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Crazed Miko
Topic: Life Before the future a fry story
Ok, this is a really funny story! It's called, 'Life Before The Future: A Fry Story' It's in the Fry and Leela section and it's rated M. Even tho, it hasn't been updated for a while, but its a really really really really really funny and I've talked to the author and he said it would get updated if he had any reviews, so what are ya'll waiting for!?!?!? Hurry up and review so he can update!!!
#1 Feb 11th 2006, 5:13pm
Speciall Ed
I've read that story. It was a little funny, but not really. The information was wrong. While that's not too horrible, the biggest problem I had was the grammar. I had to read some lines three times to figure out what was being said. I don't like leaving a lot of criticism in a review, so I didn't review it. If the author considered rewritting it with improved grammar, I'd look at it again. Once that's fixed, I'd be glad to review the story, but right now it's too hard to read.
#2 Mar 02nd 2006, 2:47pm . Edited Jun 13th 2006, 2:43pm
Super King
Can't say I've read the story yet, will probably give it a look sometime.

Can't say I'm in much position to comment on grammar/spelling seeing as on my latest one I've spelt the word 'Mayor' with a 'j' constantly...always had an almost blind spot with that word you could say, spelt it like that all my life and noone ever bothered to pick me up on it until dead composer did, to which I thank him for! And I haven't ceased work on the fic despite it sinking to the bottom of page one, just haven't had the time to really get going on the fourth part. Rest assured however, hopefully it will be here sooner rather than later...with the revised spelling of 'mayor' too!

#3 Aug 04th 2006, 2:51am
Heladia
CAN I READ IT?!?!?!
#4 Feb 02nd 2008, 7:36pm
microwaved noodles

No. You can absolutely not read it. You are forbidden.

#5 May 11th 2008, 4:53pm

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