This is where it all started Chris and Claire Redfield's Home City where the zombies first started to appear now come and join the mayhem.

The school was in a panic and kept the kids in hoping to save them from the now on coming threat, and among the fightened children, there stud little Suzie valentine "sister be safe..." she muttered as she hid in a closet

Louise had been in a concert when the attack had started, not knowing what to do she headed out into the street. She didn't have to walk far till she vame to the school most likely with scared kids inside she thought quicklty she wne t inside and found a room with a few teenagers inside " Ok this is awkward" she mumbled to herself.

"we're all gonna die....we're all gonna die...." Suzie muttered as she hid in the closet still

Lousie was sure she had heard mumbling comign from a nearby closest and she swiftly opened " We are not going to die the Racoon City police and Star's members are doign everything they can" said Louise smiling at teenager. " My name's Lousie Hall by the way"

Suize looked up at the new commer "my name is suzie...suzie valentine" she said politely as she came out of the closet

" Valentine?" said Lousie thinking out loud " Are you by any chance related to Jill Valentine?" as she gave Suzie some space to move.

"yeah she's my big sister" suizie replied smiling

" Cool" said Lousie nodding " Come on, we better head to the police station grab whatever you can use as a weapon" instructed Lousie as she grabbed a metre stick from the corner of the classroom.

"uhm... ok" Suzie replied, she pulled her cellphone out of her pocket and dialed a number and waited for a reply

Lousie raised an eyebrow and asked " Who could you be phoning at this time?"

"my sister" suzie said she then got an answer "hello---yeah sis it's me----yeah i'm fine---i'm at the school------we're going to come to the station-----my new friend lousie and I------yeah ok you be safe too----bye" suzie closed the phone and looked at lousie "my sister is going to wait for us there"

" Ok" answred Lousie " Have you ever heard of the Redfield family by any chance?" she asked as she lead the way to Racoon City police station.

suzie fallowed looking around franticly "yeah i have.... chris and clare right?" suzie said as she looked around still

" Yep, well I'm there cousin" answered Lousie as she walked into the police station with Suzie close behind.

jill appered around a corner with her gun out "halt!" she said point the gun a them "sister it's me" Suzie said pering around Lousie, "oh suzie you scared me" jill said as suzie came and hugged her

Louise stood there smiling and commented to Jill " Lucky your younger sister was here otherwise I would have probably had a bullet through my head"

"yeah sorry but with this outbreak we have to be careful" Jill said smiling as she put her gun away for now suzie smiled "oh sis this is my new friend louise" suzie said returning back beside louise

" Hi " Louise said to Jill " Suzie I'm pretty sure you don't have to hide behind me anymore especially with all these guys around" as she turned to face Suzie.

"i know..." suzie said looking at the ground "suzie has always been like that so it's normal" jill commented "i have not" suzie snaped at her "easy there tiger i was just joking around" jill said laughing

Louise chuckled at the two sisters arguing " So what's the plan" asked Louise facing Jill with a hint of determination.

"first things first we need to find survivers then get out of here" Jill said now serious, suzie smiled but then turned as she heard a trast can fall "what was that???!?!?!!!!" she said/asked scared

" I'll go check it out" said Louise as she quietly walked over to where the noise came from trying not to panic herself.

"here use this" jill said tossing the gun so it lands by her foor but doesn't shoot off, Suzie was standign there shaking

" Thanks" said Louise as she slowly crouched down to pick up the gun Let's just hope I can use it she thought as she rounded the corner she could hear moaning she quickly checked round the corner and saw that it looked human Must me a survivor she thought " Hey Valentine we got a survivor!" shouted Louise. Louise turned her attention back to the moaning human " It's ok help's on its way" said Louise as she got closer to the survivor but before she could even think of shooting the gun that Jill had give her the 'survivor' it tried to bite on the kneck "Woah!" shouted Louise as she tried to get out if it's way.

jill quickly ran out and shot the 'survivor' in the head 3 times before it died "that was no survivor... one who waws infected... we have to go now!" jill said, suzie fallowed then looked around "how are we going to get out tho?" suzie asked but then a another moan came out of no where, suize turned "it's one of them!" she shouted scared

" How on earth do you use this thing?" shouted Louise in frustration as she got the gun out and tried to figure how it worked.

"point and pull the trigger" jill said shooting another one of the infected people, suzie backed up beside jill scared as normal

" Ok then" said Louise in a worried tone as she carefully pointed the gun at one of the infected and shot it in the chest but the infected carried on coming " What!? Why aren't they dieing!? shouted Louise as she continued to rapidly shoot at the same infected.

"aim at the head if you cut off the curculation to the brain they die" jill said kicking an infected, suzie took a deep breath and jumped on an infected and snaped it's neck with a move she learned from karate

" Got it" said Louise " But I'm not tidying up after this mess" she said sarcastically as she shot two infected coming towards her. As the room began to fill with infected Louise commented " Ok I'm getting a bit claustrophobic in here" as she frantically looked " I think we better move"

suzie was able to quickly get through a group of the zombies she found a grenade sitting on a desk "odd place to put a grenade" she commented "fire in the hole!" she shouted pulling the fuse and tossed it out towards the group of zombies , jill quickly grabed Louise and covered her as the grenade went off

Louise frantically let go of Jill's grasp, and stood in the middle of the room where the zombies now lay " Ha!" as she kicked one of the blood covered corpses near her. Louise quickly looked around the room and cleared her throat, looked at Jill and ask " On a more serious note have you heard anything from Chris or Claire Redfield?"

Jill got up "i've heard from his recently but i'm not sure where he is tho" she said smiling, Suzie walked out smiling "we should get going"

(how about you contirol chris????)

Louise nodded as she finally put her gun away.

( i'm not sure I'm not the best at playing charchters I'm not used maybe next time Wendigo- Hunter is on he could be him but possib;y for now we cpuld save Chris for later)

(ah ok ^^)

Suize walked out and spoted a truck, jill smiled as she walked out "louise you know how to drive?" she asked looking over to louise

" Well I've only just passed my test, I'll probably end up crashing or something but I'll see what I can do" she said as she looked at how big the truck was.

"well lets see how you do" jill said as she got suzie into the car and a handed louise the keys

Louise gulped as she got in the car and started the engine " So where to exactly?" asked Louise as she pulled out of the parking space spotted a zombie and ran it over. Blaze burst out laughing as blood splattered all over the windscreen.

"lets get to the edge of racoon city" jill said as she shot a few zombies, suzie hid her face scared

" What good is that going to do us? Anyway there's got to be more survivors than just us" replied Louise as she skidded the truck round a corner " I mean if I can survive I'm sure plenty of other people can".

"ok then lets head somewhere like a mall" suzie said, jill nodded in agreement and shot a few zombies that jumped on the truck

(i'm gunna stop here for now because i can't really handle 2 fourms right now... is that ok?)

( yeah don't worry about just tell me when you're ready to continue)

(okay)

(Right...... summary please....)

( basically my charchter Louise and Tenshi's charchters Suzie and Jill are in the middle of the zombie outbreak and we are currently driving in a truck towards the mall for somewhere safe to hide).

(Right.... if you need me I'll be in the mall......)

Ozzy hid behind the counter in a small shop she'd barricaded herself in. "Stupid dead guys." She said.

( Are you going to be joining Tenshi or are you going to give it a miss? Just so I have a better idea of what to do.)

(i'm here)

Jill shot more zombies and suzie was hidding still

Louise suddenly slammed her foot on the brake, as she lurched forward she said happily " Here we are".

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