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WinterfoxTopic: We've our first batch of awful pron~ FR erotica Engagement Troubles The first consists of a half-elf being raped repeatedly by giants. I'm pretty sure it violates the TOS, but what the hell, not my business. It's pretty blah and cliched, as far as rape/abuse stories go, complete with massive doomcocks, forced oral as "dinner" and all that fun stuff. I'm pretty sure the author was writing it one-handed. The second contains Lolth/Drizzt rape. Where Drizzt, apparently, has hymen on his dick ("his barrier crumbled") and Lolth has spherical breasts (can you tell the author's never seen a real breast?). What makes it particularly special is that the author's profile states that he wants to "find a girlfriend. Period." Good luck, boyo. The writing is also execrable, but that pales before the loltastic "smut." | #1 Nov 04th 2007, 8:49am . Edited Nov 04th 2007, 8:50am | |
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TobyKikamiI didn't actually read the first one (or the second, for that matter) but what got me about the summary was that it specified that the heroine was an "attractive" half-elf. Puts me in mind of the Universal Racial Beauty Standard. How many female orcs and goblins have immense self-loathing issues, one wonders. And the title is somewhat... generic, isn't it? Though, admittedly, it's quite straightforward. |
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WinterfoxWell, that and it's terribly honest, as titles go. The author of the second one, hilariously, replied to my review with a lot of cussing. Oh, children. | #3 Nov 04th 2007, 12:47pm | |
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Surreptitious Chi X*laughs* *just laughs* |
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