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Winterfox
Topic: We've our first batch of awful pron~
FR erotica

Engagement Troubles

The first consists of a half-elf being raped repeatedly by giants. I'm pretty sure it violates the TOS, but what the hell, not my business. It's pretty blah and cliched, as far as rape/abuse stories go, complete with massive doomcocks, forced oral as "dinner" and all that fun stuff. I'm pretty sure the author was writing it one-handed.

The second contains Lolth/Drizzt rape. Where Drizzt, apparently, has hymen on his dick ("his barrier crumbled") and Lolth has spherical breasts (can you tell the author's never seen a real breast?). What makes it particularly special is that the author's profile states that he wants to "find a girlfriend. Period." Good luck, boyo. The writing is also execrable, but that pales before the loltastic "smut."

#1 Nov 04th 2007, 8:49am . Edited Nov 04th 2007, 8:50am
TobyKikami
I didn't actually read the first one (or the second, for that matter) but what got me about the summary was that it specified that the heroine was an "attractive" half-elf. Puts me in mind of the Universal Racial Beauty Standard. How many female orcs and goblins have immense self-loathing issues, one wonders.

And the title is somewhat... generic, isn't it? Though, admittedly, it's quite straightforward.

#2 Nov 04th 2007, 9:34am
Winterfox
Well, that and it's terribly honest, as titles go.

The author of the second one, hilariously, replied to my review with a lot of cussing. Oh, children.

#3 Nov 04th 2007, 12:47pm
Surreptitious Chi X

*laughs* *just laughs*

#4 Nov 23rd, 12:39am

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