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LinziDay

Topic: First Line Challenge

I was dying for a challenege (I also wanted the great give-and-take that comes with a challenge) but I couldn't find any recent ones. So I started this one!

It's a first line challenege. Pick one of the lines below and run with it. Or throw out some creative lines of your own. Let the forum know when your story's up.

Have fun! :)

- McKay was... unusual... as a child.

- He knew blue Jello, and blue Jello couldn't do that.

- If they ever got out of this, he vowed to make it up to her.

- Rock, paper, scissors was a hard game.

- Beckett was immune.

- Sheppard hated baseball.

- The rabbits were ravenous.

#1 Oct 31st 2007, 6:13pm

Miss Pookamonga

Haa, nice, those are good! I already have some ideas ^_^

#2 Oct 31st 2007, 7:28pm

LinziDay

Yay! :) Thanks.

#3 Oct 31st 2007, 7:43pm

LinziDay

Oops, these first lines were missing from my list. Darn inadequate copy-and-paste....

- Rodney McKay stopped talking.

- On Tuesday, he decided it was time.

- Something went boom.

#4 Oct 31st 2007, 8:51pm

Ianira Ianthe

Here are some lines...

- I had a dream once.

- Just go.

- And now I wait.

- Get to the Jumper.

- Forgiveness is difficult to give.

- I miss the snow on Earth.

- Don’t panic.

- Innocence never lasts long here.

- Has McKay lost his mind?

- You’re such a child.

- I’m a hypocrite.

- I'm not here for your entertainment.

- That was the day he died.

#5 Nov 04th 2007, 1:09pm

LinziDay

Lol. I love "I'm not here for your entertainment."

#6 Nov 04th 2007, 2:36pm

kuroima

First I have to say that this is a very good idea and I love some of these lines. Especially He knew blue Jello, and blue Jello couldn't do that from LinziDay.

I started to write some short lines to this. The product is a disturbing little Stargate Atlantis fanfiction with John/Elizabeth. I hope you like it LinziDay. :)

Here'S the link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3993303/1/The_very_odd_behaviour_of_blue_Jello

#7 Jan 05th 2008, 9:28am

DarkDayDreams

Does the challenge have to be short, long or in between.

#8 Jan 13th 2008, 4:40pm

LinziDay

Any and all lengths welcome!

#9 Jan 13th 2008, 5:31pm

LinziDay

Great story! Unique POV. . . for blue Jello I imagined Rodney, but Sheppard worked so well!

#10 Jan 13th 2008, 5:32pm

DarkDayDreams

Sorry to bother people with questions, but can we use OCs?

#11 Jan 13th 2008, 6:04pm

LinziDay

No bother! And sure, OCs are fine.

#12 Jan 13th 2008, 6:05pm

DarkDayDreams

Well, I put my story up. Check it out. It was for the line by lakewater That was the day he died.

#13 Jan 16th 2008, 8:39am

DarkDayDreams

Hey I have some lines....

1) No one knew his secret...

2) Mckay started crying...

3) No way was he going to confess...

#14 Jan 19th 2008, 12:14pm

LinziDay

Great idea for the line!!

#15 Jan 19th 2008, 7:46pm

LinziDay

Ooh, these are good!

#16 Jan 19th 2008, 7:47pm

A Hopless Romantic

KNow I'm going to have to try some thing with these...^^

#17 Feb 16th 2008, 9:45am

NightEternal

It's an old challenge, but I'd like to give it a shot. ^^

#18 Nov 24th, 9:04pm

NightEternal

Here it is. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5533702/1/I_Had_A_Dream_Once

#19 Nov 24th, 9:46pm

LinziDay

Cool!

*scurries off to read*

#20 Nov 25th, 9:23am

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