bolts aspects of the editing process, but I'd love some actual Puzzleshipper feedback before the fic "goes to press" (so to speak). :D I'll PM you and we'll work out the details, okay? It will probably be after November, since I'm committed to NaNoWriMo again this year. Thanks, again!

#29 Nov 01st, 10:36am
tavia454

*nods* Sounds cool. I'm doing the same with a friend of mine so that works for me. Good luck!

#30 Nov 01st, 10:37am
lucidscreamer

Dragon is a great beta, as are my other "regulars", and her feedback is very valuable to me. But, as I said, I sometimes worry about the romantic parts of the story (I'm rather new to writing romances), so having Puzzleshipper feedback would be a great help. If it's all right, I'll add you to the list. Since this is a case of opinion more than mechanics (does it work for you as a reader, rather than is it grammatically correct), I really want multiple opinions. Thanks! I'll send you an email. :)

#31 Nov 01st, 10:40am
lucidscreamer

Tavia: Good luck to you, too! I'm "excelexcel" on the NaNo boards. :)

#32 Nov 01st, 10:41am
Hikari-and-Yami

Ok, Lucid! =) I'm participating in NaNoWriMo (my first time!) too. Good luck to both of you!

#33 Nov 01st, 10:49am
Natoya

I need a beta for my one-shot, tho it may become two or three chapter, depending.

Title: For now it's Dark Lover, but any other suggestions would be lovely.

Pairing: Puzzleshipping or blindshipping, depending on how you want to look at it.

Rating: M

Warnings: There is a lemon in it.

Summary: Weevil claims a vampire lives in the cemetary's mausoleum. To prove him wrong, Yugi and Joey decide to spend the night inside it. Little do they know a vampire does live there... AtemuXYugi lemon

I would like spell check, grammar check, and any helpful suggestions would be appreciated. ^^

#34 Nov 02nd, 1:19pm
ZombieBlinky

Well Natoya, if you still need help I'd be glad to lend you an ear and help where I can :) ~ ZB

#35 Nov 02nd, 4:12pm
Natoya

*glomps ZB* I'd appreciate the help! =D What all are you available to do?

#36 Nov 02nd, 4:27pm
ZombieBlinky

Sorry for disappearing! I zoned out there for a second. I can help you with pretty much whatever you need help with. If you want to talk to me, my email is Shot . of . Sunshine (at) gmail . com

#37 Nov 02nd, 5:18pm
ZombieBlinky

Tempest Gate In the fathomless leagues below, a world quite like our own exists in secret. Two civilzations live in constant war, their battles and skirmishes reflecting in violent storms across the landwellers domain. These two worlds were never meant to come in contact with one another.

Yet when one confused fisherman stumbles across a strange town, he's pulled into a war he was never supposed to be a part of. (AxY) I need someone to look over the chapter and tell me what's wrong with it. How well it flows, grammer, tenses, etc.

#38 Nov 06th, 1:43am
tavia454

I can help ZB if you need it. Can't guarantee to get it back to you in the same day, but I can be close. Let me know

#39 Nov 06th, 4:19pm
ZombieBlinky

Mucho Gracias Tavi! :D I'd love for your help!

#40 Nov 06th, 9:36pm
CrazyAboutYugi

I'm in need of a beta for my upcoming story "No Day But Today".

It''ll contain Puzzleshipping, Tendershipping, Danceshipping, slight Rivalshipping and Polarshipping, and mentions of Yami romantically with another character (still working on that one). It will also deal with the subject of AIDS and contain one character death.

Pretty heavy stuff, I know. If anyone is interested, please, just send me a PM or if you know me on FB drop me a message there or send me an IM. Any method works (:

#41 Nov 08th, 3:26am
Hikari-and-Yami

Well, aibou, you know I'm always here if you need a beta! =)

#42 Nov 08th, 9:21pm
Shamise

I finally finished typing up the sequel to Soul Eater and I would love it if someone could look over it for me.

#43 Nov 09th, 2:25pm
Natoya

I need a beta for my newest fic.

Title: Only Mine

Pairing: Blindshipping (AtemuXYugi)

Rating: M

Warnings: In the future will contain a lemon, romance, slight angst.

Summary: Cursed to become a pleasure slave by a woman he refused to marry, Atemu is sent into the future for his own safety and his box ends up in the hands of Yugi Mouto. (Crap summary, I know.)

This story is very special to me, so aside from the normal spell and grammar check, I would like someone to look this over and tell me if they spot anything wrong or if something doesn't make sense. Banter suggestions with me. Please send me a message if you're interested.

#44 Nov 20th, 5:05pm
tavia454

I can do it if you need someone Toya. *grins*

#45 Nov 20th, 5:37pm
AtemuXSunehri

If you still need someone, I could do it. Ok, I need a beta for my 2 new fic. Tell me which one do you think is better...

Name: Under Compulsion

Rated: M

Summary: Yugi is unwillingly turned into a succubus and becomes Yami's sex slave forever. Puzzleshipping

Warnings: PWP, Lots of sex, language

~~~~~~~~~~~

Name: Choices That Hurt

Summary: Yugi is not really who you think he is. He is in fact the Crown Prince of Carinthia. No one knows that.....except Sunehri, his sister, the Princess. When Yami and the gang decides to ignore him. What will he do? Will he leave Domino and leave the man he loves? Or will he decide a better option in his opinion? What will happen when a face from Egypt reappears in Domino, bearing a warning?

Rated: M

Warnings: Lemon at the end, language, attempted suicide.

#46 Nov 20th, 6:01pm
ZombieBlinky

I'll edit for your fics if you still need someone :)

#47 Nov 20th, 7:32pm
AtemuXSunehri

I'm going to do Da Vinci Code: Yu-Gi-Oh style!!! Puzzleshipping, of course!!! I have to think....

Langdon-Yami

Sophie-Yugi (he'll be a guy)

Bishop Aringarosa- Aknaudin

Sister Sandrine-Mai

Collet- Joey

Bezu Fache-Seto ( so he's sort of a bad guy)

Remy- Alister

Jacques Sauniere-Grandpa

Silas-Bakura

Teabing-Dartz

Andre Vernet-???(Give me idea!!)

If anyone wants to be my beta for this one, let me know, I'll need a few I think....

#48 Nov 26th, 10:20pm
tavia454

Ok, I'm looking for a beta for the fic I'm working on right now. This is a short Christmas fic in which no cliche will be left untouched and it will probably make you want to gag with all its fluffiness. ^^

Title: A Christmas to Remember

Plot: Anzu loves her guys. Yugi and Atemu. But when she notices the looks that they give each other while they think no one's paying attention the gears in her head begin to turn. Maybe this could be the yaoi love story of her dreams. Unfortunately for her match-making attempts an old friend decides that she wants in the running for Atemu's heart as well.

This will still be rated M, just in case of a little more than fluff, but even if I don't go there I'm going to keep the rating for the gang's mouth and other little details

#49 Dec 02nd, 5:10pm . Edited Dec 02nd, 5:11pm
Sabina-san

*jumps up and down* Oo! Pick me, Tavi! I LOVE fluff!!!

#50 Dec 02nd, 5:17pm


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